Theme Thread Monitoring Sheet

Focus Numbers/Areas to Improve

#1 Problem in theme: not a theme, too simple, scenes don’t match theme
#2 Problem with purpose: summary instead of theme thread
#3 Missing the scene descriptions
#4 Missing the theme connection: doesn’t show HOW the scene shows theme
#5 Problem in organization: does not match the pattern, missing scenes or topic sentence or conclusion
#6 GREAT structure….time to work on deeper content

Topic Focus Number/Area to improve Teacher Comments

MacBeth Theme Thread

Theme Thread #1
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Movie/Book Theme
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1st Draf

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Movie/Book Theme
Thread

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highlighted)

Goal for the next theme thread: For the next theme thread, my goal is to
Theme Thread #2

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Novel Theme
Thread
(Oct 1 or 2)

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Theme Thread # 3
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Theme Thread #4

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Theme Thread #5

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Theme Thread #6

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Theme Thread #7

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