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2. Repetitions
3. Synonyms II. Coherence & Cohesion
4. Pronouns
COHERENCE: This means that
o III. Language Use sentences are arranged in a logical
manner, making them easily
o IV. Mechanics understood by reader.
COHESION: connection of ideas at
sentence level.
Cohesion
The property of unity in a written text or
a segment of spoken discourse that
stems from links among its surface
elements, as when words in one
sentence are repeated in another, and
especially from the fact that some words
or phrases depend on their
interpretation upon material in preceding Spatial
or following text.
The sentences of a paragraph are
Example: Be assured of this. Most arranged according to geographical
people do not want to fight. However, location, such as left to right, up-to-
they will do so when provoked. down, etc.
Emphatic
Chronological
It is when information found in a
The details are arranged in order in paragraph is arranged to emphasized
which they happened. certain points depending on the writer’s
purpose.
Example: This morning was crazy.
My alarm clock was set for PM The coherence of the paragraph is
instead of AM, so I woke up really established in one of two ways:
late. I just threw on some clothes
and ran out the door. I rode my bike a. From least to most important
as fast as I could and thought that I
b. From most to least important
was going to be late for sure, but
when I got there everyone was
outside and there were fire trucks all
lined up in front of school. I guess
somebody pulled the fire alarm
before class started. It worked out
though, because nobody really
noticed or minded that I was tardy.
Example: After looking at all the a) Time: first, immediately, afterward,
brochures and talking to several before, at the same time after, later,
salesmen, I decided to purchase an SLR earlier , next, etc.
camera. For several years I had been
dissatisfied with the results I was getting b) Sequence: moreover, furthermore, next,
from my point-and-shoot camera. The also finally, last, another, additionally,
framing was imprecise and the focus first, second, etc.
was not always accurate. I had planned
c) Space: above, next to, behind, beside,
a vacation to an area that promised
many fabulous photo opportunities, and d) Illustration: for an instance,
I wanted to capture each with accuracy. specifically, for example, namely, to
But the most important reason I decided illustrate, in this case, etc.
on the SLR camera was the great
versatility it offered. e) Comparison: similarly, also, in the
same way, still, likewise, in comparison,
In the above paragraph, the organization
too, etc.
moves from the least important idea
(dissatisfaction with the results of the f) Contrast: but, despite, however, even
point-and shoot camera) to the most though, on the other hand, yet, although,
important idea (the versatility offered
with the SLR camera). g) Cause and Effect: because, as a result,
consequently, then, so, since, etc.
B. Signal Devices
h) Conclusion: thus, therefore, in short,
1. Transitions
a. Time 2. Repetitions
b. Sequence Repetitions of ideas keep continuity and
c. Space highlight important ideas.
d. illustration It could be a word, phrase, or a full
e. Comparison sentence, or a poetical line repeated to
f. Contrast emphasize its significance in the entire
g. Cause and Effect text.
h. Conclusion
Example of Repetition:
If you think you can do it, you can do
2. Repetitions it
3. Synonyms The boy was a good footballer,
4. Pronouns because his father was a footballer,
and his grandfather was a footballer.
Signal Devices The president said, “work, work, and
work,” are the keys to success.
Words that give readers an idea of how
the points in your paragraph are
progressing 3. Synonyms
These are words similar in meaning
Examples: to important words or phrases that
1. Transitions: words that connect one idea prevent tedious repetitions.
to another, in order for our ideas to flow
4. Pronouns
smoothly.
Words that connect readers to the
original word that the pronouns
replace.
Too unsophisticated
Example of Pronouns used in an
Taboo Example Alternative
actual sentence:
Bad A bad result A (poor/negative) result
Get This model gets This model receives
INCORRECT: Rodrigo Duterte
attention attention
is the 16th President of the
Good A good example A (useful/prime)
Republic of the Philippines.
example
Aside from that, Rodrigo Duterte
also served as Davao City’s Show The below The below figure
Mayor for a long period of time. figure shows (illustrates/demonstrate/r
Rodrigo Duterte is also known eveal)
by the popular as an adamant Big. A big sample A (large/sizeable)sample
leader. Humu
ngous
CORRECT: Rodrigo Duterte
is the 16th President of the
Republic of the Philippines.
Aside from that, he also served
as Davao City’s Mayor for a Too vague
long period of time.He also
Tab Exampl Alternative
known by the populace as an
oo e
adamant leader.
Stuff People People are concerned
are about their
III. Language Use connect (belongings/possessions/pers
Appropriateness of word/vocabulary ed onal effects)
usage. about
Words and phrase one must avoid to their
use in order to practice appropriate stuff
language use: Thin The The report presents many
g report (details/findings/recommend
Table of Contents present ations)
s many
1. Too Informal
things
2. Too unsophisticated
3. Too vague
4. other tips Other tips: