Professional Documents
Culture Documents
MAGAZINE’S ADVERTISEMENTS
A Final Project
in English
by
Medyana Noor
2201411115
ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
FACULTY OF LANGUAGES AND ARTS
SEMARANG STATE UNIVERSITY
2017
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Karena sesungguhnya sesudah kesulitan itu ada kemudahan.
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
First and foremost, I am sincerely grateful to the Lord of the world, Allah the
Almighty, for the blessing, health, unlimited love and gift, patience, strength, and
inspiration which are given to me during the writing of this final project.
Ph. D. and Rohani, S. Pd., M. A.,my advisors in providing the very valuable
guidance, advice, time as well as encouragement from the beginning until this
I give million thanks to all lecturers of English Department of UNNES for giving
Most importantly, none of this would have been possible without the love of my
genuine than my most beloved family who never stop praying for me, showing me
that unconditional love does exist, supporting me emotionally and financially for
everything I do and always being home for me. I am also thankful to my beloved
brother and my beloved extended family for their huge support and care.
I have been incredibly blessed with humble and cheerful friends who have helped
me stay strong through this difficult year. The deepest thanks are dedicated to my
super best friends ever – Shufi Annisa Rahmah, Awwalia F. Izza and Nuki
Nurazizah for always being there, for the time to share, and for the unquestionable
friendship and love. I also wish my thanks to my one and only sister Anggraeni
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Nur Kusumasari for always giving me strength and supporting me until the end. I
greatly value their friendship and deeply appreciate their supports to me.
I am also thankful to my very special partnerRifanov Ardiansyah for the love and
support, comforting advice, exciting moments, jokes, and stories. I would like to
thanks people whose names cannot be mentioned one by one here for the help and
Finally, I hope that this research will be useful for the readers and encourages the
Medyana Noor
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ABSTRACT
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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COVER .................................................................................................... i
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT ..................................................................... v
I. INTRODUCTION ........................................................................... 1
II.2.1 Stylistics......................................................................................... 10
II.2.1.1Language Style.............................................................................. 13
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II.2.1.2Types of Language Style............................................................... 15
II.2.2.2Context of Culture(Genre)............................................................. 22
II.2.3.1Visualisation.................................................................................. 24
II.2.3.2Lexicogrammar Level.................................................................... 26
II.2.3.3Semantic Level.............................................................................. 28
II.2.4.2Marketing Mix............................................................................... 31
II.2.4.2.1 Product...................................................................................... 31
II.2.4.2.2 Place.......................................................................................... 32
II.2.4.2.3 Price........................................................................................... 32
II.2.4.2.4 Promotion.................................................................................. 32
II.2.4.3.1 Headline.................................................................................... 33
II.2.4.3.3 Slogan........................................................................................ 34
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III.3Role of the Researcher........................................................................ 40
III.4Data Collection................................................................................... 40
III.5Unit of Analysis.................................................................................. 41
IV.1.....................................................................................................Findings
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IV.1.1.10......................................................................................Advertisement 10
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IV.1.1.11......................................................................................Advertisement 11
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IV.1.1.12......................................................................................Advertisement 12
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IV.2........................................................................................Discussions of Findings
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APPENDICES ......................................................................................... 79
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LIST OF FIGURES
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Foundation.......................................................................................... 70
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LIST OF APPENDICES
Appendix Page
CHAPTER I
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INTRODUCTION
This chapter is divided into six parts: background of the study, reasons for
choosing the topic, research questions, purposes of the study, significance of the
Human beings created a means by which they can exchange information as well
process of communication consists of the source or the sender, the message, the
channel, and the receiver (Berlo 1960). The level of communication process is
mode and written mode. These two different modes are the media of
convey different
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form of language. Spoken mode is coded in sound, while written modes is coded
second person. Its information is conveyed directly to the second person. While
communication happen indirectly between the first person and the second
person. In terms of style, spoken and written language carry different aspects.
