UPM-CALC/CEL2103 WRITING ACADEMIC TEXTS/SEM 2/2021-2022

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Introduction to Comparison and Contrast Essay

Complete the activities and submit on Edmodo by the due date.

Activity 1

Read the model essay below and answer the questions that follow.

Comparing the Methods of Communication of the Present and Past

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Before the advent of computers and modern technology, people communicating
over long distances used traditional means such as letters and the telephone. 2Nowadays
we have a vast array of communication tools which can complete this task, ranging from
email to instant messaging and video calls. 3While the present and previous means of
communication are similar in their general form, they differ in regard to their speed and
range of tools available.

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One similarity between current and previous methods of communication relates to
the form of communication. 5In the past, both written forms such as letters were frequently
used, in addition to oral forms such as telephone calls. 6Similarly, people nowadays use both
of these forms. 7Just as in the past, written forms of communication are prevalent, for
examples via email and text messaging. 8In addition, oral forms are still used, including the
telephone, mobile phone and voice messages via instant messaging service.

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However, there are clearly differences in the way people communicate over long
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distances, the most notable of which are speed and range of methods. In the past, letters
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would take days to arrive at their destination. In contrast, an email arrives almost
instantaneously and can be read seconds after it was sent. 12Another significant difference is
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the range of communication methods. Fifty years ago, the tools available were primarily
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telephones and letters. On the contrary, today, there are a vast array of communication
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methods available. These include not only the telephone, letter, email and text messages
already mentioned, but also video conferences via software such as Skype or mobile phone
apps such as Whatsapp and social media such as Facebook.

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In conclusion, methods of communication have greatly advanced over the past fifty
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years. While the are some similarities, such as the forms of communication, there are
significant differences, chiefly in relation to the speed of communication and the range of
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communication tools available. 18There is no doubt that technology will continue to progress
in future, and the advanced tools which we use today may one day also become outdated.

Adapted from https://www.eapfoundation.com/writing/essays/candc/

1. Which sentence in paragraph 1 states the topic and main ideas of the essay?
Sentence 1_______________________________

2. Which paragraph discusses the similarity?

Paragraph 2_______________________________

3. Which paragraph discusses the difference?

Paragraph 3_______________________________

4. What are the similarity and difference between the old and the current methods of long
distance communication?
Old method Current method
Similarity letter email and text messaging

Difference telephones and letters Skype or mobile phone apps

5. What words are used to show similarities/differences.

a. between
b.clearly
c,significant
d.but also

6. What type of organisation method is used in the model essay?

comparison-and-contrast _______________________________

Activity 2
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Read the model essay below and complete the outline below using block organisation.

A Comparison and Contrast on Population of The United States and Russia

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Besides being the world’s two biggest nuclear superpowers, the United States and
Russia also share great interest in nuclear safety and security, counter-terrorism and space
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exploration. Despite all these, the two nations have always maintained unique and
challenging foreign relations in the world. 3As many people are aware, there are significant
differences between Russia and the United States in their history and form of government.
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The United States is a young country with a long history of democratic government. 5Russia
is a country with ancient roots that has experienced different kinds of government. 6However,
there are other areas in which the similarity and difference between these two countries
could influence their relations. 7The United States and Russia are similar in population
diversity, but they have different population growth.

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One common similarity between the United States and Russia is their population
diversity. 9The United States and Russia have relatively diverse populations. 10
They both
have a majority racial group that constitutes about 80 percent of the population and several
significant minority groups (CIA World Factbook, 2011). 11Like the United States, Russia also
has linguistic minorities, and there are parts of both countries in which it is common to see
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signs in two or more languages. In addition, the United States and Russia are also similar
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in religious diversity. Although both countries’ populations are largely Christian, they also
both have religious minorities such as Muslim, Jews and other small groups of religious
minorities (Jackson, 2015).

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Despite the similarity, the United States and Russia are very different in terms of
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population growth. Russia’s population has been shrinking because the birth rate is fairly
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low although it has increased in recent years. On the other hand, the fertility rate in the
United States has been consistently high with 2.06 children compared to only 1.6 for Russia
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(CIA World Factbook, 2011). Moreover, there is comparatively little immigration to Russia
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mostly from countries that were once part of the former Soviet Union. In the United States,
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on the other hand, immigration adds 2.3 million people per year (O’neil, 2013). This
consequently contributes to the rapid population growth of the United States.

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In conclusion, while the United States and Russia are different in terms of
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population growth, they have similar population diversity. Both countries are home to
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diverse races and religions. On the contrary, contrasting fertility rate and immigration
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trends lead to difference in their population growth. These significant similarity and
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difference indicate the needs for these countries to cooperate in the international arena. It
will be interesting to see how the United States and Russia work together in the future.

Adapted from Oshima, A, Hogue, A. and Ravitch, L. (2014). Longman Academic Writing Series 4:
Paragraphs to Essays, Fifth Edition. New York: Pearson Education

I. Introduction (Rewrite the sentence that show the main ideas of the essay)
Population comparison and contrast between the United States and
Russia____________________________________________________________
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II. Body
A. Similarity between the United States and Russia
Population diversity
a. Linguistic minorities___________________________________________
b. religious diversity_____________________________________________

B. Difference between the United States and Russia

Population growth
a. immigration________________________________________________
b. Russia has less immigration than the United States

III. Conclusion

Both countries have immense natural resources and environmental

diversity. Together with their military power, size makes both Russia and the
U.S. hard to ignore in political alliances; it is not news that both countries are
core states in their regional alliances and will be for many years, although
with challenges.