The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do

you agree or disagree?

This days we have many web sites which can buy some things online but this situation have many affect
on some shops in the nations and countries. I think it is good for people because of more extensive
selection and also shops do not have any rent or tax.

Comments:

(As you are going to talk about the other side as well,u should have mentioned that u gonna talk about
the other side as well)

Sample answer☹(introduction)

Online shopping has become extremely popular nowadays; many consider it to be an extremely
positive development, while others believe that it will eventually lead to the demise of
physically operated stores in the near future. In my opinion, there are significant advantages to
online shopping; however, there are some notable drawbacks which needs to be considered.

Firstly, If you are buying something online you can search some websites more and more which
you need something and it can help you for your choosing so you have more extensive selection
so you do not spend money easily. For example, when you want to buy shoes you can search
some sites about brands of shoes. In addition, you can choose some prices of this that is have a
good price.

(U need to have a topic sentence first introducing the intensive selection but……….u also
needed to use more linkers to link ur ideas more coherently )

Sample answer (Body 1)

To start with, online shopping offers a much more extensive selection to the consumers. For
example, customers can browse through thousands of catalogues before purchasing on sites
like Amazon and Ebay; they can use advanced tools which can take into account an individual’s
budget, the average customer rating of the product based on previous purchases as well as
real-time tracking once the item is purchased.

Secondly, online shopping does not increase their prices because they do not have any rent for
their shopping or they do not have any tax to the government. For instance, some websites do
not have shops for their shopping, they just sell some of their goods on the internet.
(Again,I cannot see the topic sentence clearly) ,the topic has not been developed adequately !
Sample answer (Body 2)
Secondly, online retailers are not obliged to pay rent like traditional stores as items can be
stored in warehouses before being shipped off to buyers; thus they can be extremely cost-
effective and economical to sellers. Consequently, online shopping offers increased
convenience to consumers as they do not have to travel long distances to make the purchase in
physical stores, it can be done comfortably at home with the click of a button.

Although, it has many advantages but the most important is that customers can not try their clothes or
they cannot understand the type of goods they purchase.

It is thrilling to see that u are trying to have a look at the other side of online shopping (flip side) but
needs to be well coherent!

Sample answer (Body 3)

Conversely, physical stores allow customers to try the product before making a purchase,
ensuring that it is of right fit or size. For instance, when buying jeans or shirts, consumers can
physically wear the clothes in physical stores, the same cannot be said about online shopping. If
the majority of the vendors choose to sell items online, this could result in shutting down of
physical owned stores, as well as many of its employees becoming jobless.

To conclude, I think there are many benefits to shopping online, both in terms of cost and time for
customers. Furthermore, it helps sellers that reduce their costs.

U were expected to mention all what u had mentioned in three paragraphs!

Sample answer (conclusion)

In conclusion, while online shopping offers consumers significant benefits, there are important
drawbacks, that should be taken into account before making a purchase.