TIP HAT-TRICK CHO WRITING TASK 2

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TIP PARAPHRASE A LOT OF

Paraphrase sao điểm cao

· causes
leads to
results in
contributes to
Deforestation= forest clearance
bị gây ra
is/ are caused by results from
One of the primary reasons for B is A primary=principal=main=major reason lý do =cause gây ra
One of the primary causes of B is A

Chỉ giải pháp để giải quyết vấn đề gì Thay should

The government should spend more money on education
It is necessary for s.o to + V
It is necessary for the government to spend more money on education
Cấu trúc 2

One of the most effective solution to tackle this problem would be for sb to +V
One of the most effective solution to tackle this problem would be for the government to spend more money on education.
Bị động

More money should be spent on education

A Ảnh hưởng xấu/tiêu cực OR ảnh hưởng tốt lên B A has/ have a negative effect on
negative=severe=harmful=detrimentalpositive =beneficial=advantageous effect= impact
EX Smoking has a negative effect on health A negatively affect(s) B
negatively=severely=adversely=detrimentallypositively affect Smoking negatively affects health

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TIP HAT-TRICK CHO WRITING TASK 1

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thủ thuật lập hat-trick cho idea correctly và comfortably ( ÉO CHO NHÓC NÀO)

🥋 Xu tầm đề environment/endangered species

HÀNH VI

Chuyên về HÀNH VI
ENVIRONMENT

Nếu đề đề cập sâu vào global warming + environment issue

💡 As the impacts of issues including global warming and water contamination become palpable,
in the 21st century. Although some argue that these solutions might divide on whether this responsibility rests with state officials or ordinary citizens, I would believe that ...

before. Có một số lý do tại sao trái đất đang trở nên ấm hơn bao giờ hết.
plants to the air are rising at alarming rates. ⇒This leads to an increasing concentration of carbon dioxide in our atmosphere, acting as a roof of a greenhouse, trapping heat and causing g

idely known that trees help absorb carbon dioxide in the air and thus reduce climate change. ⇒However, with large areas of forests being cut down and burnt for different purposes, car

Therefore,⇒Life would become much more difficult and soon be wiped out, if each individual did
nothing to tackle these natural resources' problems, such as fossil fuels, became scarce.
 😇 SOLUTION
There are various measures that could be implemented to tackle the problem of global warming.

First, it is necessary for the government to encourage power stations and plants to use more
environmentally-friendly energy sources such as nuclear or renewable energy instead of fossil
fuels.
⇒ Indeed, It is a good practice for each individual to turn off the lights and unplug the chargers after use.
Some electrical appliances are found to consume electricity even after being turned off. This is good for
one's pockets as well.

Second, stricter punishments should be imposed for illegal logging and forest clearance to ensure that
forests are properly managed and protected. ↔As individuals, we can help mitigate global warming by
planting more trees in our gardens or taking part in environmental protection programmes such as
community planting.
⇒By taking these actions, this problem would be properly tackled.

INCONCLUSION
In conclusion, there are various factors ⇒leading to global warming, and steps need to be taken to
address this serious issue.

government and individual's Responsibility

On the other hand, reversing the damage done to the planet is a massive undertaking that seems
impossible without government intervention.
Most of the ongoing environmental problems directly result from energy production and consumption-
something that can be regulated with legislation.⇒ In addition to this, the funds they have at their disposal
and their ability to mobilize resources make governments indispensable in tackling environmental issues.
⇒For example, taxpayers' money can be ploughed back into researching ways to make green
technologies more commonplace and affordable.
On the other hand, while the participation of governments in alleviating environmental problems is wholly
warranted, it would be imprudent to underestimate the contribution of ordinary citizens. ⇒People can
make a huge difference with simple changes in lifestyle like taking public transport or classifying trash.
Another way in which individuals can help protect the environment is through their consumption.
⇒Patronizing stores that champion sustainable business practices and boycotting companies that are
reluctant to reduce waste are practical steps that consumers can take to push for a greener future.
⇒ By the same token, the electorate can utilize their votes to make an impact by electing officials that
care deeply about the planet's deterioration and are committed to changing the status quo.

environmental conservation is a colossal responsibility that must be borne by both the state and the
people

ĐỀ CẬP VỀ ENDANGERED ANIMALS

😇humans.
Many animals are endangered. Some people argue that we should only protect animals that are useful to
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fossil fuels

Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged.
Is this a positive or negative development?

