1.

The three parts that I will condense from my essay would be introduction where how the
accident was happened, second part that I want to cut off from my final draft is my experience
before getting the driving license because it was seems a bit irrelevant and impacting the boring
factor on my storyline. The last thing that I want to condense from my essay is the conclusion
part because I think should be short and concise and should elaborate the results and facts.
2. The two parts that I want to expand in my final draft is how the incident was happened and
what I and my cousins were doing at that time. The second thing that I want to talk about more
is how a small incident can completely change your way of thinking, I will focus on motivating
others from my story so they can learn something from my side.
3. The one piece of feedback that I received from my peer was related to the length of sentences, I
usually wrote long sentences and after pointing out by my peer I realized that it is not a good
practice while doing writing.