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A4 WRITING
by Thuc Le

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Writing Issues
58 Correctness
3 Comma misuse within clauses
7 Mixed dialects of english
9 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
10 Wrong or missing prepositions
5 Incorrect noun number
6 Incorrect verb forms
1 Conjunction use
3 Pronoun use

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4 Improper formatting
1 Unknown words
5 Misspelled words
3 Confused words
1 Misuse of quanti ers

7 Clarity
7 Wordy sentences

Unique Words 23%

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percentage of words used only once in your
document

Rare Words 28%

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that are not among the 5,000 most common English
words.

Word Length 4.5

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Sentence Length 18.4

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A4 WRITING
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22- Lê Hoàng Kim
I think it is better to choose to stay in Ho Chi Minh City after graduating from
university. Firstly, I think working in Ho Chi Minh City will have more career
development opportunities and young people should stay in the city because it
is dynamic and suitable for young people. Second, in the city after the COVID-
19 pandemic, many employers have changed the way they work so that they
can be more exible and multi-task. Finally in the city students can develop
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their skills as well as study more easily. In conclusion, in my opinion choosing
to stay in Ho Chi Minh City after graduating from university will be better both in
terms of career development as well as personal life.
31 - Huỳnh Lan Chi
I agree university graduates from other provinces choose to stay in Ho Chi Minh
City because of the following reasons. Firstly, Ho Chi Minh City is the largest
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economic center in Vietnam, students have many career opportunities. For
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example, there are many large companies that need human resources and
development services that need creative people. Secondly, the salary in Ho Chi
Minh City is much higher than in other provinces and if students work hard,
they can work many jobs at once, thereby sending money back to their
hometown to help their parents support the family. Finally, the devastating
epidemic situation has caused a serious shortage of human resources, so if
students stay, they will be valued by companies and can get better jobs than
other provinces. In conclusion, I prefer university graduates from other
provinces choose to stay in Ho Chi Minh City because of the reasons above.

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42 Nguyen Vinh Hoang

The COVID-19 pandemic could change students' decisions about where to work
after graduation. I think after graduating from university, I should go back to my
hometown and nd a job there. Firstly, in the countryside, it will be safer for
you, health is important, if you are healthy, you can earn an income. On the
contrary, if you are infected, your health will both decline and you will have to
worry about extra hospital fees. Secondly, in the city, the population is
increasingly crowded, the prices of goods and services are increasing,
especially house and electricity bills. On the contrary, being in the countryside
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is better. Finally, in cities where there is always a large labor force, this leads to
disparities between provinces and cities. For the above reasons, it is better to
choose to return to your hometown after graduation.
50. Cù Duy Anh
As a student who is about to graduate, I would prefer to stay in Ho Chi Minh City
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to nd a job because of these following reasons. Firstly, The COVID-19
pandemic is just a short-term interruption and will be over soon, so there is no
reason students choose to leave. Secondly, if you choose to stay in the biggest
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city in the country, you can easily nd a bunch of jobs and diversity of works.
For example, if you graduate in some speci c majors which are only available in
the city, you won't be able to nd a job in the countryside. Lastly, Most factories
in Ho Chi Minh City is experiencing a leak of employees and the salary may be
increased. Therefore, it would be a wise decision to stay here. However, there
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are some students who already have a job at their hometown so it is easy to
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understand why they leave. In conclusions, students should stay in the city
after graduation.
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I agree with the opinion that some university graduates from other provinces
choose to stay in Ho Chi Minh City because of the following three reasons.
Firstly, Ho Chi Minh City is the place where modern machinery and equipment
is developed, for example, after graduating we can get good jobs, reasonable
salaries and a good future. Secondly, After graduating, we can learn more
languages so that we can have a high salary and help ourselves become better,
for example, having more English will help us communicate and have
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behavioral skills at work. Finally, stay in the city if not suitable for this job we
can apply for another place because there are many places to work, for
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example we want to do a job we love with high salary we can apply for many
companies to suit ourselves and the knowledge we learn. To sum up, after
graduating, we should stay in the city to look for a job because there are many
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companies that develop equipment and machines that have many options to
help us better.
19-PHAM THI NGOC AI
In my opinion, having a job and a good place to work is very fortunate after
going to school. Working in Ho Chi Minh City or returning to work at home
depends on each person's desire for advancement. First, if you want to be
progressive, it is very convenient to choose the city as a place to work. For
example, accounting in a bank, you can work in a cool and comfortable
environment, high monthly salary and make your life more ful lling. Second,
the covid - 19 pandemic, like the previous pandemic, has treatment and
gradual recovery, then the city will return to normal operations. Third, working
at home will be close to your family, but the monthly salary can hardly meet
your daily needs. Finally, the way to school is very long and every person wants
to get a job they want and earn a monthly amount of money that can serve their

