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LPE2301 ACADEMIC INTERACTION & PRESENTATION
SEMESTER 2, 2019/2020
It is essential for you to know the audience when deciding on a topic and preparing a
presentation. The audience will be more interested in listening and accepting what you say if
the topic is relevant and relatable to them.
There are several aspects that you need to consider in analysing your audience:
1. The audiences’ interests - What does the audience interested to know?
2. The audiences’ knowledge and feelings on the topic - What do the audience know and
feel about this topic?
3. The demographic factors of the audiences - What is the age group, genders and
educational backgrounds of your audience?
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4. The objective/goal of the presentation - What do you want to achieve with this
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Information gathered from analysing your audience can help you to determine their interest
and prior knowledge, gauge their response, and identify the best way in delivering the
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There are two ways to analyse the audience:
• focuses on situational factors such as the size of the audience, the physical
setting for the presentation
• helps presenter to analyse audience perception towards the topic and speaker
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Activity 1
Interview your classmates to find out about their interests using the following questions.
1. Who are your audience?
2. What are their academic backgrounds?
3. What topic are they interested in?
Based on the responses, how will it affect the choice of your topic?
2. Choosing a topic
After you have decided on the target audience of your presentation, the next step is to choose
a topic. Choosing a topic is an essential step in preparing a presentation.
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• Brainstorming – a method to generate ideas for presentation topics by freely associating
words and ideas.
• There are several brainstorming procedures that you can follow:
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I. Clustering
II. Free-associating
III. Listing
• You can jot down as you think of the points or words or phrases that related to the topic,
and these items may become the main headings or key words for your presentation.
i. Clustering
• Also known as mind mapping or idea mapping
• It is a strategy that allows you to explore the relationships between ideas. Clustering
the ideas let you see them visually in a different way so that you can more readily
understand possible direction your topic may take.
• The cluster begins with a central idea. Then, new ideas are written and connected
to the central idea.
• You then select one branch of the clusters or series related ideas to use a writing
topic.
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Example of topic: Climate change causes greenhouse effect and global warming
ii. Free-associating
• Free-associating is created by spontaneous response to the trigger word without
any restrictions. This method gets creativity flowing when you do not want to over-
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think on how words are related.
• It begins with a trigger word and continues with a flow of words that come into your
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• Each word triggering the next, ultimately reaching a potentially useful one.
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Activity 2
In a group, choose one of the brainstorming methods and brainstorm for ideas for a
presentation topic.
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For example:
Topic : Eating breakfast
Central idea : Three major benefits of eating breakfast to university students
Main points : I. Kick start metabolism
II. Perform better in study
III. Maintain a healthy weight
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Gathering materials related to the topics
• During the brainstorming process, it is useful to start gathering materials related to the
topic. These materials help you to be clearer on the main points you want to present. It
also helps you to develop and support your points.
• Once you have a topic, you have many options to find information. All the materials can be
gathered from:
§ library research (books, journal etc.)
§ the Internet (e-books, online journals etc.)
§ interviews (interview a professional or paid researcher)
Activity 3
Based on Activity 2, organise your central idea and main points by completing the flow chart
below. Provide sources to support your main points.
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3. Deciding general and specific purpose of the presentation
When choosing a topic, it is important for you to identify the general and specific purpose of
your presentation. This will affect the amount of information you want to share with the
audience and the way the information is shared. For example, if the purpose is to give
exposure, the presenter needs to share as much information as possible with the audience. If
the purpose is to make comparison, the presenter needs to present different point of views on
the same issue to the audience. This is to ensure the message will reach the audience
successfully.
The general purpose of a presentation refers to the overall objective of the presentation.
The specific purpose of a presentation refers to the focus of the presentation.
For example:
Theme : Health
Topic : Breakfast
Central idea : Three major benefits of eating breakfast to university students
General purpose : To expose the audience to the importance of eating breakfast
Specific purpose : To share with the audience the benefits of eating breakfast for students
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Once you have narrowed down your ideas, they need to be organised into one cohesive
structure. This is not only to help you to plan your presentation but also to ensure that your
audience will be able to follow the flow of ideas of the presentation.
The ideas can be organised into main points, supporting points and supporting details.
Main points
The main points are the central features or main focuses of your speech.
Supporting points
Supporting points contains further elaboration and explanation of the main points. This
represents your own voice and point of view.
