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Section B (ii)
Formatted
Writing
This module is designed for the GALUS
students which have D and E in their
result for Paper 2 especially those
who always get “zero” for Section C.
It is a scripted writing where students
need to memorize the templates. We
believe that later on, these students
will be able to construct the sentences
by themselves.

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CHAPTER 1

Section B (ii)
Formatted
Writing
MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 45)

A GOOD PARAGRAPH

MAIN IDEA
The key concept of a paragraph

SUPPORTING DETAIL
Explain the main idea by
providing details and
M Y REFERE N CE : Y E A R 6 T E X T B O O K (P AGE 56)

A GOOD PARAGRAPH

CONCLUDING SENTENCE
• Summarises the main idea of
the paragraph.
• Written in a single sentences
using your own words.
• The last sentence in a
paragraph.
• Should not introduce any new
ideas.
• May use linking words such as
so, thus, therefore and hence.
MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 99)

A GOOD COMPOSITION

Have a good organization of


paragraphs.

Usually have FIVE paragraphs.

1st paragraph : The Introduction

2nd , 3rd & 4th paragraphs :


The body

5th paragraph : The conclusion


MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 108)

Each Paragraph should contain :


Main Idea
Supporting Detail
Conclusion

A good composition should


have 5 paragraphs.

Each composition should


contain :
1st paragraph : The Introduction
2nd – 4th paragraph : The Body
5th paragraph : The Conclusion

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CHAPTER 2

Section B (ii)
Formatted
Writ
SAMPLE QUESTION FOR SECTION B

S E CT I O N B = 15 marks

B(i) = 3 marks :
Information transfer

B(ii) = 12 marks :
Formatted Writing
MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 47)

T H E ST E PS

Study the question given.

Elicit the keywords using the


F-T-C Method.

Write the draft using the


M-I-S-D Table.

Check spelling and grammar.


Write in the space provided.
NOTES F OR G AL U S PUPILS

For GALUS pupils, just focus on getting them


to write the main idea first.

They just need to write 1 to 3 paragraphs


only.

They need to memorize the templates with


the scripted sentences. In order to do that,
exercises should be given on weekly basis.

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CHAPTER 3

Section B (ii)
Formatted
W
THE TYPES OF FOMATTED WRITING

Informal E-mail Message


Letter

Formal Notice
Postcard
Letter

Speech

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CHAPTER 4

Section B (ii)
Formatted
Writing
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M Y REFERE N CE : Y E A R 5 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 66)


THE TEMPLATE : WRITING AN INFORMAL LETTER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

Salutation Dear___________________ ,

1st Paragraph How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell
(Greeting) you about ___________________________________________________ .
(copy the keywords from the question given).

MI
1
2nd Paragraph SD
(Content) MI
2
MI = Main Idea SD
SD = Supporting
Detail MI
3
SD

3rd Paragraph That is all from me. Take care! Bye!

Signing off & Sincerely,


Name of the _____________
writer

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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING AN INFORMAL LETTER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

Salutation

1st Paragraph
(Greeting)

MI
1
2nd Paragraph SD

(Content) MI
2
MI = Main Idea SD
SD = Supporting
Detail MI
3
SD

3rd Paragraph

Signing off &


Name of the
writer

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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS
1. Identify the format.
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom).
F
3. Identify the content.
T
1. The format :
informal letter 2. The
target :
C
friend
Sample Question :

You and your family went to Kuala Terengganu last school holiday. Write
an informal letter to your friend about at least 3 places you have visited
there. Write your answer between 50 to 80 words.

3. The Content :
places visited
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T H E S A M P L E A N S W E R (MISD TABL E)

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Salutation Dear Khalida,

1st Paragraph How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell
(Greeting) you about interesting places you can visit in Kuala
Terengganu. (taken from the question)

MI Pasar Besar Kedai Payang


1 shopped local products and tasted traditional
2nd Paragraph SD food
(Content)
MI Bukit Puteri
MI = Main Idea 2
SD = Supporting SD watch panaromic view
Detail MI Batu Buruk Beach
3
SD flying kites and building sandcastles

3rd Paragraph That is all from me. Take care! Bye!

