1.

Look at camera, audio, editing

 After watching “Soot Mesh Masmoua” I have concluded some comments on the
camera, audio and editing. First to start with the camera and the position of it at most
of the scenes was convenient and showed all the angels that need to be shown. Second
the audio, I didn’t like the sound in my scenes. There was a sound echo in the
characters voice, especially when they were shouting and in some places, that had
other sounds in the background, like the scene of the art gallery with Malka and Anas.
In some scenes, the voice of some characters was not clear that the others, for
example Malak voice was lower in some scene that Maya and vice versa, maybe that
was because of the mics.
2. How does the narrative development work?
 I believe that the narrative development work was overall good, the part when Maya
knew the death of her parents and sister needed more details to help the ending.

3. Write up a list of pros and cons

Pros:
 The message behind the story is very emotional and expressive.
 The acting of all the actors and actresses is great, especially the actress that played
Maya’s role.
 How the writer should the sisters’ relationship was very deep.
Cons:
 The audio throughout the film needs to be clearer.
 How the writer developed the death for Maya’s family needs more details.
 The end also needs more details, like what happened to Maya and Anas.