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Supporting details
Supporting details contain evidence that can strengthen the supporting points. It can be in the
form of statistics, examples, illustrations, factual data, quotations and testimony taken from
credible sources.
For example:
Topic : Gardening
Central idea : Three major benefits of gardening
Main points : I. Physical fitness
II. Mood enhancer
III. Healthy food
Activity 5
Complete the table below with supporting points and supporting details on The Benefits of
Eating Breakfast to University Students. Compare your notes with a partner and then share
your answers.
Supporting Point 1
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1. Attention getter
An attention getter is a device that you can use to capture your audience’s interest in
your topic. There are number of ways a presenter can use as an attention getter.
a. Quotations
Quotes are a good way to capture your audiences’ heart because by incorporating the wise
words of a famous person, it would allow you to visualise his or her credibility and
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popularity. You can use relevant quotations from famous people that are meaningful,
impactful and appropriate to your topic.
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The quotations used should be short and precise especially if they are used on the slides.
Lengthy quotations distract the audience and cause them to finish the entire quote in a
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open your speech with:
John Gunther (an American journalist and author) once said, “All happiness depends on
a leisurely breakfast”.
Now, imagine you are giving a speech on conflict management, you could open your
speech with:
: “Mark Twain once said, ‘If two people agree on everything, one of them is unnecessary.’
b. Interesting facts/statistics
Interesting facts or statistics are also another way to gauge the audiences’ interests. The
statistics and interesting facts must be directly related to the main purpose of your
presentation.
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According to several studies by Wesnes et al., Widenhom-Muller et al., Cooper et al.,
and Pivik et al., in general, children who consume breakfast show positive effects on
cognitive performance especially in memory and attention.
Another statistic by Cardiff University reveals that children who consumed breakfast
before their lessons are twice as likely to achieve high marks in tests and assessments
compared to those who did not take breakfast before learning.
We know that a child is born into poverty in the United States every 36 seconds, and we
see 12.8 million children living below the poverty line… A child dies from neglect or abuse
every six hours, a child is killed by gunfire almost every three hours, and the number of
neglected or abused children each year would fill up the city of Detroit.
c. Rhetorical question
Asking a rhetorical question can attract the audiences’ attention as it can arouse their
curiosity. The main purpose of asking rhetorical questions is to make them think or to direct
their focuses on the gist of the presentation.
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As Shakespeare wrote in “The Merchant of Venice,” “If you prick us, do we not bleed? If
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F. Kennedy once asked “Ask not what your country can do for you,
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America will do for you, but what together we can do for the freedom of man”.
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d. Story telling/Anecdote
Story telling/Anecdote can hold the audiences’ attentions as everyone will enjoy listening
to stories. You can use your personal stories or your first-hand experiences that are
relevant to the topic to attract the audience. Also, you can use other stories such as short
story, fable, historic event and etc. You must ensure that your anecdote is not too long that
can affect the audiences’ interests.
Apart from captivating your listeners with your story/anecdote, you must also ensure that
your story/anecdote captures the key point of your message. The effectiveness of a story
– especially a personal one – hinges on the speaker’s delivery as well as on the content.
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There I stood, wearing a surgical mask, in the middle of a large, brightly lit room. In the
centre of the room were five figures huddled over a table. I found it difficult to see since
everything was draped in blue sheets, yet I didn’t dare take a step towards the table.
Then one of the figures called to me, “Angela, get over here and take a closer look.” My
knees buckled as I walked through the sterile environment. But eventually I was there,
standing over an unconscious body in the operating room
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with better concentration and performance in college, being energetic all day long, having
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you may not be the expert in the field; however, you can establish credibility by sharing
with the audience your personal interest to the topic or about the research you have done
on the topic in preparation for the presentation.
I would like to explain the basic kinds of weights and how to use them properly.
I started lifting weights when I was in high school, and I have kept at it for the past eight
years. I have also taught weight lifting in several health clubs, and I am a certified instructor
through the Aerobics and Fitness Association of America.
Hence, the information I am going to share with you today comes mostly from my own
experience as a dietician and a research that I have conducted in several colleges in
Sydney, Australia.
Your credibility need not be based on first-hand knowledge and experience. It can come
from reading, from classes, from interviews and from friends. Whatever the source of your
expertise, be sure to let the audience know.
