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COM 1100-15
Professor Jaimes
9 October 2018
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the importance of youth voting and their impact
Thesis Statement: With motivation, confidence, and cognizant about the issues at hand, youth
voters will be steadfast and persistent to use their voices to change the trajectory of our great
nation.
Introduction
I. Attention Getter: Some people wonder whether or not this country is more and more
becoming conservative by the day. As we watch the U.S. Constitution rip to shreds day
by day, Americans lose hope in the democracy that this country was originally built on.
Which is why, I believe that voting matters. Especially for our youth who are more
connected to social media and can gather information on various topics within seconds.
II. Thesis Statement/ Introduce Topic: Our youth can make a difference through their
III. Significance Statement: “In 2008, nearly 1.7 million Americans between the ages of 18
and 24 were not registered to vote. This is often because they didn’t know how or where
to register, or missed the deadlines. Students, new to voting and to their college
community, often face practical hurdles like awareness of the registration process.” “I
feel like a lot more people don't vote when they're away at college because they are so far
from home," said Bowins. "On campus I haven't seen any spirit based on the election and
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I feel as though lots of college students don't realize how much every presidential
election could affect their lives," said Bowins. Hanshaw stressed this point as well.
A. I will begin my speech by discussing why college students are reluctant to vote.
C. Finally, I will end my speech with a few resolutions that can be implemented to
[Transition: With all those things in mind, we can discuss why young people do not vote.]
I. Main Point: We need more youth voters now more than ever.
A. Sub-point: According to Uloop Inc., the Student Beau Courtroul identified reasons the
a. "Kids are struggling to survive, they don't have time to vote," he said.
i. “Not all people have the luxury of taking time from their day to vote.
a. "There is a little spirit for the election, only within the political science
department though. I think if they boosted the spirit more people would vote,"
said Senetcen.
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C. Sub-point: According to Civicyouth.org, when young people learn the voting process
and vote they are more likely to do so when they are older. If an individual has been
motivated to get to the polls once, they are more likely to return.
D. Sub-point: According to Uloop Inc., the main issue with voter registration among young
Americans is apathy.
a. Although the political system is certainly flawed, to have your only excuse be "I
[Transition: As you can see, our youth are dealing with constant everyday struggles, that impact
their role of voting. With that in mind, we still need to make it apparent about the how youth
II. Main Point: Young voters account for half of the voting population.
the youth involvement at the Iowa Caucuses in 2008. According to the Center for
Information and Research on Civic Learning and Engagement, 24 million youth ages
18-24 voted in the 2008 Presidential Elections, 51 percent of the group. Sixteen million
(68 percent) of the 24 million voted for Obama, which made the difference in many close
represents change and the youth are ready for something new." "It's because Obama is a
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young president. It's just like pastors of churches, they bring in youth that fits their style
a. "An estimated 22 million Americans under the age of 30 voted in the 2008
percent turnout rate, youth voters comprised 18 percent of the electorate that year,
said IVN.
C. Sub-point: Many young people cite feeling as though their vote doesn't count as their
disillusioned by both presidential candidates before the election in 2016, and many chose
to sit out altogether as a result. In an America divided perhaps more than ever, every vote
counts, especially those from one of the country's largest voting groups.
a. In addition, many young Americans rarely listen to what is really going on in our
political system.
b. They are constantly distracted by the latest trend or scandal that deflects them
[Transition: As we know, young Americans have a big voice to shake the system as we know it.
The situation won't be changed by sitting idle while others make major political decisions.]
III. Main Point: Young Voters are made up of a diverse group of individuals, from different
A. Sub-point: The millennial electorate is expected to be the first demographic group with
the ability to challenge the basic two-party system, potentially driving the need for
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alternative political parties whom millennials feel can represent the needs of a diverse
a. This era is different than what it was a century ago. If Young Americans want
change, they need to waken up the old and replace with the new.
b. In addition, we need more younger senators, political officials in office rather than
those who have held their seat for far too long.
B. "Vote early, vote often." According to the US News Report, Many suggest that the voting
age should be lowered in an effort to promote earlier voting among teenagers and young
adults.
present.
C. We can suggest that voting polls to host on college campuses with extended hours.
[Transition: As you can see, if we can make small, reasonable changes to aid our younger
Conclusion
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I. Signpost: In summary, motivation, thorough knowledge, and persistence are key to
II. Summary: With more youth voting, the trajectory of our political system can change.
A. Although life presents everyday struggles, we need to keep our youth informed
B. As we know, the youth vote makes up half of the voting population. Therefore,
we have the opportunity to affect each and every election. Some changes may not
be imminent, but they can affect the next generation. No one can can't predict
what will happen in four years, what is certain is that the political officials elected
into office and the policies they implement will impact your life in the coming
C. It is important to recognize that young Americans are a diverse group. They bring
a new perspective to this decade. In turn, this movement should reflect in their
voting.
III. Clincher: For many millennials, adulthood brings many new challenges, like college,
marriage, buying a house, paying for your own health insurance, and/or starting a business, all of
which could radically change your perspective on political issues. Speak up, make a choice, and
take part in the election to protect your interests in your first few years in the real world.
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