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Cambridge English Business Vantage Sample Paper 1 Writing Answer Key v2
Cambridge English Business Vantage Sample Paper 1 Writing Answer Key v2
WRITING PART 1
CANDIDATE A
I’m really sorry but I’m not able to go to the meeting at our company’s head office. I can’t attend because of
previous arrangements which I can’t change.
Marta Stefanska
EXAMINER COMMENTS
CANDIDATE B
I would like to apologise for not being able to go to meeting at our company’s head office because I will not
be in the country. I am going on the business trip to Italy.
Many Thanks
Nadia Johnson
Regional Sales Manager
EXAMINER COMMENTS
All points adequately dealt with. Good range of structure and Band 4
vocabulary. Minor non-impeding errors, for example ‘go to
meeting’, ‘on the business trip’. Positive effect on the reader.
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B E C VA N TA G E
CANDIDATE C
Cc:
Subject: Meeting
Dear Mr Young:
Thanks for your last letter! I’m very glad to be inviated to attend the meeting at your company’s head office.
But first of all, I’m apologising for not being able to go to the meeting. This is due to a error of my agenda,
in fact. I have a international conference that day.
I feel sorry for my absence. I’d like to recommend my personal assistant to go to instead of me. His name is
Jim Green. I hope this will not cause you some trouble.
Chan Bo Fun
EXAMINER COMMENTS
CANDIDATE D
Hello Erica,
I’d like to apologise you, but I can’t attend to this meeting in our head office.
In this time I’m going to London for sales meeting with our customers.
Instead of me, for this meeting will go my sales assistance – Tom
Best regards
Natasha
EXAMINER COMMENTS
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B E C VA N TA G E
WRITING PART 2
CANDIDATE E
Dear Mr Mieter,
Thank you for your order by fax. I’d like to mention that I can offer you 10% discount if you are booking for
18 - month period.
We have 4 offices left in Central Tower as you required but they are on different floors. Also there is no
parking space available at the moment in Central Tower. I can offer you a very interesting alternative in
Opera Place Building:
* 4 offices as you required on same floor
* 300 parking spaces and good public transport connections for your employees
* wonderful views.
Please think about this alternative and the discount I mentioned before. I look forward to hearing from you
soon so I can make the booking.
Yours sincerely,
EXAMINER COMMENTS
CANDIDATE F
Mr Mieter, I’ve just received your fax and after searching for different posibilities, this is what I can offer you:
- 10% discount on the total prize if you book our offices for 18 months, could it be interesting for you?
- You asked us for 4 offices in Central Tower and we only have 4 left but placed in different floors and
there are no parking spaces left. Would you mind if I search what you need in Opera Place?
- Opera Place is a big Tower with 300 parking spaces, it has wonderful views to Central Park and the
public transport connections are really good.
- I’ve just checked if we have 4 offices left in Opera Place and for your information we have them now!!
At the same floor and one is 10m2, two are 15m2 and the last one is 20m2 as you required.
Please let me know if you are interested in this possibity.
Regards
Ms Korkhau
EXAMINER COMMENTS
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B E C VA N TA G E
CANDIDATE G
Thank you for your fax. And we are glad you have decided to rent office space from us for the next twelve
months. I’d like to inform you that we can offer 10% disscount for 18 - month booking, please confirm
whether you’ll book longer or not.
As requested we couldn’t supply you in Central Tower, since there is no vacancy on the same floor and no
parking either. But I recommend Opera Place, a suitable place as well. There are four in the same floor, and
the sizes are proper. 300 parking spaces are there, which is enough for you. Moreover, public transport
connections here are good as well as wonderful views I hope this change will be convenient for you.
Meanwhile, I am sure you will be satisfied with Opera Place.
sincerely,
EXAMINER COMMENTS
All points are covered. Format, organisation and register are Band 3
adequate. There is some attempt at range, for example
’I hope this change will be convenient for you.’ The errors do
not impede.
CANDIDATE H
Thank you for have selected us for doing Business. Concerning with the requirements you have specified
in your fax, I would like to inform you than even though there are four Offices vacant there are all of them
in different floors, and moreover there are no parking spaces, However In opera place you could set up
the four offices in the same floor, it would be the four floor also there are still available 300 parking spaces
so in this matter there is no problem. Let me tell you that in this place you can delight a wonderful view to
the sea and this place is relationated with good public transport. and because it is near the sea you can get
easily connections not only internal but abroad as well. So I suggest you to go for opera place Please if
you have any further equiry please do not hesitate in contact me.
EXAMINER COMMENTS
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