Today, I’d like to focus on three interrelated issues – to understand the nature of bullying
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My presentation today will be divided into three sections which are the introduction, the
three major benefits of breakfast for students and the conclusion as well as the
recommendations/suggestions.
After this introduction, then the audience will be ready to listen to the crux of the
presentation.
Activity 1: Audio 6 – 9
Listen to the beginnings of four presentations. Which one starts with:
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Activity 2
Work with a group of two or three to select an idea for a presentation. Then, plan and write the
way you would introduce this statement in a speech to your class. One of you will deliver this
introduction, which may be as short as 30 seconds, to the class.
Getting audience
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These are presentations on How to Take a Picture of a Black Hole and This Country Isn't Just
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Carbon Neutral. Based on the introduction part of the videos, identify the missing elements of
each presentation.
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Speech transitions smooth over the boundary between two ideas and reveal the
relationship between the words just spoken and those about to be spoken. In this way, speech
transitions help your audience understand your message.
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Supporting ideas with credible sources
Credible sources are crucial to support your points or arguments and give you the credibility
to present the topic. In an academic presentation, it requires you to acknowledge the sources
that you get your evidence from. For example, you can mention the name of the researcher or
the title of an article. The tenses that you can use to cite the sources are either simple present
tense, simple past tense and present perfect tense.
For examples:
Maxwell mentioned in his article that machines are very expensive when compared to
human labour which is cheap and available.
According to Vista Industrial Products, Inc., when there is no unstable electricity, some
machines need an alternative means of power.
William revealed in his research that even though machines are used to replace human in
industry, there are still some functions which machine cannot accomplish.
Activity 4
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I’ve _divided_________4 my talk into three main parts. First of __all________5, I’ll tell
you something about the history of our company. __after________6 that I’ll describe
how the company is structured and finally, I’ll give you some details about our range of
products and services.
I’d like to update you on what we’ve been working on over the last year. I’ll focus on three
main areas: first, our joint venture in Asia; second, the new plant in Charleston and
_third_________7, our redevelopment project.
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Activity 5: Audio 5
The project manager of a construction company is giving a presentation to his colleagues.
Put the sentences in the right order. Then listen to the recording and check your answers.
4 a. This morning I’d like to update you on the current status of work at the construction
site. The information I give you today should help you with planning your next step.
b. For those of you who don’t know me, my name is Gordon Selfridge. Let me just
write that down for you. OK. I’m the project manager in charge of the Bak Tower
3 building project in Dubai.
5 c. I’ve divided my presentation into three parts.
1 d. Hello, everyone.
7 e. Then I’ll move on to the problems we’re facing with our local suppliers.
f. First of all, let me thank you for coming here today. I’m aware that you’re all busy
preparing for the annual meeting this week, so I really appreciate you taking the time
2 to be here.
g. I’ll start off by showing you some photos of the building site and discussing the
6 progress we’ve made since January.
9 h. My talk should take about 30 minutes. Please feel free to interrupt me at any time
with questions.
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8 i. I’ll end with some ideas for reducing labour costs that we’ve been looking into.
j. Oh, and don’t worry about taking notes. I’ll be handing out copies of the PowerPoint
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OK, ____________________ 1 the background and the reason we developed the programme.
Any questions? OK. So, ____________________2 to the next point and take a closer look at
the Traffic Support Centre itself. ____________________3, the TSC was set up in 2001 to help
traffic flow more smoothly, and basically to make the lives of the motorists easier. In this part
of my presentation ____________________4 you about the centre’s activities, how we work
exactly and how motorists benefit from our services.
So, ____________________5 a brief overview of the TSC’s activities. Our main activities are
to collect, analyse, and communicate traffic information. After collecting traffic data from a
number of different sources, we analyse them and then we inform the media, the police or
other authorities, and last but not least – the motorists.
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This now leads us to ____________________6. How does the TSC collect data? Traffic-
monitoring equipment has been installed across the main traffic routes, which helps us gather
real-time information on traffic speed and traffic flow. Additionally, we use variable traffic
sensors and cameras. We also work together with other partners and authorities, for example,
the police, traffic officers, and the media. Let me show you a few examples of how this works.
____________________7 collecting data.
Activity 7
Signposting phrases are used to help guide the audience through a presentation. Complete
these useful phrases with highlighted phrases from the presentation in Activity 6.
