Report Essay Rough Draft

by Melanie Killen

Submission date: 02-Nov-2020 10:52AM (UTC-0600)

Submission ID: 1434010484
File name: Report_Essay.docx (22.74K)
Word count: 858
Character count: 4786
Make sure that you have followed the directions on each of the yellow cards, the blue cards, and the green cards. Most people, at
least on the first rough draft, did not follow the instructions on the cards. You must write on the assigned topic. If you want to do
better on final essay, pay attention to the markings I put on your rough draft and ask the questions you need to. You also need to
go through your graded review essays so that you can eliminate the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors you made
in that essay in your report essay.

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Length b

Report Essay Word Count

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ORIGINALITY REPORT

43 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
38%
INTERNET SOURCES
27%
PUBLICATIONS
19%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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journals.plos.org
Internet Source 13%
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www.magonlinelibrary.com
Internet Source 7%
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www.rte.ie
Internet Source 3%
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ideas.repec.org
Internet Source 3%
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Submitted to Broward Community College
Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to Southern New Hampshire
University - Continuing Education
2%
Student Paper

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Submitted to Technical College System of
Georgia
2%
Student Paper

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Submitted to Australian National University
Student Paper 2%
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academic.oup.com
Internet Source 2%
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Submitted to Richmond County School District
Student Paper 2%
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clarechampion.ie
Internet Source 1%
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Submitted to UC, San Diego
Student Paper 1%
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www.irishnews.com
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www.jgld.ro
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Report Essay Rough Draft
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

/100 Instructor

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Text Comment. Make sure that you have followed the directions on each of the yellow cards,
the blue cards, and the green cards. Most people, at least on the first rough draft, did not follow the
instructions on the cards. You must write on the assigned topic. If you want to do better on final
essay, pay attention to the markings I put on your rough draft and ask the questions you need to.
You also need to go through your graded review essays so that you can eliminate the grammar,
punctuation, and sentence structure errors you made in that essay in your report essay.

QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the format that was
assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.

QM file name
Please use the assigned naming format when you save your file.

QM Length b
This paper does not meet the minimum length requirement of the assignment.

QM Report Essay Word Count

Minimum required: 950

Maximum: 1300

Additional Comment

747

QM incorrect
incorrect

QM 3
Your title needs to reflect the main idea of your thesis more directly.

QM PFI3
 Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See report yellow card 1.

QM See me.
I need to explain what you are doing wrong.

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See report yellow card 3.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

blue card 1

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

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QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

blue card 2

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You are supposed to be reporting, not arguing.

Comment 1
 which experts

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

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QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

blue card 4

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You are supposed to be reporting, not arguing.

Comment 2
Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You are supposed to be reporting, not arguing.

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