6 Jamaica Village Road

Coronado, CA 92118

January 25, 2022

Human Resources
Forever 21
7007 Friars Rd Suite 1025
San Diego, CA 92108
To Whom It May Concern:

I'm a senior at The Charter School of San Diego who wants to work in the fashion industry as a creative director. I was going around the mall when I came across a
hiring sign and realized I was qualified, so I applied for a retail/sales position at Forever 21. If you could please consider me for this and any other open positions, I
would be very appreciative.

I believe I would be a valuable contribution to your company because I am a skilled and dedicated worker. I am prepared to support you in sustaining and enhancing
your customer service and retail sales. In addition, I am a proficient multitasker with exceptional organizing abilities. When it comes to being in public, I am a very
outgoing and sociable person and would do great in sales. One thing that I admire about Forever 21’s mission is to make prices affordable while providing current
fashion trends. In addition, I believe that these skills, together with my ability to connect with customers, make me an excellent fit for this position.

I'm interested in the role because I'd like to work somewhere that values individual connections and fosters a healthy work atmosphere. I will continue to be
resourceful, reliable, and hardworking when given the opportunity to work at Forever 21. I plan to work on developing relationships with my coworkers and
collaborating with them to create a positive work environment for all of us.

Please refer to my resume, which is attached to this email, for further information about my education and background, as well as a list of references. I look forward to
meeting with you and can be reached at 512-660-3815 on my cell phone. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.

Sincerely,

Tamya Flenoy

Tamya Flenoy

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Organization Cover letter is Cover letter is Cover letter may Cover letter is not

well-organized organized and be unorganized or organized and is

and includes all includes all missing one or two missing many

required required elements. required

elements. elements. elements.

Attention to detail is lacking.

Effectiveness Cover letter is Cover letter is Cover letter may Cover letter is not

clear and concise, mostly clear and be lacking one or clear and concise,

uses specific concise, uses more aspects that nor does it use

examples, and specific examples, make it effective. specific examples,

powerful action and powerful or powerful action

verbs that make action verbs that verbs. The cover

the cover letter make the cover letter is not

effective. letter effective. effective.

Mechanics No grammatical, Two or less Three to five More than five

spelling or grammatical, grammatical, grammatical,

punctuation errors spelling or spelling, or spelling, or

are present. punctuation errors punctuation errors punctuation errors

are present. are present. are present.

Total Points Possible: 12

Total Points Earned: _____

A 11-12 points

B 9-10 points

C 6-8 points

D 3-5 points