WRITING SKILLS

Task 2. Reflecting Society

Title: Can We Control Decontamination?

The story centered on a young man named Asif who is very inquisitive, curious and smart
and who certainly changed everything due to his courage and determination to lead a
change particularly on how he convinced his teacher together with other other people to
stop their habit of smoking. The teacher and other people believed that effective
strategy of Asif even though he was just a young man who belonged to a very poor
family with 5 brothers, with loving and proud parents is truly an inspiration, Because of
that determined advocacy and inspiring movement at young age of Asif, his father is
becoming well again and the society is now pollution-free.

Criteria:

Mastery of the language - 40%

Clarity and Organization - 30%
Creativity/Complexity - 30%
Total - 100%

Points Earned

Mastery of language - 36%

Clarity and Organization - 26%
Creativity/Complexity - 28%
Total - 90%

Descriptor - Very Good

Remarks:

With respect to the mastery of language, you can write good English ready to
communicate a meaning or message to your readers. You used appropriate words which
are easy to understand, the organization of details from the starting point to the end is
very clear and attainable. The theme of the story is very clear and reflects the society’s
experience. The presentation of ideas and thoughts from sentences to paragraphs is
organized based on narrating your own story parralled in your topic on this writing task.
Please note the vital or crucial usage of punctuations, spelling and the rules of
capitalization. However, there are only few of them found in your composition which
certainly changed the meaning in the sentences. In other words, your task on this writing
skill gave you an avenue to express your thoughts and feelings and to give you the
opportunity using your creativity, critical thinking, analysis and logic. Congratulations.
You are doing great again Shoaib.