My Mother's Job

Her name is Wa Ode Sukaeda, who works for household, are responsible for
educating children, preparing and serving food, buying items for daily family needs, buying
and always help her neighbour eho need a help, prepared and compiled family clothing, etc.
Housewive do not work outside the house and are responsible for the household. About
duties and functions, Housewive agrees on a choice, but it is an important task that is also the
main thing for a woman. Housewives generally consider being a mother who only focuses on
managing her household. However, there are still women who have a career and work, and
they also have a responsibility to manage their household.
My mother is a very kind, friendly and patient person. My mother loves success very much.
She decided on his role as a housewife well and never returned her responsibilities as a
mother. She always shares her heart, warmth, and love among all of us without any
favoritism for my brothers and myself. My mother really loves cleanliness. She always keeps
the house clean and healthy. Aside from being a good mother, my mother was very smart in
making delicious dishes, especially egg coconut milk and it was my favorite food.
Every time one of us falls ill at home, my mother always accepts we receive good care during
illness. Thank you for someone who is sick to be praised and irreplaceable, she will come
with home remedies and spend time making sure we are comfortable throughout the day.
When we are sick, she always motivates us to feel healthy again and give religious advice to
remain patient when sick. My mother is a beautiful person. She is about 150 cm tall, my
mother has curly hair that is black and shiny. Her eyes are brown like mine. My mother has a
deep yellow skin like most Indonesian women in general. My mother likes to collect various
kinds of hijab and robe in her closet. Even so and sometimes underestimated, I'm very proud
of my own mother. She is able to give all of his children full time and is always there for us. I
believe that any work will not be able to equalize the noble work of a mother. And I am very
grateful to have a mother who is focused on her family, without any crowded activities out
there, because many children out there get financial security from their mother, but lack of
love and full attention, caring for a mother because she focuses on her office career. I'm
proud of my mother! Not all women are able to match a 24-hour job from my mother for her
beloved family. Hopefully always given health and reward reward that continues to flow by
God Aamiin . Finally, my mother likes to reach out to the disadvantaged whenever there is
an opportunity to do so. She often volunteers at local charity events and in my opinion, she
always likes to help, especially for neighbors who need help, both at parties and grief
meetings.

Part-2:
Answer the following questions:
1. Do your paragraph has the unity and coherence?
-Yes, I do
2.Why do you thinks so? Explain?
-Because The paragraph shows unity. All the sentences effectively relate back to the
topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph.
The paragraph shows coherence. There is a flow of thoughts and ideas among the
sentences in this paragraph. There are good transitions employed in the paragraph, also
present sub-topics in an orderly fashion that the reader may be can follow easily.