Although more countries are turning to power generated from renewable sources like wind and sunlight as a
greener substitute, I would argue that along with widespread support, alternative energy also raises certain
 concerns.
Negative

Opponents of renewables could cite several reasons for their worries

First, this type of energy is prohibitively expensive to produce and store, which means less-developed nations are
out of reach. Second, the current output of alternative energy is far from being enough to meet the demands of most
nations. Finally, some renewables could be weaponized, which could make them a global security threat. The
escalating international tensions surrounding uranium enrichment and the development of weapons-grade nuclear
material in countries such as Iran and North Korea are a testament to the risk of renewables.

Positive

On the other hand, despite the aforementioned setbacks, much of the world is still in favour of alternative energy
sources, and justifiably so. The most obvious benefit of this type of power is its minimal impact on the environment.
Renewables have an extremely low carbon footprint compared to fossil fuels. Indeed, given how dire environmental
pollution has become and how it affects our very existence, the switch to carbon-free energy sources is necessary.
Another compelling point is that because they are created from resources that are practically infinite, alternative
energy is the answer to the imminent energy crisis.

In conclusion, I believe the upside of alternative energy sources is far more significant than their downside. While
there are real challenges that we need to overcome to make universal adoption of renewables feasible and
affordable, recent success with storage and production technologies promises that this will soon be a reality

LAWS AND POLICIES

CHUYÊN VỀ TRANSPORT
cyclist vs motorist

Some issues occur when both cyclists and motorists share on the same road.
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences, each individual can take steps to mitigate these
potential problems.
 😇 Disadvantage/ Problem
Such accidents frequently result in grave injuries, particularly to cyclists who are vulnerable with litt or no prote
Những vụ tai nạn như vậy thường dẫn đến chấn thương nghiêm trọng, đặc biệt là đối với những người đi xe đạp, n
In other words⇒People driving cars would also be faced with this unnecessary accident when they
share the same road with bicyclists
người lái xe ô tô cũng sẽ phải đối mặt với những bất tiện khi họ đi chung đường với người đi xe đạp.
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Another further pressure will include cyclists, those who are sometimes responsible for causing accidents when they do not abide by the rules o
Một áp lực khác sẽ bao gồm những người đi xe đạp, những người đôi khi chịu trách nhiệm gây ra tai nạn kh họ không tuân thủ các quy tắc của đườ
Indeed⇒The possibility of an accident between a car and a bicycle is much higher than when they ha
their own road, and in case of accidents, the mortality rate could also be greater.
Khả năng xảy ra tai nạn giữa ô tô và xe đạp cao hơn nhiều so với khi họ có đường riêng, và trong trường h xảy ra tai nạn, tỷ lệ tử vong cũng có thể
Thus⇒ If each individual did nothing to tackle this issue, reducing accident's rate would be
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😇 SOLUTION
e are several measures that could be taken to alleviate the mentioned problem
y government officials in other provinces and cities have prioritized expenditure on road safety. They have invested in transport infrastructure by measures such as upgrading and expand
u chính phủ đã ưu tiên chi tiêu cho an toàn đường bộ. Họ đã đầu tư vào cơ sở hạ tầng giao thông bằng các biện pháp như nâng cấp và mở rộng cung cấp giao thông công cộng
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A second measure is introducing restrictions on car drivers. Switzerland has implemented policies t discourage motorists from entering the metropolis during rush h
Biện pháp thứ hai là đưa ra các hạn chế đối với người lái xe ô tô. Thụy Sĩ đã thực hiện các chính sách khôn khuyến khích người lái xe ô tô vào thành phố trong giờ cao đi
As a consequence, people using bicycles can utilize it to protect others' live, instead of driving cars
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😇 In conclusion, cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads is the main reason for the increasing
accident rate. Many issues have emerged from this phenomenon, however, there are measures that can be taken
to alleviate these issues. ⇒ THUỘC LÒNG NÈ

Economy (jobs)

🥽 xu tầm đề economy
 😇 Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree OR Scientific research should be funded by governments rather than
commercial
organizations? To what extent do you agree or
disagree?. REASON 1 DISAGREE
The private sector argues that it is willing to undertake scientific research; nevertheless, there are two
significant drawbacks.

⇒In terms of the research's quality and objectivity, corporations conducting it may be tempted to manipulate
the outcomes to maximize profits.⇒ There have been numerous controversies due to new goods being
rushed onto the market without adequate testing.

⇒ To illustrate, a German pharmaceutical company produced thalidomide, which resulted in the birth of
thousands of deformed infants.

⇒From an ethical perspective, putting genetic engineering research in the hands of companies may have
severe societal implications such as animal testing, with unproven effects that may destroy entire ecosystems
as a result of messing with the environment.

REASON 2 AGREE
Although national and local authorities have to allocate resources to an extensive number of areas of public
spending, they must be responsible for scientific research.