Signing off & Sincerely,


Name of the Aqeef
writer

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2 1

THE SAMPLE ANSWER

No. 19, Kg. Kuala Teh,


27000 Jerantut,
Pahang.

3 July 2019

Dear Khalida,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you about
interesting places you can visit in Kuala Terengganu.
Firstly, you must not miss visiting Pasar Besar Kedai Payang. You can shop
local products and tasted traditional food. Then, you can go to Bukit Puteri.
You can watch panaromic view there. Last but not least, you can go to Batu
Buruk Beach to see flying kites and building sandcastles.
That is all from me. Take care! Bye!

Sincerely,
Aqeef
(85 words)
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M Y REFER EN CE : Y E A R 4 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 26)


T H E T E M P L A T E : W R I T I N G A N E -M A I L

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

To: << email address >>

Subject : << refer to the question >>

Salutation Hi___________________,

1st Paragraph << use the information from the question >>
(Greeting)

MI
1
2nd Paragraph SD
(Content) MI
2
MI = Main Idea SD
SD = Supporting
Detail MI
3
SD

3rd Paragraph Thank you. Hope to see you soon.

Signing off << name >>

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T H E B L A N K T E M P L A T E : W R I T I N G A N E -M A I L

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

To :

Subject :

Salutation

1st Paragraph
(Greeting)

MI
1
2nd Paragraph SD
(Content) MI
2
MI = Main Idea SD
SD = Supporting
Detail MI
3
SD

3rd Paragraph

Signing off

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T H E S A M P L E QU E ST I ON

Read the flyer below. Answer the question that follow in the space provided.
Baca risalah di bawah. Kemudian jawab soalan-soalan yang berikutnya di ruang yang disediakan.

CHESS CLUB BADMINTON CLUB


every Saturday and Sunday every Wednesday and Friday
8.30 a.m. – 10.30 a.m. 8.30 p.m. – 10.00 p.m.
National Library Community Hall
RM80 monthly RM50 monthly
develop problem solving skills build strength and stamina
learn to be patient and focus promote physical fitness
teaching self-discipline help to reduce stress

B (i) State three advantages of joining the Chess Club.


Nyatakan tiga kelebihan menyertai Kelab Catur.

(a)

(b)

(c)

[3 marks]

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S A M P L E Q UE STION

B (ii) Your best friend is planning to choose a club. Write an e-mail to your friend to suggest him /
her the best club for him / her.
Write your answer between 50 and 80 words.
Kawan baik kamu sedang merancang untuk memilih sebuah kelab. Tulis emel kepadanya untuk mencadangkan
kelab yang terbaik untuknya.
Panjangnya jawapan kamu hendaklah antara 50 hingga 80 patah perkataan.

_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________

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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS
1. Identify the format.
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom).
F
3. Identify the content.
T
2. The
target :
best friend
1. The
format :
e-mail
C
B (ii) Your best friend is planning to choose a club. Write an e-mail to your friend to suggest him /
her the best club for him / her.
Write your answer between 50 and 80 words.
Kawan baik kamu sedang merancang untuk memilih sebuah kelab. Tulis emel kepadanya untuk mencadangkan
kelab yang terbaik untuknya.
Panjangnya jawapan kamu hendaklah antara 50 hingga 80 patah perkataan.

3. The
Content :
the best
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_________________________________________________________________________________
T H E S A M P L E A N S W E R (MISD TABL E)

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

To: nita@gmail.com

Subject : Badminton Club

Salutation Hi Nita,

1st Paragraph I heard that you are planning to choose a club. I would like
(Greeting) to suggest the Badminton Club.
(the red words were taken from the question)

MI It starts at 8.30 p.m. and finishes at 10.30 p.m.


1
2nd Paragraph SD It is convenience to you.
(Content) MI It will be at the Community Hall.
2
MI = Main Idea SD It is near to your house.
SD = Supporting
Detail MI The fee is only RM50 monthly.
3
SD It is reasonable and worthy.

3rd Paragraph Thank you. Bye!