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life, so choose a city as a place to start a business. and Vietnamese people will
quickly overcome the covid -19 pandemic and return to peaceful days.
25-Nguyễn Thị Minh Thư
After graduation, some students prefer to return to their hometown and nd
work there. I completely agree with this opinion. First, students should go back
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to their hometown to nd a job to take care of their family. A notable example of
this is the covid 19 pandemic that has made it impossible for many families to
be together, or even to see each other again. The problem of returning home to
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work will be to be with family, easy to care for and share with each other during
the pandemic. Second, if students choose to stay in the city to work, it will
make their families worry. For example, in a stressful epidemic situation, the
family cannot be around, when the illness will make the family worry about
their health. In the end, it will cost a lot of money in the cost of living due to
skyrocketing prices during the pandemic, which makes things more dif cult. In
summary, I think it is better for students to return to their hometown to work
than to stay in the city during the covid 19 pandemic.
02. Phan Đình Huy
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I think that some university graduates from other provinces choose to stay on in
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Ho Chi Minh City is better because of the following reasons. Firstly, living in
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there has lots of opportunity for their career by work for company. For
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examples, not only can working for a foreign company improve their English
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skills, it also helps they to earn better salary. Secondly, they can develop about
every aspect. Like studying their majors, playing instruments,...Additionally, it
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can provide people with amusement or enjoyment after hard working day.
Finally, it helps them to approach the developing science and high technology.
In conclusion, I think that some university graduates from other provinces
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choose to stay on in Ho Chi Minh City because of the reasons above.

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36-Lê Thị Phương

Covid has changed the decisions of students after graduation. Thousands of
students left Ho Chi Minh City for their hometowns in the last few days after
the City lifted its lockdown, but many students have chosen to stay back to look
for new jobs. According to myself, I think I will stay in the city to work. Firstly,
job opportunities here are extremely diverse and abundant because Ho Chi
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Minh City is a leading economic center in our country. Secondly, living away
from home helps us to be more con dent, independent, and self-suf cient.
Thirdly, the epidemic is being pushed back more and more, life is gradually
returning to normal. Fourthly, there are many most modern facilities here to
help us relax after stressful working hours. Furthermore, Ho Chi Minh City has
many economic revival efforts that should target not just the economy but also
prioritize social welfare and healthcare. Additionally, the salaries of companies
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in this city are really elevated. To sum up, Ho Chi Minh City has all the factors
that make our work more successful.
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16.nguyenthihuyunhtram
The COVID-19 epidemic. It's been around a lot of the name this year. The
pandemic had upset people's morale, upset their economic balance,
threatened people's lives, delayed people's work, and I think that some
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students should take jobs back home and I agree with that.First, if we choose
to work in a rural area, it is a convenient way to travel and not cost as much
food or as the city does. And the second is that we can go home or visit our
loved ones without having to go that far away. And the last thing is that because
of the disease, our health would be less vulnerable if we worked in cities.
28_Lê Minh Tuấn
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Personally, I agree with university graduates from other provinces choosing to
stay in Ho Chi Minh City. First, the opportunity to nd a stable job. Although

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Covid-19 affects companies, it is generally still possible to nd work at large

companies. Online job interviews can be done through software such as zoom,
google meet, students can work for companies by working remotely like staying
at home or in a motel room. Second, the possibility of getting a job early is very
high. Because after the Covid-19 pandemic is under control, employers will hire
suitable employees soon. And the advantage of choosing to stay in the city,
students will be informed soon, can submit a CV as soon as it is announced.
Finally, the working environment in Ho Chi Minh City is suitable for young and
dynamic students. Students can develop skills, and learn more. In conclusion,
choosing to stay in Ho Chi Minh City after graduating from university will be
better both in terms of career development as well as personal life.
03_Võ Đăng Khoa
In my opinion, I choose to stay in Ho Chi Minh City and nd work there because
of the following reasons. Firstly, there will be a lot of people going back to their
hometowns. For example, when the pandemic arrives, many people will return
to their hometowns. From there, the chances of nding a job will be higher.
Secondly, we will get a good salary because working in Ho Chi Minh city is
higher than working in their hometown. Finally, affected by the pandemic, many
companies will not operate. There are more companies in Ho Chi Minh City than
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in the hometown, so there will be more companies that need employees.In
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conclusion, I agree that choose to stay in Ho Chi Minh City because of reasons
above.
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13.Phạm Thị Anh Ngọc
Nowadays, many people are unemployed and increasingly poor because of the
pandemic. To date, Viet Nam had recorded more than 220,000 COVID-19
infections and 3,700 deaths. This has made many people worried, including
students who have just graduated. They have to choose where to work after