Firstly, the highest standards can be set by providing funding for university departments to carry out high-
quality research designed to benefit society, not break into new markets, or gain a competitive edge.

⇒Thus acquired knowledge may be distributed throughout the academic community on a global scale.

Second, decision-making authority is the unique approach to prioritizing expenditure on specific research
fields, taking societal demands, both present and future, into account.

⇒One typical example is the development of renewable energy to satisfy rising demand.

THÓI QUEN

Chuyên về THÓI QUEN

FAMILY AND RELATIONSHIP

🥌 IDEA PARENT
 😇 Many women are choosing to have children later in life.
In our modern society, there has been an ongoing trend towards bearing children later in life. From my perspective, this development is given rise to b

Lý do tại sao họ có con trễ

There are two major compelling reasons as to why some endorse delaying their parenthood.
First and foremost, as people are investing more time in pursuing career path, having infants can be a major distraction. ⇒This is especially true for som
⇒For example, fight attendants are required to travel so frequently that they can ill afford to both fulfil their work and rear their babies. Work commit
burden on most younger couples, also beget the delay of childbearing.

EDUCATION

YOUNGSTERS

young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy.
It is undeniable that, particularly in developed countries, youngsters have the ability to become ability to wealthier,
healthier, and live longer, but they are at loss of blast/lack blast. Although there will undoubtedly be some
negative consequences, solutions can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.
lý do tại sao bọn trẻ ít vui/ tại sao bọn trẻ hông tập trung học được
It is understandable as to why young adults have a severe lack of joy when it comes to an indispensable role that
their parent plays in their lives and this could be attributed to several reasons. Firstly, the key reason of
unhappiness is that the youth of today is likely to avoid of any significant amount of life due to concrete jungles.
There is every likelihood that they are swayed and overwhelmed by playing computer games or harmful habits. As a
consequence, these distractions might prevent students from concentrating on their studies, and adversely affect
their academic outcomes. Thus, the adults, especially those from rural areas, cannot continue their education or job
due to boredom or under a lot of pressure.

Furthermore, there are several actions that could be taken to tackle this matter mentioned above.

First and foremost, one measure for strengthening family bonds would be to balance working life and family life so
that they can spend more quality time with their family members.

Another strategy is that families need to teach their children about the value of hard work and the serious
consequences of harmful spending habits.
⇒Therefore, many disconnect themselves from commercial advertisements and they tend to focus on a daily basis.
To sum up, various measures can be implemented to deal with the situations that are certain to arise as
these trends

Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons
and solutions of this issue?

It is true that high-school graduates have a severe lack of financial management skills. Although there will
undoubtedly be some negative consequences, solutions can be taken to mitigate these problems
Lý do họ ra trường với 1 thái độ tiêu cực trong việc học/ lý do tại sao nữ học nghệ thuật

There are several justifications for this trend. Many students are forced to take the courses that they are not
interested in. As a result, they might feel bored, stressed and hold a negative attitude towards learning, which
could lead to an undesirable outcome.
⇒ For example, Some of my friends who were forced to study art subjects decided to drop out of the course after 2
months and did not enter university.
Lý do nhiều sinh viên ra trường nhưng không được học cách quản lý tiền/ lý do tại sao nam học công nghệ
The current educational system places overemphasis on academic subjects while essential life skills including
personal financial management are being neglected. → High school leavers are familiar with answering theoretical
questions yet feel like fish out of water balancing their income and expenditure.
Another reason is demanding learning programmers. ⇒Today, many students are burdened with too much
homework related to financial management skills, which causes stress and anxiety. ⇒As a consequence, Pressure
and anxiety could lead these kids to hate learning (economic skills) after leaving school.
giải pháp cho việc giúp đỡ học quản lý tiền

However, there are several actions that could be taken to solve this problem mentioned above.
⇒These days, many schools offer natural science subjects in learning programmers that allows students to learn
more conveniently without the need of attending the traditional classes. ⇒By doing this, many will develop a range
of social skills by taking part in teamwork or discussion activities.
Another strategy is that many schools should equip pupils with financial management skills helps pupils make wiser
decisions when it comes to spending and saving.

⇒For instance, many have difficulty catching up with their peers; therefore, they need to be spoon-fed by teachers.
Solution cho trẻ em hông bị chán học kinh tế

Children should be allowed to study the subjects that they enjoy.

When they are doing what they love, they would devote their time and effort to their studies.

Learning programmes should be properly designed to meet students’ needs without being too demanding.

⇒Thus, Children should be given enough free time to relax, unwind relieve pressure.

⇒ Indeed, Parents should educate children about the importance of being a good learner in their later lives.