Signing off Nurul

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

To : nita@gmail.com
Subject : Badminton Club
Hi Nita,
I heard that you are planning to choose a club. I would like to
suggest the Badminton Club.
It starts at 8.30 p.m. and finishes at 10.30 p.m. It is
convenience to you. It will be at the Community Hall. It is
near to your house. The fee is only RM50 monthly. It is
reasonable and worthy.
Thank you. Hope to see you soon.
Nurul.
(67 words – starting from “Hi Nita”)

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M Y REFERE N CE : Y E A R 4 T E X T B O O K (P AGE 79)


T H E T E M P L A T E : WR I TI N G A M E S S A G E

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

Salutation & Name Dear____________________,


of Receiver

1 Introduction : taken from the question

Content 2
(Refer to the
question) 3

4 Closing

Closing Sincerely

Name of the ______________________


writer

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TH E B L A N K T E M P L A T E : W RITING A M E S S A G E

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

Salutation & Name


of Receiver

Content 2
(Refer to the
question) 3

Closing

Name of the
writer

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T H E S A M P L E QU E ST I ON

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR


Terbitan Bestari
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T H E S A M P L E QU E ST I ON

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR


Terbitan Bestari
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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS
1. Identify the format.
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom).
F
3. Identify the content.
T
1. The
format :
message
2. The target :
cousin - Lily
C

3. The Content : the


Maryam’s birthday party
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THE SA M P LE A N S W E R

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

Salutation & Name Dear Lily,


ofReceiver (the name was taken from the question)

1 I would like to invite you to attend Maryam’s


birthday party with me.

2 The party will be held on Sunday, April 22nd from 2.00


Content p.m. until 4.00 p.m. It is at Mutiara Hotel, Johor Bahru.

(Refer to the It is a costume party. We will enjoy the musical


question) 3 performance and the magic tricks there. There will
also be delicious party food.

4 I hope you can come with me. See you soon.

Closing Sincerely,

Name Putri
(the name was taken from the question)

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

Dear Lily,

I would like to invite you to attend Maryam’s birthday party


with me. The party will be held on Sunday, April 22nd from
2.00 p.m. until 4.00 p.m. It is at Mutiara Hotel, Johor Bahru.
It is a costume party. We will enjoy the musical
performance and the magic tricks there. There will also
be delicious party food. I hope you can come with me.
See you soon.

Sincerely,
Putri
(72 words)

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M Y REFER EN CE : Y E A R 6 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 88)


THE TEMPLATE : WRITING A FORMAL LETTER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

Sender’s Address

Date

Receiver’s Address

Salutation Dear___________________ ,

Subject << refer to the question >>

I am writing __________________________________________________
(refer to the question)
Body (capital letters for the 1st letter in each word)

Thank you.

Complementary Yours sincerely,


Closure

Signature

Sender’s Name << write in capital letters >>

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T H E B L A N K T E M P L A T E : W RI T IN G A F O R M A L L ET T E R

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

Sender’s Address

Date

Receiver’s Address

Salutation

Subject

Body

Complementary
Closure

Signature

Sender’s Name

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T H E S A M P L E QU E ST I ON

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR


Terbitan Bestari
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T H E S A M P L E QU E ST I ON

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR


Terbitan Bestari
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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS
1. Identify the format.
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom).
F
3. Identify the content.
T
1. The format :
formal letter
2. The target :
other school
C

3. The Content : to join the


fund-raising carnival
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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
SK Seri Setia,
Jalan Setia 6,
Sender’s Address Taman Setia Indah,
46150 Petaling Jaya,
Selangor.
Date 27 May 2019
SK Bandar Baru Pulai,
Receiver’s Address Jalan Pulai Utama,
Bandar Baru Pulai,
55200 Kuala Lumpur.
Salutation Dear Headmaster,
Subject Invitation to our Annual Fund-Raising Carnival
I am writing to inform you that our school is organizing
our Annual Fund-Raising Carnival. I wish to have your school
to join us at the event. The details are as follow :
Body Date : 10th June 2019
Event : Cooking contest
Venue : School Hall, SK Seri Setia Teacher-In-
Charge : Miss Nita (017-9071022)

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
2. We would like to invite 10 teachers with 40 pupils to the
event. The teachers and pupils can bring additional
Body contributions like books, clothes and toys.

