Grammar analysis

6901 world domination (3 credits): Professor Peck, Mr. Lapham, Ms. Austin. One two-hour
lecture period per week is required. Three periods of fieldwork per week are also required.

This course on world domination and dictatorship involves both lecture and practical application
of what students learn.

Students will report to their faculty advisors once a month. Everyone must keep a journal of
revolutions started, governments overthrown, and peasants’ oppressed. Readings include Karl
and Groucho Marx’s masterful essay, “Laughing All the Way to the Throne”, and Chairman
Mayo’s autobiography, Hold the Bacon. This reading list is sure to interest students whose career
plans are to be an emperor, tsar, dictator, or reality-show winner. By the time the course
concludes, students will have gathered all necessary information about what it takes to rule the
world. We will be discussing topics such as propaganda, media manipulation, and telegenic
coronation clothes (including crown-jewel selection). Working in the field, students will set up
spy networks; fieldwork will count as a quarter of the grade. The students’ task is required for
graduation is to outmaneuver everyone else in the course by becoming the first to conquer a
hostile country. Exams also emphasize really practical skills, and theoretical ideas. Students
write only two papers.

Admission to this course and its sequel (Universal Domination) is by permission of the
Department of Political Science. Regardless of age or class rank, applicants should be as
motivated as the average freshman and should try to visit the departmental office for an
interview.

Note: The text above is the answer of grammar check 1. Your task is to identify the changes and
mention the reasons. You can fill the table below and upload on Gnomio class topic 4.
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No Error words Correction Reasons (boleh dengan Bahasa indonesia)

1. is are Three periods adalah kalimat yang
merupakan subject plural. Sedangkan is
adalah to be untuk kata/kalimat singular
2. involve involves Involve adalah verb dengan subject this
course (singular). Maka, untuk menjadi
sentence yang benar, involve harus diganti
dengan involves.
3. That they put..... Practical application Both adalah kata yang mana kata selanjutnya
harus berupa noun.
4. Will learn Learn Ketika ada practical application, maka
lecture nya seharusnya sudah dipelajari
bukan ‘akan’ dipelajari
5. A student Students Pada kalimat selanjutnya, pronoun yang
digunakan adalah their (pronoun yang
digunakan untuk subject plural)
6. The, The the, the The merupakan conjunction. Yang mana,
conjunction pada judul seharusnya
menggunakan huruf awal non kapital
7. This is This reading list This is tidak jelas tertuju kepada apa.
8. Who’s Whose Who’s merupakan contraction yang berarti
who is/who has. Sedangkan kalimat itu
seharusnya menggunakan possesive
pronoun
9. Emperor; tsar; Emperor, tsar, Kesalahan tanda baca
dictator; dictator
10. Students have Students will have Karena peristiwa tersebut (gathered all
necessary things....) akan terjadi
11. Like Such as Like tidak cocok digunakan pada artikel
formal
12. Spy networks will be Students will set up Spy networks tidak bisa menjadi subject
set up
13. The students’s The students’ S pada kata akhiran untuk menunjukkan
possesive tidak perlu menggunakan s lagi.
 cukup menggunakan apostroph
14. Everyone Everyone else Outmanuever
15.
16. Exams also Exams also exams merupakan kata plural, maka verb
emphasizes emphasize nya tidak bisa memakai singular verb
17. Real Really Really digunakan untuk lebih menegaskan
bahwa ujian mahasiswa benar – benar
practical skills and theoritical ideas.
Sedangkan real tidak bisa membahasakan
itu.
18. Only write Write only Only seharusnya berada di belakang verb
19. It’s Its It’s merupakan it is. Sedangkan yang
dimaksud seharusnya pronoun.
20. Are Is Are dalam kalimat tersebut menjadi to be
dari admission to this course. Yang mana,
tentu saja tidak cocok karena this adalah
singular.
21. Politically Political Politically merupakan adverb, yang mana
tentu saja tidak cocok untuk gabungan kata
tersebut. Maka harus diganti dengan
adjective
22. Irregardless Regardless Tidak cocok dalam kalimat itu, karena
irregardless berarti kebalikan regardless.
23. As motivated than As motivated as Than digunakan pada kalimat yang
menunjukkan perbandingan lebih dari.
Sedangkan tujuan kalimat tersebut untuk
menunjukkan perbandingan yang equal.
24. Try and visit Try to visit Conjuntion and tidak cocok digunakan pada
kalimat tersebut.