On the one hand, spoken language tends to be dynamic and context dependent,
use complex sentence structure with low lexical density, and use non-standard
grammar. On the other hand, written language tends to be synoptic and context
independent, use simple sentence structure with high lexical density, and use
standard grammar.
affect the reader and persuade them to use and buy the product. Advertisement
runs three functions. First, as the information that is to inform the product,
the consumer to buy certain brand. Third, as the reminder that is to remind the
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consumer about the product so that they keep buying the product being
its language style that is used in printed advertisements and also the appropriate
diction to convey meaning, so that the advertisements could reach the target.
media including video, images, audio, text that can be accessed interactively. In
Advertisements are presented through two media, printed media, and electronic
women. It was first published in 1886 in the United States as a family magazine.
and printed in 35 languages and distributed in more than 100 countries. Its
attract the reader with the display of the advertisement. Language being used is
The society could accept and respond the information or messages well if the
some aspect of reader’s personality to make them believe its product will make
them healthier, prettier, more comfortable, etc. It uses carefully chosen and
powerful influence over people and their behavior. The language use in
advertisements should be adjusted with the consumer’s needs and taste, because
it will affect consumer’s interest toward the product that is advertised instead of
There are several ways of using advertising language in order to make good
speech into the message of the advertisement. The more creative the message is
the more the advertisement could gain the consumer’s attention. It can create
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and build product interest. For example, “Play with your beauty” from make-up
uses beauty as substitution of human being who you can play with. Creating the
advertisements more interesting and attractive than using simple sentence with
This study analyses the distinctive expression in language, how the style
influence over people. The choice of language to convey specific messages with
out in comparison with another. So that, the language of advertising has its own
style.
audience (viewers, readers, or listener) to take actions with the products, ideas,
reader’s personality. Moreover, it tries to make the readers believe that its
I want to find out about distinctive linguistic expressions that are employed by
want to know what kind of distinctive linguistic expressions that are used in the
advertisement.
In order not to discuss something irrelevant, this study has been limited by
advertisers?
Based on the formulated problem above the objectives of this final project is to
find out the distinctive linguistic expressions are used by the advertisers’ in the
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Cosmopolitan Magazine.
The writer will divide the significance of the study into three parts, they are
study:
(2) Practically, the study can provide some guidance for advertisements maker
interesting and attractive. Moreover, it will also benefit those who are
(3) Pedagogically, the results may raise awareness regarding the linguistic
reasons for choosing the topic, research questions, objectives of the study,
2. Chapter II is the review of the related literature which contains the previous
approach, data of the study, role of the researcher, data collection, units of
This chapter covers review of previous studies and the relevant literature related
to the study which consist of stylistic, language styles, text and context, linguistic
description and advertisement in general . The last, the chapter is closed with
Analysis of language styles is not a new thing for analyst in literary field. There
are several analysts who already have done several studies on language style in
Chocolate Chip Granola Bar” by Min Li (2009). In this study, the writer
linguistics theory and stylistics analysis pattern in order to find out the general
There are similarity and difference between both studies. First, the similarity is
is used to persuade the consumer to take action of the product Second, it is also
analysing the language styles or stylistic devices that are found in the
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media including video, audio, images or text that can be accessed interactively.
The choice of language that is used in advertisement may vary. Fourth, in terms of
linguistics features, the advertisement use simple present tense, so the reader
could understand its content easily. The difference is on the quantity of the object
of the study and the aspect that are investigated. The previous study analysed the
magazine, but the advertisement being analysed is a different type. The current
study analyse about the women things. Since it is a woman fashion magazines, the
advertisement are about fashion, cosmetics and accecories, while the old study
2.2.1. Stylistics
Stylistics is concerned with the study of style in language. Peter Verdonk (2002)
concludes that “So stylistics, the study of style, can be defined as the analysis of
distinctive linguistic expression in language and the description of its purpose and
effect.” A linguistic expression can be referred to any physical form like sound,
claims that “Style has traditionally been defined as the manner of linguistic
they say.”
In other word, stylistic is the study of varieties of language which positioning its
and so on. Style can also be defined as the use of language in certain context and
certain situation by certain people. Style does not always follow the stuctural
grammar because sometime it differes from the standard form. Because of the
the writing and it can make the relation between the writer and reader stronger
and make their awareness higher. Therefore, in certain situation, style could be
analysis, it should focus on feature which grasp reader’s interest and which differ
from the standard forms. Leech and Short (1981:48) define that “ the features are
associations are that the language style shows. Leech (1981:13) explained that
for its own sake, simply as an exercise in describing what use in made of
The language style use can be defined as making up something with the use of
beautiful, playful and artistic words, so the readers may feel the creativity in
general, literary stylistics has, implicitly, the goal of explaining the relation
between language and artistic function” (Leech 1981:13). Still in the same term,
Simpson (2004:3) states that “doing stylistics is to explore language, and more
Language style is the way to express the writer's feeling and thought through
beautiful, playful and artistic choice of words that will show the writer’s
personality. So that the advertiser frequently uses various types of language style
to make the advertisement lively and to catch attention from the reader.