Thank you.
Complementary Yours sincerely,
Closure

Signature Nita
Sender’s Name (AZNITAAHMAD)

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

SK Seri Setia, Date : 10th June 2019


Jalan Setia 6, Event : Cooking contest
Taman Setia Indah, Venue : School Hall, SK Seri Setia
46150 Petaling Jaya, Teacher-In-Charge :
Selangor. Miss Nita (017-9071022)

27 May 2019 2. We would like to invite 10 teachers


with 40 pupils to the event. The teachers
and pupils can bring additional
contributions like books, clothes and toys.
SK Bandar Baru Pulai,
Jalan Pulai Utama, Thank you.
Bandar Baru Pulai,
55200 Kuala Lumpur.
Yours sincerely,

Dear Headmaster,
Nita
(AZNITA AHMAD)
Invitation to our Annual Fund-Raising
Carnival

I am writing to inform you that our


school is organizing our Annual Fund-
Raising Carnival. I wish to have your school
to join us at the event. The details are as
follow :
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M Y REFERENCE : Y E AR 5 T EXTBOOK (PAGE 6)


THE TEMPLATE : WRITING A POSTCARD

1 TEMPLATE
PARAGRAPH

Salutation& The receiver


Name of Dear____________________, address
Receiver
Greeting : How are you? I
hope you are doing well. I am
writing to tell you about
1
_______________________________ .
Content (copy the keywords from
(Refer to the question given).
the
question) 2
3
Closing : That is all from me. _________________________________
4
Take care! Bye! _________________________________
Closing Sincerely
_________________________________
Name of ______________________
the writer _________________________________

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T H E B L A N K T E M P L A T E : W RITING A P O S T C A R D

1 TEMPLATE
PARAGRAPH

Salutation& The receiver


Name of address
Receiver

1
Content
(Refer to
the
question) 2
3

Closing

Name of
the writer

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T H E S A M P L E QU E ST I ON

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR


Terbitan Bestari
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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS
1. Identify the format.
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom).
F
3. Identify the content.
T
1. The
format :
postcard
2. The target :
friend C

3. The Content : experience wearing


hanbok during a recent trip to Korea
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THE SA M P LE A N S W E R

1 TEMPLATE
PARAGRAPH

Salutation & HiNurulAlisa, The receiver


Name of (taken from the question) address
Receiver
How are you? I hope you are doing
well. I am writing to tell you about
1
my experience wearing a hanbok
during a recent trip to Korea.

Content It was a Korean traditional


(Refer to 2 costume and it was coloured using
the natural dyes.
question) It had vibrant colours and simple
3
line without pockets. NurulAlisa
It was hard to move around and 9, Jalan 20,
4
requires a lot of practices.

5 That is all from me. Take care! Bye! Taman Bestari,


Closing Sincerely 68100 Batu Caves,
Name of Nita Selangor.
the writer

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THE SA M P LE A N S W E R

Hi Nurul Alisa,

How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am

writing to tell you about my experience wearing a

hanbok during a recent trip to Korea. It was a

Korean traditional costume and it was coloured

using natural dyes. It had vibrant colours and

simple line without pockets. It was hard to move

around and requires a lot of practices. NurulAlisa


9, Jalan 20,
That is all from me. Take care! Bye! Taman Bestari,

Sincerely, 68100 Batu Caves,


Selangor.
Nita

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M Y R EF ER E N CE : Y E A R 4 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 68)
THE TEMPLATE : WRITING A NOTICE

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

TheTitle NOTICE (capital letters)

Date 6 July 2019

Heading / Subject << refer to the question >>


(capital letters for the 1st letter in each word)

Content 2
(Refer to the
question) 3

Name of the << refer to the question >>


writer

Title / Position << refer to the question >>

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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING A NOTICE

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

The Title

Date

Heading / Subject

Content 2
(Refer to the
question) 3

Name of the
writer

Title / Position

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T H E S A M P L E QU E ST I ON

Taken from : Year 5 English Textbook – page 56

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THE SA M P LE A N S W E R

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE
The Title SEKOLAH KEBANGSAAN SERI DAMAI NOTICE
Date 6 July 2019
Heading / Subject Child Safety and Protection Carnival
1 Sekolah Kebangsaan Seri Damai is organizing Child
Safety and Protection Carnival.