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Referring back
E.g. As I mentioned before …
7. _________________________________________________________________
E.g. Let’s go back to what we were discussing earlier.
8. _________________________________________________________________
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“In conclusion, …”
“My purpose has been…”
“Let me end by saying…”
§ Calling for action – request the audience to take some kind of actions
With the numerous benefits it can offer, let’s start urban farming at that empty corner of
your home.
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In conclusion, let me sum up my main points.
Weighing the pros and cons, I come to the conclusion that…
That brings me to the end of my presentation. Thank you for listening/your attention.
Thank you all for listening. It was a pleasure being here today.
Well, that’s it from me. Thank you very much.
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In conclusion, it is proven that organic farming provides numerous benefits to farmers and
the environment. Hence, I urge all of you to start practising organic farming in Malaysia
to shape a healthy and better sustainable country. Raj Patel, a fellow at the Institute for
Food and Development Policy mentioned that, “Far from being a ‘luxury for the rich’,
organic farming may turn out to be a necessity not just for the poor, but for everyone.
That brings me to the end of my presentation. Thank you for your attention.
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Utilising audio-visual aids: Types of Audio-Visual Aids
There are many types of visual aids that can be used in presentation.
Objects and
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i. Objects and models
Various types of physical objects can be used to clarify explanations and help to
maintain listeners’ interests especially if your speech is about the process of making
something. The audience can then watch the whole process step-by-step to get
clearer ideas of the demonstration. The examples of objects are cooking utensils,
paintball equipment etc. As for models, if the speaker is talking about health, he/she
can bring a model of a human anatomy or any related materials to aid the
presentation.
iii. Graphs/Charts
If you need to present information with figures and statistics, it will be effective if
you use graphs or charts. For example, a bar graph is used to compare rankings.
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The bars can be shown either horizontally or vertically in the graph. Another
example is line graph where it can be used to show how a trend has changed over
time. As for charts, pie chart is used to compare percentages by each category or
items, flow chart to explain the sequence of steps in a process and bullet chart is
to list key points.
iv. Videos
Using videos in a presentation can be effective if you want to illustrate your subject
clearly. For example, if you are presenting a topic on how smoke detectors work,
you can show your audiences a video of an accidental fire igniting in a kitchen,
causing the smoke detector to sound to enhance the audiences’ interest.
v. PowerPoint slides
Presentation slides are commonly used to enhance a presentation and to create a
dynamic presentation. This is because, the PowerPoint slides can incorporate the
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ii. Keep your slides simple, clear and straightforward – limit each slide to a
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iv. Use a limited amount of text – if you are using PowerPoint, use a maximum of 6 lines
per slide and 6 words per line.
v. Use fonts effectively – choose fonts that are clear and easy to read; use the same
fonts on all your slides; use 36 to 44 font size for titles and major headings; and have
subheadings and other texts in 24 to 32 font size.
vi. Use colour effectively – some colours do not work well together such as red and
green. Use either dark print on a light background or vice versa.
vii. Use images strategically – only add images to PowerPoint slides when needed and
include captions so that the audience knows what they are viewing.
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• Do not rush over your visual aids.
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Activity 2
Log on to http://www.slideshare.net/satyajeet_02/how-to-make-effective-presentation to find
out more about producing effective PowerPoint slides for a presentation. Based on the slides
from the website, list down the DOs and DON’Ts of producing effective PowerPoint slides in
the table below.
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In an academic presentation, it is important to ensure that the language used allows audience
greater understanding and involvement with the presentation. Nevertheless, the presenter
must also ensure that the language fits the academic nature of the presentation. This can be
achieved through conciseness and the use of active sentences
In an academic presentation, it is important to ensure that the language used allows audience
greater understanding and involvement with the presentation. Nevertheless, the presenter
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Negative – You are not able to protect the future generation if you do not vaccinate
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Passive sentence: Blood should be donated because it can save lives of many
An active sentence sounds more responsible and credible in the above example as the doer
(We) performed the action (should donate) on an object (blood). As for the example of passive
sentence, it sounds weak, as if you are not taking responsibility for the problem because the
focus is on the object (blood).
An active sentence also creates better emotions as it provides a clearer visual in the mind of
the audience. Using active sentences in presentation also can evoke the audience’s emotion.