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of expression that identifies a person with a cerain group. Stylistics could be said
a part of diction or choice of words discussing whether or not the use of word,
phrase or clause is suitable deal with certain situation. Therefore, the issue of
language styles cover all linguistics features: choice of words, phrase, clause,
sentences, even a whole discourse. “Styles or language styles are limited as the
way to express thought through language characteristically that reveal the soul and
Nowadays, advertising is full of the way to present the product and what medium
that is used to promote the product. Therefore, it needs creative strategy in case of
competing in the market; one of each is using language styles in the text of
adds that “The explanations of language styles widely are first, people exploit the
property of language in speaking and writing. Second, the use of certain style or
Based on those opinion, it can be concluded that language styles is the way to
express thought and feeling through typical language to obtain certain effects. So
that, what is being expressed becomes clear and has appropriate meaning.
What is meant by manner is to appreciate and respect the people whom we talk to,
ideas logically. Clarity uses words efficiently, exclude two or more words that are
synonym loosely and exclude no necessary word repetition. Both clarity and
Briefness and clarity should become a basic and early step. But, language style
and imaginative.
Language style can be reviewed from various points of view. So far, the idea of
linguistics aspect.
style based on the choice of words, language style based on the tone
which is implied on the text, language style based on the sentence
structure and language style based on the direct or indirect meaning
(trope or figures of speech) (Keraf 2009:115-116)
Keraf (2009:117-145) also divides language style into several aspects and
points.
a part of diction or choice of words discussing whether or not the use of word,
phrase or clause is suitable deal with certain situation. Therefore, the issue of
language styles cover All linguistics features: choice of words, phrase, clause,
sentences, even a whole discourse. “Styles or language styles is limited as the way
to express thought through language characteristically that reveal the soul and the
Nowadays, advertising is full of the way to present the product and what medium
that is used to promote the product. Therefore, it needs creative strategy in case of
competing in the market, one of each is using language styles in the copy of the
and feeling wih words in the form of writen or spoken.” While Kridalaksana
(2001:25) describes that “The explanation of language styles widely are first,
people exploit the property of language in speaking and writing. Second, the use
of certain style or type to obtain certain effects. Third, overall of writer’s langauge
characteristics.”
Based on those opinion, it can be concluded that language styles is the way to
express thought and feeling through typical language to obtain certain effects. So
that, what is being expressed becomes clear and has appropriate meaning.
the rules, or the principles well and correctly” (Keraf 2009:114). Words usage that
seem hiding their thought behind the unclear word chain and complicated
“What is meant by manner is to appreciate and respect the people whom we talk
sequence of ideas logically. Clarity uses words efficiently, exclude two or more
Language style can be reviewed from various point of view. So far, the idea of
based on the writer, mass, medium, subject, place, attendant and goal. While in
linguistics aspect, language styles is divided into four points: language style based
on the choice of words, language style based on the tone which is implied on the
text, language style based on the sentece structure and language style based on the
In everyday social life, people chat to their family members, organize children for
school, read the paper, speak at meetings, serve customers, follow instructions in a
themselves to therapists, record their day's thoughts and activities in a journal. All
of these are activities which involve language, (Eggins, 2004:1). Based on the
examples that are given by Eggins, we can deduce that by doing communication,
it helps us to share our ideas, interact with others, convey meanings, establish a
good relationship, and show the stance or our point of view about something.
Every time we speak or write, we exchange meaning and we are also constructing
function to find out the meaning within those certain choice of words in a text. A
text represents the idea of the writer or speaker that can be either written or
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spoken. Crystal (1992:72) as cited by Nunan (1993:6) offers the definition on the
(1994:158) also explain that “speaking and writing are manifestations of the same
linguistic system but in general they encode meaning in different ways because
they have evolved to serve different purposes”. It means that spoken language has
its own rules and regularities that do not always conform to written language.
Written text deals with the language text. A written text is identified as a text
which is constructed when a person is conveying his idea through written form,
for instances newsletter, short story, novel, etc. Meanwhile, spoken text is
identified as a text which is constructed when a person conveys his idea through
strongly accompanies action. For example, a conversation between a boss and his
staff in the office, dialog among a servant and a customer, chat between a buyer
and a seller, etc. The greater distance may emerge between participants. The
inspection of written language is easier to carry out than the study of oral text.
