Bullying

Model Essay- Error Identification

The school bell ringed, Veann was as hungry as a wolf. She ran as fast as thunder to the

canteen to fill her hungry stomach. When she walked passed the classroom, she saw a group

of bullies jeered at his bosom friend, Kee Ling.

To her surprise, the bullies pushed Kee Ling on the ground. A bully even took away her

books. Kee Ling felt down and burst into tears. Kee Ling felt helpless and did not know what to

do. The bullies laughed their head off.

Being a good Samaritan, Veann informed the discipline teacher immediatly. The teacher

rushed to the scene and scolded the bullies angrily. She also punished them severely. The

bullies got a taste of their own medicine. They apologised to Kee Ling sincerely.

as hungry as a wolf 极饿 ran as fast as thunder 跑得如雷一样

jeered 嘲笑 burst into tears 泪流满面

laughed their head off 欢笑不已 Being a good Samaritan 身为好心人士

punished ...severely 严重的处罚 got a taste of their own medicine 自食起果

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 Section 2 Hands On Writing

laughter bullying

threatened throw

school bag money

stopped called

accompanied

Curiosity piqued 出于好奇 isolated corner 孤立的角落

being surrounded by a group of boys 被
一群男孩包围着 Extorted money 勒索钱
Burst into tears 痛苦的哭泣 Being a good Samaritan 升为好心人士

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 Section 3 : Assignment

intelligent shy

bullied boys

wanted Money

saw reported

teacher warning

Paragraph 1:

new pupil 新学生

bosom friends 好朋友

intelligent but reserved 性格内向

well-liked student in class 很受欢迎的学生在班上

Paragraph 2:

After school dismissed 放学后

made his way home 回家

came across 遇到

His eyes popped in trepidation 形容眼睛恐慌

extorting money 勒索钱

crying bitterly 痛苦的哭泣

beseeching …. to let her off 恳求。。让她离开

Paragraph 3:

turned red with rage 生气

Knowing that he should let the culprit off the hook

他知道他们应该罪魁祸首

gave a stern warning 严厉警告

thanked …profusely 非常的感激

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 PART 2 PREPOSITION

There is a fish the The cat is sleeping We should stay

aquarium. the pillow. home during
Movement Control Order
(MCO).

I was born Malaysia. The women are sitting A swarm of bees is flying
However, Chris was born the table and the flowers.
Korea. chatting happily.

The boy is hiding The man is fishing Ben’s house is very

a table during the river Alice’s house.
the earthquake. happily.

The pupils walk My uncle was walking They go to school

the road safely. the path. bus.

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Anna always goes to school The wooden ladder leans They are sitting
foot. the wall. the campfire.

Chloe is standing Kevin is the tallest The dog chased

(两人之间) Anna (之中) his the postman.
an Elsa. friends.

The sheep jumped The man throws a can The boy accidentally fell
the fence. the recycling his bicycle.
bin.

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 She is performing The pupils have their lunch Mike lived a
traditional dance(传统舞蹈) the canteen. village when he was a
the stage. 小地方 child.
大地方

The worker loaded the Jessica walked William ran

parcels(包囊) the (经过) a his mother
truck. convenience store. happily.

The boys are climbing The girl helped a blind The man threw a stone
the tree. man the stairs. a bird.

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 The burglar ran out The restaurant is The man peeped 偷看
the house last night. (对面) a the window to
park. see what was happening.

The boys hid the They play football They play basketball
bushes. the field. the court.

Antonym / Opposite Meaning

1. We accepted an invitation to the wedding dinner. → ______________

2. Education is compulsory for children between the ages of 5 and 16.

→ ___________________

3. Her main strength is her creative thinking ability. 创造性思维能力

→ ____________________

4. The mischievous boy finally admitted he had stolen the fruits.

__________________

5. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. ______________.

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Idioms & Proverbs

1. You should put a of efforts and while you are

pursuing your dream. (做事不要半途而废)

2. We are not allowed to cheat in the exam. As the saying goes,

. (诚信为上)

3. The marathon runner was after reaching the finishing

line. (气喘呼呼)

4. The assignment was very tough so she was forced to __________________ to get it done on
time. (工作到熬夜)

5. Zen’s mother ______________to join the English camp. ( 同意)

Fill in the blank with the correct answer.

1. I drink a glass milk every day. (with, of)

2. Did they go there train? (in, by)

3. I bought that book a dollar. (for, by)

4. Is this the right way the post-office? (to, of)

5. He killed the snake an axe. (with, by)

6. Please give this book Mei Ling. (from, to)

7. I’ve got a letter my uncle. ( from, to)

8. I found the coin his pocket. (on, in)

9. How many the glasses were broken? (off, of)

10. There is lake my house. (on, near)

11. I’ll see you the afternoon. (on, in)

12. Don’t lean the door. ( against, with)

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Fill in the blank with the correct answer.

1. Her house is two miles away the school.

(from, about)

2. Let’s share the apple. You can cut it two this knife.
(in, with)

3. We will leave Tokyo Tuesday morning. (for, on)

4. There hasn’t been a drop rain a week. (for, of)

5. I took your bottle ink mistake. (by, of)

6. It’s five eight now. That big clock will chime 8

o’clock. (to, at)

7. He had been absent several weeks, so he failed the

examination. (in, for)

8. I was robbed two men my way here. (by, on)

9. He jumped the river and swam it. (across, into)

10. I met your cousin the train. She was sitting me.
( beside, on)

11. That road is repair. The buses are not running it today.
(along, under)

12. The boat turned and threw the fishermen the

water. (into, over)

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