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Name : Yoga Raditya Nugraha

NIM : 16920230
Topic Sentences:
Less touching objects in public is very important during the pandemic.

Contributing Factors:
• Less touching objects in public during a pandemic can reduce the risk of transmission.
• If the risk of transmission reduced, positive cases of corona in Indonesia will also decrease.
• Public needs solution so that corona cases in Indonesia are reduced.

Paragraph:
During this pandemic, the transmission of the corona virus is very fast, it can be transmitted through
objects that we hold in public places such as toilet door handles, elevator buttons, ticket buttons when
entering malls and many more. Why we can be infected? objects in public places have also been touched
by many people we do not know about their health condition, and unconsciously after touched the
object, we touched our face and from that we can get infected by corona virus.

Existing Solution
1. We need to reduce contact.
2. Use face mask.

Propose Solution
1. We need tool that can help us touch objects without touching directly.
Proposed solution: creates the tool “touch objects without touching directly”:
1. Create the tool that can help us touch objects without touching directly.
2. Create the design of the tool.
3. Consider the price of the tool before putting it to mass production.
4. Advantage that given from the tools for public.

Order:
1. General to Specific
Reason: I want developing a paragraph by moving from a broad observation about Covid cases
are increasing in Indonesia to specific details that is solution to reduce covid cases in Indonesia in
support of that topic.
2. Logical Order
Reason: I want to explain that my solution makes an impact to reduce covid cases in Indonesia
Summary:
Paragraph:

Clean surfaces often. Pay particular attention to surfaces that are touched frequently,
such as handles, light switches, work surfaces and electronic devices.Use disposable cloths,
paper roll or disposable mop heads to clean all hard surfaces, floors, chairs, door handles and
sanitary fittings – think ‘one site, one wipe, in one direction’. Any cloths, paper roll or mop
heads used can be disposed of with your usual domestic waste.
It is fine to use your normal household detergent when cleaning in your home.
Information on cleaning and waste disposal outside of your household is available.COVID-19
spreads through small droplets, aerosols, and direct contact. Surfaces and belongings can be
contaminated with COVID-19 when people with the infection touch them or cough, talk or
breathe over them.
Viruses on a surface could infect another person if they touch the surface and then touch
their eyes, nose, and mouth. Cleaning surfaces will reduce the amount of contamination and so
reduce the risk of spread.The more you clean, the more likely you are to remove viruses from
an infected surface before you or another person touches it.
Summary:
COVID-19 spreads through small droplets, aerosols, and direct contact, we can reduce with clean the
surfaces often, pay particular attention to surfaces that are touched frequently.
Link : https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/how-to-stop-the-spread-of-coronavirus-covid-
19/how-to-stop-the-spread-of-coronavirus-covid-19
Introduction Paragraph:
During this pandemic, the transmission of the corona virus is very fast, today (March 30, 2021)
128 million people have been infected with the corona virus, the virus can be transmitted through objects
that we hold in public places such as toilet door handles, elevator buttons, ticket buttons when entering
malls and many more. Why we can be infected? objects in public places have also been touched by
many people we do not know about their health condition, and unconsciously after touched the object,
we touched our face and from that we can get infected by corona virus. That is why we need to reduce
contact with objects, with tool that can help us touch objects without touching directly.
No Touch Key
The coronavirus spreads rapidly during this pandemic, today (May 4, 2021), the virus has
infected 154 million people worldwide. The government has put some regulations to slow the spread of
the virus, such as doing all work from home, regularly washing our hands, and wearing a mask while
going out, but the virus continues to spread rapidly. The virus can spread by touching objects in public
places such as toilet door handles, elevator buttons, mall ticket buttons, and many other items that have
been touched by many people that we do not know about their health status. Reducing contact with
many surfaces in public areas is important, after we touch an object directly, we are more likely to touch
our eyes or rub our nose, which may infect us with the coronavirus (through surface transmission).
One of the solutions we need is a simple tool that functions as a finger extension and acts as a
barrier between the hand and all types of surfaces that we cannot avoid in our daily lives. "No Touch
Key" is the name of this tool. This tool has a horizontal position and is formed like the letter "P". The
front has a stylus point that can be used on all electronic touch screens such as cell phone screens, ATM,
elevator buttons, and others, on the other side, there is a rounded edge that functions as a handgrip.
The “No Touch Key” is made of copper-brass material. "Copper and brass are known to have
antimicrobial properties (including antivirus) for a long time," said Glenn Randall, MD, professor of
microbiology at the University of Chicago. As additional information, a study in the New England
Journal of Medicine reported that SARS-CoV2 died after four hours of using copper, which is likely to
be similar to brass. Another study in the Journal of Hospital Infection, the coronavirus can survive for
up to 2-3 days on plastic or stainless steel and up to 4 days on wood.
For the general public, "No Touch Key" has many benefits. The first benefit is that the
cleanliness level will improve. By using the "No Touch Key," you can avoid directly contacting the
surface while also lowering the risk of virus infection. The second benefit is that the tool is long-lasting
and easy to use. The "No Touch Key" is made of copper-brass and is guaranteed to last. Rounded edges
on the fingers give comfort and the tool can be used almost anywhere. The third benefit is that the "No
Touch Key" is small enough to fit in pockets, wallets, and bags, measures only 2.83 "x 1.18" x 0.25
"making it very compact and practical. The fourth benefit is that the tool has an ergonomic design that
will not harm the surface it interacts on.
One of the solutions for reducing the rising number of coronavirus cases is the "No Touch Key"
tool. This copper-brass-based tool not only helps us from touching the surface directly, but it also has
an elegant look, is lightweight enough to hold anywhere, and can fit in pockets. While the "No Touch
Key" tool will help to reduce the number of coronavirus cases, the most important thing is to remember
to wash our hands regularly. In addition to keeping your hands clean, wash your contact device as soon
as possible after use to prevent the spread of viruses. While the "No Touch Key" tool will help to reduce
the number of coronavirus cases, the most important thing is to remember to wash our hands regularly.
In addition to keeping your hands clean, wash your contact device as soon as possible after use to
prevent the spread of viruses.
List of references :
Transmission and incubation period of coronavirus - Infectious diseases and vaccinations - THL.
(2021). Retrieved 5 May 2021, from https://thl.fi/en/web/infectious-diseases-and-vaccinations/what-s-
new/coronavirus-covid-19-latest-updates/transmission-and-protection-coronavirus/transmission-and-
incubation-period-of-coronavirus
You Probably Shouldn't Wear Gloves Out in Public—But These No-Touch Tools Are a Safe
Alternative. (2021). Retrieved 5 May 2021, from https://www.health.com/condition/infectious-
diseases/coronavirus/keychain-touch-tools-safe-gloves-alternative
John, S. (2021). These Keychains Can Help You Avoid Touching Door Handles, Elevator Buttons, and
So Much More. Retrieved 5 May 2021, from https://www.forbes.com/sites/forbes-personal-
shopper/2020/04/23/these-tools-can-help-keep-you-safe-from-microbes-by-letting-your-avoid-
touching-door-handles-elevator-buttons-and-so-much-more/?sh=261af4f7602a
Touch Key Buckle Contacless (2021). Retrieved 5 May 2021, from https://www.amazon.ae/Touch-
Key-Buckle-Contactless-Touchscreen/dp/B08B33TNM6

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