Topic sentence:

My mom is a brave and hardworking woman who has overcoming many obstacles through her
life. her childhood was tormented because she lost her parents when she was a 4 aged girl so,
She had to live her relatives in different houses and she was separated from her siblings and
she started to struggle for herself because she had to work for pay her expenses.

Supporting sentences

She had to droop her studies because she had to work as a babysitter in her aunt Juana.

She came to Lima when she was 14

She didn’t meet her relatives almost 10 years

Buying her own house was a dream, but she got her own home.

She is 70 and she says “the effort and hard work is the clue of being a successful person”

Concluding sentences

Ever the life is so tough, you can change your faith just try to do your best effort.