Example:
Active sentence: Many volunteers all around the world were helping the tsunami
victims.
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Passive sentence: The tsunami victims were being helped by many volunteers
ACTIVE PASSIVE
Simple present Alia reads two articles every
Two articles are read by Alia
day. every day.
Simple past Finn submitted the writing
The writing assignment was
assignment yesterday. submitted by Finn yesterday.
Present continuous The students are revising their
The writing drafts are being
writing drafts. revised by the students.
Past continuous The teacher was giving Feedbacks were being given
feedbacks on her students’
by the teacher on her students’
presentations. presentations.
Future The faculty will offer many new
Many new programmes will be
programmes next year. offered by the college next
year.
Present perfect Gary has completed his work. The work has been completed
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Past perfect They had won the choral The choral speaking
speaking competition.
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Future perfect The manager will have The new programmes will have
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Modal You must finish the outline by The outline must be finished
tomorrow. by tomorrow.
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You should have finished the The report should have been
reports three weeks ago. finished three weeks ago.
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2. Several steps have been taken by the employees to correct the errors found in the self-
audit reports.
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3. The participants were greeted by Rita Chong, and the keynote speaker was introduced
by her.
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5. The current status report has been attached, and I have highlighted the important figures.
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LECTURE NOTES 3
(WEEK 11)
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LPE2301 ACADEMIC INTERACTION & PRESENTATION
SEMESTER 1, 2019/2020
In addition to the content, an effective presentation also relies on the way in which the
presentation is delivered. This can be achieved by using appropriate vocal variety and
paralinguistic features. A good presentation would also encourage further audience
participation by allowing them to raise questions at the end of the presentation. Hence by
incorporating all the three elements mentioned, you would be able to deliver an impactful
presentation.
4. Pauses 3. Volume
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1. Rate (fast vs slow)
2. Intonation
• Intonation describes how the voice rises and falls in a speech. There are two types of
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• There is common intonation pattern for specific actions, and the speaker must ensure the
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• In a presentation, rising tone is normally used in the following situations:
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4. Pauses
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• Pauses can signal the transition between one idea with another and the end of a thought
unit, giving the audience time to let the ideas to “sink in”. It also could lend a dramatic
impact to a statement.
• Instead of using fillers, use pause to reorganise your thoughts.
• Fillers are vocalised sounds (“uh”, “urm”, “er”) that a speaker tends to use.
• When pausing, it is best that you maintain eye contact with your audience.
• There is no strict rule on precisely how long your pauses should be. Appropriate lengths
for pauses (from a fraction of second to several seconds or more) will vary considerably
based on your speaking style, the nature of your message, the duration of your talk, your
audience, and cultural norms.
• Make sure you pause at the end of thought units and not in the middle. Otherwise, you
may distract your audience from your ideas.
• You can use pauses to slow your pace down and make your sentences easier to
understand.
e.g.
In think with a proper use of social media, we can avoid all the harms in using
it.
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5. Stress
• By emphasising particular words or parts of words you create certain effects of stress.
• The meanings of the sentences below are changed when stress is given on different words.
E.g.
§ We all know that this is an extremely difficult market.
- by stressing on the word extremely, the speaker is trying to emphasise on the level of
difficulty in the market
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Activity 1 (Pauses)
Read the following speech. Use double slashes (//) to mark pauses in the sentences.
Finally let me come back to the key points of my talk. I have mentioned earlier that
in the first quarter more than half or 52%, of our revenues came from overseas.
This is in line with the targets we set out in 2004 when we decided we wanted to
continue to rely on overseas markets especially China to keep growing. In the past
three months, we’ve added more new customers in China than in any other
country.
Now what are our targets for the next few months? The first major step will be the
introduction of our PayPal payment service in China. And then we will focus on
finding customers in existing markets such as the US and Germany who haven’t
tried buying from our website yet.
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Clearly, we need to look at this again. (it’s obvious)
Clearly, we need to look at this again. (twice wasn’t enough)
1. We will never get such a perfect opportunity again. (it’s our only chance)
We will never get such a perfect opportunity again. (but perhaps the competition will)
3. There hasn’t been a dramatic increase in production costs. (but there has been a small
increase)
There hasn’t been a dramatic increase in production costs. (the increase was in other
cost)
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4. I think we’ve made a good start. (but you might not agree)
I think we’ve made a good start. (but there is still a lot to do)
6. Sales this month has been quite good. (but not fantastic)
Sales this month has been quite good. (we are pleased)
Now work with a partner and practice reading out the sentence pairs with the correct stress.
