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the line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. It has 4 different
age groups. Generally, the old age had had a biggest percent of this total population in New Zealand
while the propotaion of people from 25 to 37 was precited to be on Zero in 2050. On the other hand, a
group of young people and people from 34 -45 was a predictable rocketing.
In 1950, New Zealand had had 60 percent of people above 65 age, which was over 12 times as much as
those younger who had had only 5%. Two age groups between 25 to 37 and 38 to 45 had fluctured in
20% to 25%.
From 1950 to 2000, the younger had climbed sharply that increase by 2 times and stabilized with the
data of group from 25 to 37. The percentage of the oldest had reached a peak of 70 percent in 1990 and
dropped slightly at 60% . A group of people between 35-45 had been upward, it had reached a high at
48% in 1990 then fell back at 40% in 2000.
The percentage of people over 65 age and people from 25-37 will be predicted to decrease 5% for the
senior and 2% for the second group. Young people and a group of 38-45 will make up 20% and 40% of
the whole population of New Zealand
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1, tense

2, sentence structures:

3, sentence task 1: statement+ dư liệu data/ figure+ comment.

4,length

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Task 1 : Line graph

The line graphs shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
The elderly always make up the largest percentage of population structure of New Zealand. While
people in 27-37 age group are projected to be close to 0 by 2050,the percentage of the children and 38-
45 age group are projected increase.
In 1950 , 60 percent of the people New Zealand over the age of 65 years old are 12 times more than 5
percent of children. The age of the remaining two age groups ranges from 20 to 25 percent. Children
data doubled (10 percent) to the age group 25-37.The percentage of people 65 years old peaked at 70
percent in 1990, then dropped to 60 percent. The 38-45 years old population also followed the same
trend ,reaching a peak value of 48 percent in 1990 and reduce by 40 percent in 2000.
The percent of the people over the age 65 years old and the group 25-37 age are expected to decrease(5
percent off for the first group and 10 percent for secons group………).Children and the group age 38-45
predicted to account for 20 percent and 40 percent of the total population in New Zealand.
1, tense and voice

2, data depicted

3, wording
Task 2 :
Today, computer technology become more and more advanced, many people think it waste time and
money maintain public libralies because most functions replace computer technology.However i belive
disregarded our society.
On the one hand, development computer science bring about lots benefits in our life. Anyone obtain
store a great amount information online easily instead go public libraries search them. People can read
books on the move their mobile devices such iPhones, iPads, and so on. Futhermore people not have to
remember deadline return book.
On the other hand, digital technology have multi format film and video for people.The hollywood movie
have repeating content and boring,with the support of technology has product many excellent film.In
the past,film and documentary which people see limited at what is produced by the major film
production companies.
Conclusion I believe both public libraries computer technology are necessary people expand knowledge.

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task 1 : The line graph illustrates the proportion of New Zealand population for a century since 1950.

Overall, senior citizens always dominates in any given years. While people. While people from 25-37 are
predict to equal zero by 2050, the percentage of infant and people who are 38-45 will grow up in the
future.

In 1950, six in ten of New Zealand inhabitant are over 65, 5 times that of the youth (5%). The age Others
are about 20 to 25%

From 1950 to 2000, the proportions of the youth is double (10%) equal it counterpart from 25-37. The
number of inhabitant over 65 hit itS peak in 1990, took part in 70% New Zealand population after had
decreased to 60%. Following the same trend, the middle age increased up to 48% in 1990 and declined
moderate to 40% in 2000.

Up to 2050, senior citizens and people from 24-37 are predict to go down to 5% and 10% respectively.
On the contrary, Infant and the middle age will take account for 20% and 40% of New Zealand.

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Thanks to the evolve of digital technology that enables anyone to produce films from large companies to
individuals. I firmly believe this development bring us a number of advantages.

The development of amateur film maker from people finding creative is take advanced to edge-cutting
devices. Making a video is easier and easier become a hobby or creative resources with many people.
For example, YouTube, tiktok and Facebook are all free platform that help client share and edit their
video in a simple way .
This trend is not only bring benefit for creator but also help consumer get in touch in a vast number of
up-to-date and trendy content, hence Hollywood recycle their content and make fimls industry boring.
moreover, document can disseminate important information for everybody all over the world.

The given chart illustrates past changes and future predictions of the New Zealand population over
a 100-year period from 1950 to 2050.

Overall, people aged 65 and over accounted for the highest percentage of the New Zealand
population throughout the period, including the predicted future figures. In addition, while the
figures for the 25 to 37 year-olds and over-65 year-olds are predicted to decline over the 100 year
period, those aged 14 and under and 38 to 45 years-old are expected to increase.

From 1950 to approximately 1990, the percentage of people aged 38-45 and those aged 65 and over
both increased from around 25% to 50%, and 60% to 70% of the population respectively. Both
these age groups then started to decline and are predicted to continue declining until 2050 to reach
approximately 40% and 55% respectively.

The graph shows the opposite trend for the remaining age groups with 25 to 37 year-olds making
up around 20% of the population and people aged 14 and under making up about 5%. By 2050, it is
predicted that those aged 14 and under will make up 20% of the population, while those aged 25 to
37 will only be a very small percentage.

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