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Name of Student BARING,Zairylle Capellan Grade and Section 8- Honesty
Name of Parent Zeny Marie Baring Name of Teacher JAD GURTIZA
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The Great Philosophers

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The two great people that influences so much Chinese people,

INTRODUCTORY
who are Lao Tzu and Confucius. They influence so much that their
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lessons still remains and followed by people
These two great philosophers has a big contribution to us,

specially to the new generations, Kung Fu Tzu, also known as

Confucius, and Lao Tzu. These two great philosophers has a great

impact to us. They teaches us how to live our lives in a good way.

PARAGRAPH ONE They teaches us to respect our elders, Confucius said. And also how
Comparison between
Confucius and Lao Tzu to live in simple life, by Lao Tzu. Lao Tzu made the Tao Te Ching,
1 Topic Sentence
5 Supporting Statement
1 Concluding Sentence which is the collection of the sayings that describes the Taoism, while

Confucius made the Analects, which is also the collections of the

saying and teaches of Confucius. Sometimes, they teaches us

something that at first, we cannot understand, but we should still obey

them, because they will give us lesson for a good reasons.

PARAGRAPH TWO The two great philosophers from China namely, Confucius and
Comparison between
Confucianism and Taoism
1 Topic Sentence Lao Tzu, also build religions. Which is the Confucianism and the
5 Supporting Statement
1 Concluding Sentence Taoism, that also have a great impact, not only in China, but also

worldwide. Confucianism, made by Confucius, is built to establish

moral and social values of the Chinese society. While the Taoism, by

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 Lao Tzu, focus on the balance of everything. Both become religion of

China. Although different religion, that is built by different person, it is

built to guide us in our life.

PARAGRAPH Our two great philosophers left us some marks to remember,
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Page | 2 Comparison between the forever. These are the Analects, made by Confucius, and the Tao Te
teachings of Confucius in
the Analects and the
teachings of Lao Tzu in Ching by Lao Tzu. The Analects that contains the lessons and saying
Tao Te Ching
1 Topic Sentence
5 Supporting Statement of Confucius. And the Tao Te Ching that also contains the lessons
1 Concluding Sentence
and sayings of Lao Tzu. Both are made by the great philosophers.

Both are made to teach us something. Different books but same

reason why it is made, and it is to teach.

CONCLUDING Confucius and Lao Tzu become the one of the great
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philosophers in China. They both teaches us, and also guide us. They

also made some books, that contains their lessons. They also built

some religion that still remains today. The religions that some of us

made it to be our guide in life. They are different person but have the

same perspective in life. Same reason why they become one of the

greatest philosopher.

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