In conclusion, various measures can be implemented to tackle this matter that is certain to arise as these serious
issues

children

It is undeniable that the question of whether children should be encouraged to maximize their potential to try be the
best remains a source of controversy in society. However, I would believe that it is imperative for children to put
effort in whatever they do.

To begin with, children are innocent and vulnerable therefore they should be allowed to live carefree instead of
being pushed beyond their limits in all activities. ⇒Being compelled to get the best results might foster competitive
thinking in children, leading to their win-at-all-cost attitude. To illustrate, many pupils are exhausted when having
to put excessive efforts in everything. ⇒Such pressure prevents students from enjoying their lives and might have
a counterproductive impact on their academic performance.
In spite of of the aforementioned negative effects, there are many merits when they aim their best no matter
what they do.

⇒ A typical example is that children have more opportunities to gain an overview of a wide range of subjects and
understand different aspects of life. This helps them to develop comprehensive thinking and become a more
well- rounded person.

Trying their best in all activities will help them explore and expand their talents and potential.

⇒Therefore, by being exposed to a variety of activities and doing their best in all of them, children can identify their
subject of interest

In conclusion, while many people assume that it is unnecessary for children to try their best in everything, I contend
with the idea that targeting the best is essential for the career prospects of the young generation.
HEALTH

Topic: It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness
than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On the one hand, there are several reasons to allot funds for promoting a healthy way of life. Firstly, it can help
prevent certain fatal diseases.

⇒For example, although some types of cancer are nearly impossible to treat due to metastasis, cancer risk can be
significantly reduced by lowering daily sugar intake. Secondly, a healthy lifestyle might increase the average life
expectancy of the population.⇒ If free periodic medical check-ups are provided, many diseases will be detected and
cured in the early stages, which contributes to the extension of the average human lifespan.
On the other hand, for ethical reasons, an equal amount of funding should be provided for developing treatments of
sick people.⇒ Even when people have a healthy lifestyle, there are various inevitable problems that could adversely
affect people’s health such as environmental pollution and natural disasters. ⇒In such cases, it would be an act of
humanitarianism to provide ill people with proper healthcare.
⇒In Vietnam, for instance, a proportion of the national budget is annually allocated for flood victims in the central
area. Without financial aid from the government, these people can hardly afford to pay for their medical fees.

In conclusion, while spending money on promoting a healthy way of life might help extend human life expectancy
and prevent certain deadly diseases, I contend that the same amount of that should be used for developing
treatments for disadvantaged patients. (312 words)

OBESITY

It is true that the prevalence of obese and unhealthy children across the world is on the rise. While I agree that the
government needs to take responsibility for this issue, I believe that families and schools also have a part to play.

On the one hand, the government should adopt the responsibility in tackling the problem because actions taken by
them tend to have more profound effects.

⇒Since they have the authority to enact laws and regulations, governments can easily restrict and constrain the
consumption of unhealthy products such as calorie-dense foods and sugary soft drinks which are significant risk
factors.

⇒ For example, they could impose heavier taxes on such foods and drinks to discourage children from consuming
them excessively. Moreover, by initiating a campaign on healthy lifestyles, the authorities could subsidize
nutritious foods to enhance public health.

However, I opine that families and schools are also responsible for addressing this problem.

⇒Regarding families, as children spend most of their time with their parents, they are more likely to share the same
diet with their family members. If parents make health-conscious food decisions, their children can learn from them
and develop healthy dietary habits, which is the key to the prevention of childhood obesity. In terms of schools,
public education should put greater emphasis on the adverse effects of sedentary lifestyles and malnutrition. For
instance, teachers could advocate strategies to tackle the obesity pandemic devised by the government by
integrating dietary knowledge into certain lessons.

In conclusion, although the government should take steps to mitigate the detrimental effects of the overweight and
poor health crisis among youngsters, I believe that the burden should also be shared by families and schools for the
reasons mentioned above. (286 words)

ENVIRONMENT

Nếu đề chỉ đề cập vào tầm quan trọng của nature vs learning

People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons for this and
how can people learn more about the natural world?
Problem/reason (Why) /disagree⇒reason/ disadvantage
There are two main causes for people’s insufficient knowledge of the importance of nature.
 From an educational perspective, the first reason is that the curriculum of public schools places little emphasis on
nature and the environment.⇒ In specific, students are commonly made to spend the majority of their time on
subjects that improve their career prospects such as mathematics and literature.
⇒As a consequence, this leaves the students with little time for gaining insights into nature.
Ở góc độ giáo dục, nguyên nhân đầu tiên là do chương trình giảng dạy của các trường công lập ít chú trọng đến
thiên nhiên và môi trường. ⇒Cụ thể, học sinh thường được yêu cầu dành phần lớn thời gian cho các môn học cải
thiện triển vọng nghề nghiệp của họ như toán học và văn học.
⇒Kết quả là, điều này khiến học sinh có ít thời gian để hiểu sâu hơn về tự nhiên.
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Another cause of this is the hectic schedule of most workers in nowadays society.⇒ Owing to the
heavy workload, people are so mentally and physically drained at work.
⇒Therefore, they tend to opt for recreational activities to relieve stress instead of learning about how
important the natural world is.