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graduation to ensure safety and have a stable job. In my opinion, i will choose
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return to my hometown and nd work there because of three following main
reasons. Firstly, in my hometown I have family, they are vaccinated and their
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resistance is better than mine so that they will take care of me if unfortunately I
have covid symptoms. Secondly, because the Covid situation in the countryside
is better controlled than in the city, people are allowed to go out and nd work.
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This can help me earn money and support my family in this moment. Finally, the
Covid epidemic situation in the city caused some companies to close, while in
the countryside, due to the better control of the epidemic situation, companies
and organizations are still recruiting new graduates, this will help increase my
chances of nding a job in hometown. In short, the epidemic situation is
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becoming more and more complicated, so return to hometown and nd work
there is the best decision that can help me secure a job, secure money and
ensure health.
Lê Nghi 18
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Nowaday, Young people are dynamic and like to be crowded, new and modern.
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In my opinion, choose to stay on in Ho Chi Minh City after graduates, because of
the following reasons. Firstly, Ho Chi Minh city is Vietnam's largest economic
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center. Therefor, You will have many opportunities for career advancement.
Second, you have the opportunity to try new industries, jobs born due to the
development of technology. For instance, new industries are always being
tested and appearing in big cities like HCM city and it will take a long time to
make it popular and spread to the home country. Finally, the truth is that the
salary in Ho Chi Minh City is higher than the same job in the countryside. In
conclusion, I agree that some university graduates from other provinces choose
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to stay on in Ho Chi Minh City, because of the reasons above.
43- Phạm Nguyễn Trung Nam

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In my opinion, i prefer that i choose to stay on in Ho Chi Minh City. Because the
covid- 19 has always happened anywhere and you can not hide the rest of your
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life. Frist, the government has enacted this policy of " Living with the epidemic".
So that, we just have to comply and follow the principles set forth by the
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ministry of health and trust our goverment. Second, to live with the epicdemic,
we must have a vaccination certi cate of three shots. These vaccines will
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protect us and decrease virus when we get the covid- 19. Third, we need much
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money for life and the city need good labor. This city just like a economic center
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and hard walls to keep our safe. In conclusion, I totally agree that choose to
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stay on Ho Chi Minh City because of reasons above.
49. & Lê Thanh Biên
I think it's better to go back hometown. Firstly, in our homeland, we have
parents and grandparents there, nding a job and living in the homeland will be
easier and more comfortable than in the city, but the salary will also be less,
but you don't need to worry too much about food, drink, and shelter. Secondly,
in the homeland, it is almost rare to gather in crowded places, everyone has
high self-discipline, knows how to isolate themselves if sick to protect the
community. Finally, in the countryside, everyone has goodwill, if you are in
trouble, the village will help you, unlike the independent city without talking to
anyone. In short, I agree it's better to go back to my hometown.

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1. opinion, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

2. center → centre Mixed dialects of English Correctness

3. many large companies need Wordy sentences Clarity

4. labor → labour Mixed dialects of English Correctness

5. these following → Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

the following

6. a diversity Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

7. some students already have Wordy sentences Clarity

8. at → in Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

9. conclusions → conclusion Incorrect noun number Correctness

10. behavioral → behavioural Mixed dialects of English Correctness

11. example, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

12. a high Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

13. many companies develop Wordy sentences Clarity

14. family → families Incorrect noun number Correctness

15. with each other Wordy sentences Clarity

16. on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

17. in Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

18. opportunity → opportunities Incorrect noun number Correctness

19. work → working Incorrect verb forms Correctness

20. the company, or a company Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

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21. examples → example Incorrect noun number Correctness

22. , but Conjunction use Correctness

23. they → them Pronoun use Correctness

24. a better Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

25. a hard Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

26. on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

27. center → centre Mixed dialects of English Correctness

28. really Wordy sentences Clarity

29. . nguyenthihuyunhtram Improper formatting Correctness

30. nguyenthihuyunhtram Unknown words Correctness

31. . First Improper formatting Correctness

32. Personally, Wordy sentences Clarity

33. . In Improper formatting Correctness

34. the reasons Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

35. . Phạm Improper formatting Correctness

36. i→I Misspelled words Correctness

37. to return Incorrect verb forms Correctness

38. unfortunately, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

39. in → at Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

40. return → returning Incorrect verb forms Correctness

41. my hometown Pronoun use Correctness

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42. nd → nding Incorrect verb forms Correctness

43. Nowaday → Nowadays Confused words Correctness

44. on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

45. of → for Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

46. center → centre Mixed dialects of English Correctness

47. Therefor → Therefore Confused words Correctness

48. on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

49. i→I Misspelled words Correctness

50. i→I Misspelled words Correctness

51. on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

52. Frist → First Confused words Correctness

53. goverment → government Misspelled words Correctness

54. epicdemic → epidemic Misspelled words Correctness

55. virus → viruses Incorrect noun number Correctness

56. much → a lot of Misuse of quanti ers Correctness

57. labor → labour Mixed dialects of English Correctness

58. is just Incorrect verb forms Correctness

59. a economic → an economic Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

60. center → centre Mixed dialects of English Correctness

61. has hard Incorrect verb forms Correctness

62. our → us Pronoun use Correctness

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63. totally Wordy sentences Clarity

64. on → in Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

65. the reasons Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

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