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Can you hear the difference in meaning?
3. What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
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Using appropriate paralinguistic features
• Posture, facial expression, gestures and eye contact affect the way listeners respond to a
speaker.
• When a speaker’s body language is inconsistent with his or her words, listeners often
believe the body language rather than the words.
• There are four major aspects of physical action that will affect the outcome of your
speeches.
2. Movement 3. Gestures
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1. Personal appearance
• Proper appearance increases your credibility and professionalism; therefore, audience
will likely listen to you
• Creating first impression is crucial and the first thing audience will look at is how you
look.
• Clothes and grooming – wear formal attire to look professional. Clothes should be
clean, ironed with appropriate matching shoes and tidy hair.
• Choose professional clothes that you are comfortable with as this can boost your
confidence.
• Regardless of the speaking situation, you should try to evoke a favourable first
impression.
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2. Movement
• Novice speakers are often unsure about what to do with their body while giving a
speech.
• Some pace back and forth across the podium, shift their weight from one foot to the
other, fidget with their notes or jingle coins in their pockets.
• Still others turn into statues, standing rigid and expressionless from beginning to end.
• Movements add energy and variety to your presentation and make you look more
confident.
• Here are some tips to control your movement to avoid distracting the audience:
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•When you reach the end of your speech, maintain eye contact for a few moments after
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• This allows your closing line to sink in.
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3. Gestures
• Many students do not know what to do with their hands during a presentation.
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• There is one rule that you need to bear in mind: whatever gestures you make should
not distract from your message.
• They should appear natural and meaningful, help clarify or reinforce your ideas and be
suited to the audience.
• Gesturing tends to work itself out as you acquire experience and confidence.
• Focus on your speech, and your gestures will take care of themselves.
• Avoid closed gestures: finger pointing to the audience, arms folded, hands covering
mouth, etc.
• Use open gestures: leaning forward, arms open, palms are relaxed, etc.
4. Eye contact
• Eye contact is direct visual contact with the eyes of another person.
• One of the quickest ways to establish a communicative bond with your listeners is to
look at them personally and pleasantly.
• When giving your speech, you should try to establish eye contact with your whole
audience.
• You can look briefly from one person to another.
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• Beware of the tendency to gaze intently at one part of the audience while ignoring the
rest.
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Handling Q&A in academic presentation
• The Q&A session is a common part in academic presentation.
• It gives opportunity to the audience to ask questions to the speakers.
• A speaker who handles questions well can strengthen the impact of his or her speech.
• Here are the suggestions to get you started on the right foot.
• Q&A session does not only benefit the audience, it also gives equal chance for you to
reinforce the message, clarify the misunderstandings and continue selling the ideas.
Listen carefully
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- give full attention to the questioner.
- when faced with unclear question, try to rephrase it by saying: "If I
understand your question, it seems to me that you are asking ... "
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Stay on track
- allow one follow-up question from each person, and do not let
yourself be dragged into a personal debate.
- if someone attempts to ask more than two questions, respond
graciously by saying, "This is an interesting line of questioning, but
we need to give other people a chance to ask questions."
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When handling Q&A session, you have to follow a certain structure in order for your response
to be effective and well-received.
1. Invite questions
At the beginning of the talk, let the audience know when they can ask questions. You can
either suggest the audience to ask questions at the end of the presentation or they may
interrupt you with questions at any moment during the presentation. These are some of the
expressions you can use when inviting questions.
Does anyone have any questions?
Who has a question for me?
Do you have anything you’d like to ask regarding my presentation?
4. Respond to questions
Respond to questions honestly and keep responses as focused as possible. Sometimes
you might be asked irrelevant questions or questions that you do not know. In this case,
keep your poise and try to respond using these language expressions.
To be honest, this question is beyond the scope of my expertise.
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Sorry, I’m afraid I don’t know the answer to your question, but I will try to find out for
you.
I’m afraid I don’t have the information with me.
I think your question raises a different issue.
Activity 5
Respond to the Q&A situations below by writing the appropriate language expressions.
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