Một nguyên nhân khác của điều này là lịch trình bận rộn của hầu hết người lao động trong xã hội ngày nay.
⇒Do khối lượng công việc nặng nề nên mọi người rất mệt mỏi về tinh thần và thể chất trong công việc.
⇒Vì vậy, họ có xu hướng lựa chọn các hoạt động giải trí để giải tỏa căng thẳng thay vì tìm hiểu về thế giới tự nhiên
quan trọng như thế nào.
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😇 Solution
People can adopt a range of solutions to deal with this problem
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Classes about nature and the environment should be made a compulsory part of education worldwid especially primary education
Các lớp học về thiên nhiên và môi trường nên trở thành một phần bắt buộc của giáo dục trên toàn thế giới, biệt là giáo dục tiểu học
⇒In this way, the environmental awareness of people can be raised right from a young age
Có như vậy, ý thức về môi trường của con người mới được nâng lên ngay từ khi còn nhỏ
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Those having a tight schedule could utilize break time at work to keep themselves informed about th essential role nature plays.
Những người có lịch trình dày đặc có thể tận dụng thời gian giải lao tại nơi làm việc để cập nhật thông tin ch bản thân về vai trò thiết yếu của bản chất
⇒ For example, during lunch breaks, office workers can read books or watch documentaries about
nature to acquire knowledge of the environment.
Ví dụ, trong giờ nghỉ trưa, nhân viên văn phòng có thể đọc sách hoặc xem phim tài liệu về thiên nhiên để tiế thu kiến thức về môi trường.
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Bản chất, phẩm chất

Culture

🌓 xu tầm đề culture

People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature such as novels and poems. Do you
agree or disagree?

● Phần màu đỏ: Trong đề bài không đề cập đến của đề bài, nếu em ghi như vậy sẽ dễ bị lạc
những ý này, đang là lập luận của em, thì mang đề.
xuống thân bài-> ở mở bài em nên paraphrase lại ý
● should not be neglected in highschool.
 ● Câu “To illustrate …’ này của em bị thiếu động từ
● Ở trước em chưa đề cập gì đến ‘economic
terms’ nên câu “Furthermore…’ này chưa hợp lý
● At the same time, the culture of a society ….
● … for the reasons I have mentioned above, I
believe that literature should remain a compulsory
subject in the highschool’s curriculum.
BAND 6.0
😇 It is undeniable that high-school graduates would waste more time learning literature such as novels and
oems. Although there are those who argue that these practical subjects are unclearly valuable, I strongly disagree with this trend that the study of novels, poems and plays should be neglecte
sagree
SƯỜN BÀI_VOCAB GIÚP BẠN ĐẠT WRITING 7.0
Many people believe that in order to prepare young
people for the world of work or higher education, high
school students should focus on practical subjects such
as vocational courses as well as on the sciences. While
these skills are clearly valuable to the community, I
strongly disagree with this trend that the study of
novels, poems and plays should there be neglected in
high school.
To begin with, there are main reasons why literature
lessons allow students to deepen the understanding of
their country’s history. To illustrate, many Vietnamese
short stories including “Hàn Mạc Tử” and “Tiểu đội xe
không kính” and similar works written in the
revolutionary era in spite of suffering from the French
and American colonialism. When reading works of
literary fiction, Vietnamese pupils can not only feel but
also vividly visualize the poor living conditions in these
historical periods. In this way, literature knowledge is a
valuable asset providing youngsters with insights about
the forces that shape their country’s past and present.
Furthermore, the literary heritage of humanity cannot
be calculated only in economic terms.If high school
students are not encouraged to appreciate the
aesthetic qualities of novels and poems, then the
creative writers of the next generation will lack the role
models of literary geniuses. They must study the
language, the techniques, and the portrayal of
characters in order to become talented playwrights,
novelists or poets. As the same time, the culture of a
society is passed on and enriched through the
generations.
To sum up, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I
still believe that focusing on literary horizons is the
best choice compared to wasting more time learning
other subject like mathematics and biology.