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Dàn bài mà em lập cho đề này

Dạng: discuss both views and give opinion

I’m of the opinion that this brings more advantages

Disadvantage: some companies can just invest in sport with a little money and enhance their popularity,

whereas sport sector does not have enough money to develop

Advantage: -create more occupations with high salary for players

-if the companies can organize championship -> attract tourist and help the investors become

more famous

Bài viết của em ( luôn nhớ max 300 words

cho Task 2, max 160 words cho Task 1)

Some companies sponsor sports to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while

others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether or not the

sponsorship on the sport sector of some companies for gaining popularity has caused bad impacts. While

many people argue that this has drawbacks, I am of the opinion that this brings more benefits.

On the one hand, it is said that the sponsorship on sports of some companies has disadvantage because

this just brings benefits for the companies only. Specifically, the companies can invest with a little money

and become more famous through the media, whereas the sport sector receive appropriate profit.

Therefore, many players and sport teams do not have enough money and facilities to develop.
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On the other hand, I believe that this kind of sponsorship brings more advantages to the world of sport.

Firstly, this creates more chances of occupation. To be specific, when more companies allocate money for

sports, more and more people will attend in this sector and play sports as a job, the players can also have a

stable, high salary. Secondly, if the companies are able to sponsor on sports with a huge amount of money,

they can organize the championships. As a result, it may not only attract more tourists but also help to

advertise for the companies. For instance, Viet Nam used to organize the SEA GAME championship in the

past. After the competition, the companies became well-known and many tourists return to this country.

In conclusion, while there are many disagreements to the given problem, I strongly argue that the

investment in sports of the companies for gaining fame has more advantages.

→ Bài task 2 này tầm 6.5-7.0, em đạt 7.0 writing hôm 22/8 đề này là xứng đáng í (bố cục, ideas rõ ràng),

chị nghĩ 1 phần task 1 viết cũng rất ổn nữa, well done nha em!