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    The bar chart shows the proportion of overweight Australians from 1980 to 2010. It found that generally more men than women were overweight each year. The rates of overweight men and women both increased over the first 20 years before a slight decline in 2010. The percentage of overweight men was around 40% in 1980 and rose to around 45% by 1990 before steadily increasing to about 65% by 2000 and then mildly decreasing. The lowest overweight rate for both sexes was over 30% for women in 1980, and by 2000 it had considerably increased to almost 50% before stabilizing.

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    The bar chart shows the proportion of overweight Australians from 1980 to 2010. It found that generally more men than women were overweight each year. The rates of overweight men and women both increased over the first 20 years before a slight decline in 2010. The percentage of overweight men was around 40% in 1980 and rose to around 45% by 1990 before steadily increasing to about 65% by 2000 and then mildly decreasing. The lowest overweight rate for both sexes was over 30% for women in 1980, and by 2000 it had considerably increased to almost 50% before stabilizing.

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    Point Towards The End of The Research Period

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    The bar chart shows the proportion of overweight Australians from 1980 to 2010. It found that generally more men than women were overweight each year. The rates of overweight men and women both increased over the first 20 years before a slight decline in 2010. The percentage of overweight men was around 40% in 1980 and rose to around 45% by 1990 before steadily increasing to about 65% by 2000 and then mildly decreasing. The lowest overweight rate for both sexes was over 30% for women in 1980, and by 2000 it had considerably increased to almost 50% before stabilizing.

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    The bar chart compares the proportion of obese Australians between 1980 and 2010.

    Generally, the rate of overweight males outnumbered that of females in each year.
    Furthermore, the figure for both men and women who were fat experienced an upward
    trennd over the first 20-year of the given period before undergoing a marginal decline in
    2010.

    Looking at the percentage of overweight Australian men in more detail, in 1980,


    around 40% were reported and this figure saw a slight rise to approximately 9% over
    the next 10 years. After that, the proportion of those men continually slided away to
    roughly 65% in 2000, followed by a mild drop to nearly 5% accordingly.

    Turning to obese females in this country, the lowest figure for two sexes was
    recorded at over 30% in the beginning period. Twenty years later, the female
    overweight rate witnessed a considerable climb by 10% every 10 years and reached at
    almost 50% in 2000. Eventually, the figure for Australian women remained stable at this
    point towards the end of the research period.

    // bài này ko có 1 xíu gì so sánh; em chỉ đưa male / female riêng và rồi tang giảm => 6.5 max

    // quá nhiều lỗi sai grammar về cách dùng giới từ of, to by, ….

     OVERALL 6.0

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