Watch the video and comment on the presenters’ performance.

PRESENTER 1

Section A. Introduction

Features
Attention getter
Strength Weakness and improvement

Establishing credibility
Strength Weakness and improvement

Introducing the topic and previewing the main points

Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transition between introduction and the body)

Strength Weakness and improvement

Section B. Body (Point 1)

Features
Main idea
Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
Strength Weakness and improvement

Details/ Examples
Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between ideas)

Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
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Details/ Examples
Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between speakers)

Strength Weakness and improvement

Language used
Strength Weakness and improvement

PRESENTER 2
Section C. Body (Point 2)

Features
Main idea
Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
Strength Weakness and improvement

Details/ Examples
Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between ideas)

Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
Strength Weakness and improvement

Details/ Examples
Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between body to the conclusion)

Strength Weakness and improvement
Section D. Conclusion

Features
Concluding signal
Strength Weakness and improvement

Summarising key points

Strength Weakness and improvement

Ending on a strong note

(making a memorable quotation or dramatic statement)
Strength Weakness and improvement

Language used
Strength Weakness and improvement

OVERALL PERFORMANCE

a. What do you think about the presentation overall?

b. What do you think about the presentation slides?
c. Was the management of the presentation slides good?
d. How was the spoken language? (transition signals, grammar etc.)
e. How was the body language?
f. Did the presenter make use of various vocal variety?
g. Was the message delivered?
h. What are the good points about the presentation?
i.What improvements can be made?

OVERALL VOCAL VARIETY/PARALINGUISTIC FEATURES

a. Intonation
b. Rhythm
c. body movement
d.