COMMUNICATION SKIILL

NAME: AREEBA NASIR

REG NUMBER: 9580
SIR: SYED MUHAMMAD MUJTABA

Task 1
Revise the following sentences to make them more concise
1.We are sending a revised proposal at this point in time due to the fact that
building costs have jumped at a considerable rate.
ANS: By and by, we are sending a changed proposition since building costs have
seized an impressive rate.)
2.In the normal course of events, we would seek additional funding; however, in
view of the fact that rates have increased, we cannot.
ANS: We can't look for extra subsidizing on the grounds that the rates have
expanded
3.In very few cases has it been advisable for us to borrow money for a period of
90 or fewer days.
ANS: We can Borrow cash for a time of 90 or less days has been sometimes.
4.In as much as our Web advertising income is increasing in a gradual manner,
we might seek a loan in the amount of $50,000.
ANS: As our web publicizing pay is developing, in this way, we will credit about
$50,000.
5.Despite the fact that we have had no response to our bid, we are still available
in the event that you wish to proceed with your building project.
ANS: In show disdain toward, we have had no reaction to our offer, still we are
here to continue with your structure venture.
6.This is an announcement to tell you that all computer passwords must be
changed every six months for security purposes.
ANS: All PC secret word will be changed at regular intervals for security
purposes.
7.We are sending this memo to notify everyone that anyone who wants to apply
for telecommuting may submit an application immediately.
ANS: Anybody is fascinating in tele-network can submit application right away
8.I am writing this letter to inform you that your new account executive is
Edward Ho.
ANS: Your new record chief is Edward Ho.
9.This is to warn you that cyber criminals use sophisticated tools to decipher
passwords rapidly.
ANS: Digital crooks use instruments to decode secret word.
10.This message is to let you know that social media services can position your
company at the forefront of online marketing opportunities.
ANS: Web-based media administrations can situate your organization at the
bleeding edge of web based advertising openings.

Task 2
Revise the following to avoid redundancies and empty words

1.Because his laptop was small in size, he could carry it everywhere

ANS: Because his laptop was small, he could carry it everywhere.
2.A basic fundamental of computer safety is to avoid storing your password on a
file in your computer because criminals will look there first.
ANS: Fundamental of PC prosperity avoid taking care of your mystery expression
on a record in your PC since offenders will look their first
3.The manager repeated again his warning that we must use strong passwords.
ANS: The chief repeated his reprobation that we ought to use strong passwords.
4.Although the two files seem exactly identical, we should proofread each and
every page.
ANS: Regardless of the way that the two records give off an impression of being
indistinct, we should alter each and each page.
5.The computer specialist combined together a PowerPoint presentation and a
handout.
ANS: The PC ace solidified a power point presentation and a blessing.
6.Are you aware of the fact that social media can drive brand awareness and
customer loyalty?
ANS: you aware of that electronic media can drive brand care and customer
commitment?
7.Except for the instance of Myspace, social networking sites are booming.
ANS: Other than Myspace, long reach casual correspondence areas are impacting.
8.If you seek to build an online community that will support your customers,
social media services can help.
ANS: You attempting to amass an online organization to enable your customers, to
electronic media organization can help.
9.With such a degree of active participation in Facebook and Twitter, it’s easy to
understand why businesses are flocking to social media sites.
ANS: With such a working enthusiasm for Facebook and Twitter, it's direct why
associations are hurrying to online media districts
10.We plan to schedule online meetings on a monthly basis.
ANS: We plan online get-togethers reliably.

Task 3
Apply strategies for Completeness in the following Email and submit the
improved Email. Suppose all necessary details.
To: Areeba Nasir[areeba.nasir@gmail.com]

From: Raheem Alvi[raheem28@hotmail.com]

CC:

BCC:
Much obliged to you for your enthusiasm for our items. We generally welcome new
clients and fabricate long haul business connections for shared advantages.

Kindly observe the accompanying reactions to your questions:

1. We give limits on mass buys as it were.

2. Delivery is made very soon.

3. You may put in a request for the same number of things as you can.

4. We give restricted time ensure on the entirety of our items.

5. You can download the Purchase request structure our site to submit the
request.

We trust that this data will assist you with taking buy choices. If it's not too much
trouble reach us on our PTCL numbers for any further questions.
Regards,
Raheem Alvi

Sales Officer

Rasheed and Brothers