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Abby Huber
P. Gardner
Bloated Oysters
6 May 2021
Henry Steele Commager once said, “Education is essential to change, for education
creates both new wants and the ability to satisfy them.” (Commager). This year has been hard, no
doubt about it. We’ve all been doing our best to make this year better than it has been.
Throughout this year with the constantly changing schedule of in person classes, then hybrid,
then all online, it's been a lot for students. The leeway of grades and assignments teachers have
given, hasn't been good for students either. While I surveyed anonymous students, one student
said, “Everything seems more optional, or meaningless especially when we do online stuff”. The
majority of students who I surveyed, their grades have not gone down, their motivation has gone
down. However, I have found students' mental and physical health have gone way down. Even
before the pandemic, this has been a problem. They're getting the work done, it's just a drag to do
it. Students need to be challenged, but they need the freedom to express themselves and their
educational goals. Thus I have made a 3 step proposal on how we can solve this problem. My
goal of this proposal is to lessen the stress students are facing when it comes to grades, but still
Gathering data from a survey I sent out, I found that 84.2% of students said that grades
have affected their mental health. I also asked if changing the grade scale would help students
with their stress levels, etc. Some of the responses I got was, “Yes...students would be a lot less
stressed”, “Yes! It would give teenagers a chance to be teenagers” and finally, “I feel like this
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would definitely help lower the stress of school.” Clearly a lot of students are stressed about
However, I did find out that a lot of the leeway students are getting from teachers, this is
resulting in their motivation dropping. In an interview I did with student Ben Huber, he said, “the
leeway I have been given by my teachers has made my motivation go down a ton to accomplish
my work...and it's only going to get worse as things get back to normal.” When we start going
back to normal, it is going to be a lot harder for students to adapt because they have had less
expected of them. So I propose, teachers slowly take away that slack they have given on
assignments. Not only do I think students would thrive in that environment, but I think it would
be the perfect mix of learning and challenging themselves. The stress would be lowered for
students. Expert Abigail Groncki agrees with this too. Abigail is an expert because she used to go
to a school with this proposed grade scale. She said, “I definitely was a lot less stressed with the
lower grade scale then I am now”(Groncki). Between going back to normal with taking away the
leeway from students, and lowering the grade scale, the students will be challenged because they
have deadlines for assignments, but they also have a lower grade system so they can express
As you can see, I think changing the grading scale and slowly getting rid of the leeway
from teachers would be super beneficial for our Brighton high community. Students have a lot of
stress on their shoulders already, school is one thing that should not be added to that mix. Plus, it
is in your power to change it! According to the Utah state board of education, they state, “USBE
recognizes that grade calculations and GPA are a local policy issue” (USBE). Students need to be
challenged, but with the way the grading system is now, it's more overwhelming than anything.
Works cited
Huber, Abby. Survey of grades in the pandemic. Cottonwood Heights, UT: Brighton High
“Utah State Board of Education Guidance for 2019–2020 School Year Due to
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