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All parents want their children to be successful individuals, they always taught their children good
things. The most important of all, we must be honest with ourselves. My mother taught me, we must
show what we have, because by behaving honestly can increase our confidence. Secondly, each
individual has different abilities, we must be able make the most of what we have. My father always
advised me to never give up make the most of what I have to reach what I want. They say, to strive for
more than I think I can do then we will get the results we hoped for. So my parents taught me to be
successful, we must be honest and maximize what we have.

Unity

You can see from first line until last line or conclusion we used same topic and it was how the parents
taught their children

Language

At 4th sentences we are used conjunction to transition this paragraph

Coherent

I think it was coherent essay because in this paragraph using a transition, conjunction to and also using
good word coice and have a same topic from the first line until last line