J.

Arthur Full Rough Draft of

Report
by Jenna Arthur

Submission date: 02-Nov-2020 11:13AM (UTC-0600)

Submission ID: 1434031180
File name: J._Arthur_Full_Rough_Draft_of_Report.docx (51.33K)
Word count: 973
Character count: 5602
Make sure that you have followed the directions on each of the yellow cards, the blue cards, and the green cards. Most people, at
least on the first rough draft, did not follow the instructions on the cards. You must write on the assigned topic. If you want to do
better on final essay, pay attention to the markings I put on your rough draft and ask the questions you need to. You also need to
go through your graded review essays so that you can eliminate the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors you made
in that essay in your report essay.

Length b

Report Essay Word Count

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ORIGINALITY REPORT

21 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
14%
INTERNET SOURCES
4%
PUBLICATIONS
16%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

1
journals.tubitak.gov.tr
Internet Source 5%
2
Submitted to Colorado State University Fort
Collins
4%
Student Paper

3
Submitted to Collin County Community College
Student Paper 4%
4
Submitted to Utah Education Network
Student Paper 3%
5
Submitted to Colorado Mountain College
Student Paper 2%
6
Submitted to State College of Florida, Manatee -
Sarasota (formerly, Manatee Community
2%
College)
Student Paper

7
Submitted to Florida State University
Student Paper 2%
8
ysgolgymraeg.ceredigion.sch.uk
Internet Source 1%
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

/100 Instructor

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Text Comment. Make sure that you have followed the directions on each of the yellow cards,
the blue cards, and the green cards. Most people, at least on the first rough draft, did not follow the
instructions on the cards. You must write on the assigned topic. If you want to do better on final
essay, pay attention to the markings I put on your rough draft and ask the questions you need to.
You also need to go through your graded review essays so that you can eliminate the grammar,
punctuation, and sentence structure errors you made in that essay in your report essay.

QM Length b
This paper does not meet the minimum length requirement of the assignment.

QM Report Essay Word Count

Minimum required: 950

Maximum: 1300

Additional Comment

827

QM See me.
I need to explain what you are doing wrong.

QM thesis in
inadequate thesis

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See report yellow card 3.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment
 blue card 1

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You MUST write on the assigned topic.

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QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

blue card 2

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You MUST write on the assigned topic.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

blue card 3

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You MUST write on the assigned topic.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

blue card 4
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QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You MUST write on the assigned topic.

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

Follow the instructions on the cards and on the assignment.

You MUST write on the assigned topic.

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