Date : 15 July 2019


2 Time : 8.00 a.m. to 1.00 p.m.
Content Venue : Dewan Terbuka SK Seri Damai
(Refer to the Many interesting activities will be held :
question) a) Musical performance
3 b) Magic tricks
c) Child safety and protection talk
d) Jumbo sale

4 Let’s make our school and community safe!

Name of the Miss Sharmila


writer
Title / Position Carnival Coordinator

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

SEKOLAH KEBANGSAAN SERI DAMAI NOTICE


6 July 2019
Child Safety and Protection Carnival
Sekolah Kebangsaan Seri Damai is organizing Child Safety and Protection
Carnival.
Date : 15 July 2019
Time : 8.00 a.m. to 1.00 p.m.
Venue : Dewan Terbuka SK Seri Damai
Many interesting activities will be held :
a) Musical performance
b) Magic tricks
c) Child safety and protection talk
d) Jumbo sale
Let’s make our school and community safe!
Miss Sharmila
Carnival Coordinator
(67 words)

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M Y R EF ER E N CE : Y E A R 6 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 98)
THE TEMPLATE : WRITING A SPEECH

5 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

Greet the Good morning to the headmaster, teachers and


audience fellow friends.

1st Paragraph Introduce I am ________ from ____________ .


(Introduction) yourself

Introduce I am here to present a speech on topic,


the topic “______________________________“.
(refer to the question)

MI
2nd Paragraph 2nd
3rd Paragraph SD
4th Paragraph MI
(Body / Content) 3 rd
MI = Main Idea SD
SD = Supporting MI
4th
Detail SD

5th Paragraph Thank the Thank you for listening.


(Conclusion) audience

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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING A SPEECH

5 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Greet the
audience
1stParagraph Introduce
(Introduction) yourself
Introduce
the topic

MI
2nd
2nd Paragraph SD
3rd Paragraph
4th Paragraph MI
(Body / Content) 3 rd
MI = Main Idea SD
SD = Supporting
Detail MI
4th
SD

5th Paragraph Thank the


(Conclusion) audience
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THE SAMPLE QUESTION

Should not leave clues that you


are away for vacation.
No postings on the social media.

Ask neighbours to look after


your house.

Inform the police.

Home securely locked.

You are the President of Safety Club in your school. During


the safety campaign, you are given a task to deliver a
speech about Keeping Our Homes Safe During Vacations.
You may use the information given in your answer. Your
answer must be between 50 to 80 words.

Taken from : Modul PBD Negeri Terengganu (BI Penulisan) – page 26

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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS
1. Identify the format.
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom).
F
3. Identify the content.
T
1. The
format :
speech
2. The target :
safety campaign C

3. The Content : Keeping Our Homes


Safe During Vacations
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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING A SPEECH

5 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Greet the Good morning to the headmaster, teachers and
audience fellow friends.

1stParagraph Introduce I am Aiman, the President of Safety Club.


(Introduction) yourself
Introduce I am here to present a speech on topic, “Keeping
the topic Our Homes Safe During Vacations”.
MI You must always make sure your home is
securely locked.
2nd Paragraph 2nd Before you leave please switch on the
3rd Paragraph SD alarm and lock all the windows, doors and
4th Paragraph gates.
(Body / Content)
MI = Main Idea MI You also can ask your neighbor to look
SD=Supporting after your house while you are away.
Detail 3 rd Remind him to call you straight away if he
SD sees someone suspicious wandering
around your house.

5th Paragraph Thank the Thank you for listening.


(Conclusion) audience
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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

Good morning to the headmaster, teachers and fellow


friends. I am Aiman, the President of Safety Club.
I am here to present a speech on topic, “Keeping Our Homes
Safe During Vacations”.
You must always make sure your home is securely locked.
Before you leave please switch on the alarm and lock all the
windows, doors and gates.
You also can ask your neighbor to look after your house
while you are away. Remind him to call you straight away if
he sees someone suspicious wandering around your house.
In conclusion, better safe than sorry. Thank you for
listening.
(99 words)
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CHAPTER 5

Section B (ii)
Formatted
Writing
7 4

M Y REFER EN CE : Y E A R 4 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 26)


7 5

M Y REFERE N CE : Y E A R 4 T E X T B O O K (P AGE 99)


7 6

M Y REFERENCE : YE AR 5 T EXTBOOK (PAGE 88)


7 7

M Y REFER EN CE : Y E A R 5 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 89)


7 8

M Y REFERENCE : YEAR 5 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 108)


7 9

M Y REFERENCE : YEAR 5 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 138)


8 0

M Y REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 17)


8 1

M Y R EF ER E N CE : Y E A R 6 T E X T B O O K (PAGE 47)

04
8 2

M Y REFERE N CE : Y E A R 6 T E X T B O O K (P AGE 89)


8 3

M Y REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 129)

04
8 4

M Y REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 139)

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