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Introductory paragraph

 Sitting on our bed with the world around our fingertips, the innovation of the internet is surely
the most exceptional invention worldwide. Initially, the internet was a network people used to
search for information, buying goods, and a way to keep up with friends. In today’s world, the
evaluation of the internet has hugely affected the human race as now it is easily accessible to
anyone that has a phone. Is the internet optimistically affecting human society?

Body paragraphs
Paragraph 1
 The internet has become the main focus of businesses worldwide and with the evolution
of the internet, e-business is also constantly evolving.
 More and more companies are shifting their businesses online as they cannot resist the
advantages that the potential the internet possesses such as ease of access, approach to a
wider audience, etc.
 In short, the internet has not only been beneficial to the business owners but also attracts
a lot of consumers as it provides the ultimate shopping experience in the comfort of their
homes.
Paragraph 2
 The use of the internet has made students' life so much easier.
 As it allows students to help in their study in a much more detailed manner providing
them with the latest information.
 As a result, students have become better at studying and developing their skills.

Paragraph 3
 The Internet has made long-distance communication possible enabling people to interact
with their loved ones even when they are miles away.
 The easier means of communication is made possible by the introduction of social
networking sites such as Instagram, Facebook, and Twitter. Before the advancement of
the internet keeping contact with one’s family and friends was quite difficult and
expensive.
 Thus the internet has erased all the communication gaps that people used to face earlier.
Counterpoint
 As the popularity of the internet increases, day by day the adverse effects of it can now be
seen.
 Although the internet has removed the communication barriers for long distances, we are
communicating less in our actual life with the people currently present with us. People
forget to cherish the real moments to create their perfect virtual life.
 The internet does indeed have its downsides and one cannot dent that it is adversely
affecting our life. However, the positive outcomes of the internet outweigh the negatives.
 Thus I believe that the internet is influencing human lives mostly in a positive way.
       

Concluding paragraph
In conclusion, the development of the internet has completely transformed the way that we live.
It has now become an essential part of our life from studying to business transactions or
communicating with people, without internet everyday functions now feels impossible. Though
we’ve come a long way from where we initially started yet there is a lot to come. So it is safe to
say that the internet has indeed optimistically transformed human society.

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