11607 Lakeside Drive

Lakeside, CA 92040

March 31, 2022

McDonalds
12265 Woodside Ave
Lakeside, CA 92040

To Whom It May Concern:

I would like to apply for a position at your restaurant. I heard about this position from a relative.
Please consider me for this and any other cook positions that may be available.

I feel like I would be an asset to your company/program because I like to cook, and I am also
good at cooking. I would also be a good fit because I know how to work as a team. Furthermore,
I am hardworking and because I am willing to help whenever needed.

I am very interested in the position because I would really like to work in a fast-food restaurant
and learn how it works. I am someone who will always try their best so you can expect that I will
always be respectful and responsible. I am also an independent worker and can complete tasks in
a timely manner.

Please see my resume attached to this email for additional information on my education and
background, as well as a list of references. I look forward to meeting with you and can be
reached on my cell phone at 619-832-4799. /Thank you very much for your time.
Sincerely,

Jacqueline Razo Viramontes

Jaqueline Razo Viramontes
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examples, and specific make it effective. specific
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Mechanics No grammatical, Two or less Three to five More than five
spelling or grammatical, grammatical, grammatical,
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Total Points Possible: 12

Total Points Earned: _____

A 11-12 points
B 9-10 points
C 6-8 points
D 3-5 points