Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Evan Manaye
Instructor Litle
ENG12100L
11 September 2020
1. Put the main point of this paper in your own words and where that is stated in the paper-If
you're not sure what the main point is, say that
.The main idea of the paper is how the ad persuades the audience in buying its product
and how the use of the rhetorical appeal persuades the audience in buying and using the
product. He mentioned on page two, last paragraph why anyone looking at the ad would
2. How does the conclusion function for this essay? Does it provide a powerful overview and
leave you with a sense of completion? What do you like about it? What needs improved?
It gave a brief conclusion why any audience would be attracted to the ad and how the use
of rhetorical appeal makes the ad more effective and persuasive. The summered part gave
a conclusion to why viewers should buy it which I liked about it. It is my suggestion if
the author avoids using “I think” which most of us commonly use. It shows uncertainty in
his paper. The purpose of this assignment is for students to notice visual images, it is
recommended that the paper written must not show doubtfulness instead it must be
3. Does the author attempt to catch and engage the attention of the audience in the introduction?
The introduction part was good. the author explained well how the brand has been
controlling the advertisement industry. The intro part was short which I suggest by
having it short, the audiences might not understand why the topic is important or why
they should continue reading. start with sentences like what Adidas is for readers who
4. How does the author restate the main point in the conclusion without simply repeating their
thesis?
The conclusion part was written as an intro. the author states how Adidas is the best
seller. As a conclusion part, it is best to conclude by stating how the use of rhetorical
appeals has helped the world to understand visual image, remove personal judgment and
use statements like “ it is suggested, it could be concluded as” and so on. I liked how the
author summarized the use of the background, the professional player had effect on the
5. Review “What I’ll Be Looking for when Grading” on the assignment sheet. What issues do
The image was interpreted well in the essay. It included detailed information about focal
point, the background, size of the image and gloves. It also explained the use of rhetorical
appeal and where it was used in the image. As the focus of this paper is for us to
understand usually literacy, I believe this author understood and used this image to
interpret and learn the message behind. It was mentioned that the advertisement was
owned by the brand which shows image credit. the sentence structure somehow needs
improvement. the author must develop on using more argumentative points and
grammatically correct phrases. It should also avoid using personal language and repeating
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the same sentences. overall, the author should go over hiss paper and correct the
grammatical errors and restate some sentences with weak argumentative points.
It was interesting to read how the author explained the use of the background and
meaning. Black color as a color of rebelliousness, power and elegance, red as energy,
passion and love. not many notice colors have meaning. when colors are chosen, they
don't just attract eyes but also evoke the emotion of the viewers.
7. What major grammar errors did you notice: spelling, use of "you," fragments, too long of
sentences, etc.
There were noticeable grammar errors and republication of the same sentence in a
paragraph. This essay needs improvement in grammar choices. When writing a paper, the
author must choose precise language and create an enthralling message. As the readers
8. What is your general end comment? Meaning, what did the writer do well and what
The body part of the essay was clear and fairly explained each rhetorical appeal and how
they are used to create this image.it shows he clearly understood he was able to interpret
the message. However, the grammar and choosing precise language needs correction and
9. Does the main idea relate to the writer’s chosen image/ ad? Suggest improvements for the
The main idea of the ad is expressed very well in this writing. clearly explained why
anyone would be attracted to the ad and what are the factors that persuade viewers to
10. List, in your own words, the rhetorical modes/ terminology used to convey the primary
meaning or support the main point the writer is making about the ad.
With one glance, viewers' focus will be on the famous goalkeepers. The ad uses a
rhetorical technique called ethos; the use of credibility. this shows the celebrity uses this
product which impacts the audience resulting in purchasing the item. with facial
expressions and color choices, the ad evokes the emotion of the viewers. by displaying
the goalkeepers with their Adidas gloves on, viewers think the energy behind this is the
11. The writer needed to provide a description of the image. Is it adequate for you to visualize?
Explain how the writer can improve the description/ clarify the subject for an audience that
The diction if the mage is very good. I personally was able to guess what the ad would
look like without having to look. I would say the author did a good job in describing and
would not have to attach the image in the essay because it was clear enough to visualize
12. Does the writer do more than just analyze different components of the ad? What is the larger
message/ meaning/ purpose they are trying to prove? Suggest improvements for achieving
The author mainly relied on ethos, convincing the audience how the use of credibility
affects the audiences. Adidas controlling the advertisement industry is mentioned several
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times in the writing and focus on ethos. The argumentative point somehow needs
improvement. However, this can be easily solved by choosing more convincing words.
13. What are some areas that represent reflection on larger connections within the ad/image or to
society? In your own words, express the significance of the connections and how it relates to
the writer’s main point. If there are no connections, suggest some that the writer might make.
It really showed how easily we are influenced by products, especially the ones advertised
by influencers. We often want to buy products that are used by celebrities. it makes us
feel connected with them. The author stated, “ the ad is more eye-catching for the
spectator, the prospective goalkeepers, who want to be goalkeepers, the ad with them will
be more important for them, because they will identify themselves and will want to use
14. Does the writer include a discussion of the target audience for the ad/image? If so, what can
they do to improve? If not, where can they place it, and what should they include?
I didn't notice the discussion statement that would lead the audiences to think. I suggest
asking readers if they are easily influenced by commercials because the ad uses
credibility mainly in selling its product. I believe this give audiences to discuss and read