Business Communication

Email Writing Assessment

From: RahulSingh
Sent: 15 September 2019 17:35
To: Mahsri**@gmail.com<mailto:Mahsri**@gmail.com>; Mahesh Sridhar
Cc: rah***@gmail.com<mailto:rah***@gmail.com>

Subject: MIT 6-A M.Eng Thesis Program

Hi Mahesh,
Good Evening! Hope you are doing well!
I am extremely sorry for my previous email which came out as commanding. My intention
was not to command or order you. Kindly receive my sincere apology for the previous chain
of emails. I admit my mistake and hence would like to reword my email.
I am putting up my CV together for applying to internships. As communicated earlier, your
approval is needed as part of verification process. The MIT EECS 6-A M Eng Thesis
Program Internship which I completed under your guidance was a coveted program which I
would like to put on my CV. I request you to approve for the same through your official MIT
email ID as the (my official email ID). I have attached the internship certificate and details of
internship below.
I again would like to express my deep regrets for previous email. I shall be grateful to you for
helping me. If you have any queries please write back to me. Looking forward to your mail.
Thank you.
Warm Regards,
__________________________________________________

Attachments:
1. Internship Completion Certificate
2. Internship Details:
 MIT 6-A M.Eng Thesis Program internship completed in 2015 at Google,
Mumbai under the mentorship Prof. Mahesh Sridhar.
 Project 1- Worked on new ways to collaborate on structured data with JK
Goldberg as my Industry mentor
 Project 2-Worked on Incorporating video into Google mobile street view. C
Wright assisted as the Industry mentor.