Halliday and Hasan (1985:6) have a notion that text is meant “any connected
stretch of language that is doing job in some context”. The length of the text is not
important, as long as the text collects meanings that are appropriate to its context.
its context. This unity of purpose gives a text both texture and structure. Texture
comes from the way the meanings in the text fit coherently with each other. While
structures refer to the way that pieces of language in use will contain certain
Certain texts always connect to certain contexts. “The context is in the text”,
(Eggins, 1997:7). Eggins (1994: 7) also states that “our ability to deduce context
from text is one way in which language and context are interrelated”. From those
are to deduce context from the text and to produce text based on the given context
accordingly.
Language and context give contribution to each other to be identified. On the one
hand, we are able to identify the context of a text by paying attention to the
language applied. On the other hand, by knowing the context of a text we are able
to predict the language that might be used. Thus, the use of language is never
inseparable with the context surrounds it and the meanings it conveys. For
informal language is less likely to be uttered. The grammatical slang like “ain’t” is
rarely found since it reflects the informality which does not match with the
The ability to predict context from text and vice versa is essential for the skill of
The ability to predict from context to text is critically important for text
production (speaking or writing) and the ability to predict from text to
context is essential for text comprehension (listening or reading). To
understand something of the text-context relationship is to understand
something of how literacy is possible.
levels, with the most frequently discussed being those of register (context of
obvious that all meanings in a text are situated in a context of situation and a
context of culture. These contexts play a big role in the text construction. Both of
them are considered necessary for the adequate understanding of the text.
useful term to cover the things going on in the world outside the text which make
the text what it is. There are three variables within any context of situation which
largely determine the language choices that are made in the construction of any
language text. These variables function together and are responsible for the
1) Field refers to what is going on, including activity focus (nature of social
2) Tenor refers to the social relationships between those taking parts. These are
action or reflection.
From the statements above, it can be said that in reconstructing the context of the
text we can use at least these three basic questions: (1) what is the topic of the
text, (2) who are involved, (3) and how the language is being used, written or
spoken and formal or informal. In addition, Halliday and Hassan offer a concept
(1) Field
(2) Tenor
(1) Agentive Role, or the institutional (or not) roles of the participants, such as
(2) Social Role or the power relationship between them which may be
(3) Social Distance, or the amount or nature of contact the participants may
settings).
(3) Mode
The mode is generally divided into three main areas, they are;
context);
A text also provides information not only about what was happening at the time in
any kind of linguistics interactions but also about the total cultural background of
the participants. All of these play a part in the interpretation of the meaning.
Halliday and Hasan (1985:46) explains “any actual context of situation, the
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particular configuration of field, tenor, and mode that has brought a text into
culture incorporates the attitudes, values and shared experiences of any group of
people living in one culture. It influences the purpose of constructing the text.
Gerot and Wignell (1994:10) state “context of culture determines what we can
mean through, such as being (who we are), doing (what we do), and saying (what
we say)”. Halliday and Hasan (1985:49) also define “context of culture as the
institutional and ideological background that give value to the text and constrain
its interpretation”.
The language one uses is different when the cultural background is not the same
accordingly. It affects what is appropriate from one people to others, also in terms
of language applied. For example, Javanese people never call those with higher
hierarchy by mentioning merely the first name. Javanese people use the title of
inappropriate language use. Thus, we can conclude that the concept of context of
employed. The genre arises in social interaction to fulfill humans’ social purposes
(Gerrot and Wignell, 1994:190). The concept of genre defines the way and
of linguistics genre that shows obvious stages is recount text. Recount text has its
(Gerrot and Wignell, 1994:194). The authors cannot reverse this scaffold
arbitrarily, because it will not be called a recount text if not in accordance with the
particular order.
There are many other such processes defined by a culture. For example we might
identify the seminar as a genre in our own culture, with identifiable stages in a
such as introductions of the expert who become the speaker, explanation of the
2.2.3.1. Visualisation
The visual effect of printed advertisement plays an important role, since it enable
to show image or visual to reader from the page. It helps to set story or introduce
competitive products. Arens and Bové (1989:292) stated, “ The visual carries such
try to offer story appeal.” Vestergaard and Shroder (1985:39) state that “Images
be explored at once than the verbal text on the advertisement. “Icon represents
similarity between symbol and object and between form an meaning. Icon reflects
Hermerén (1999:72) points out that “Symbol is a sign, which represents somehing
every good advertisement, a big notion that makes the message different, captures
should contain of a big notion that catch consumer’s attention, get the reaction,
and separate promoted product or service from other competitor. Even a great
notion is hard to present, but some of the notion produces advertisement that are
easy to remember and effective. “An appeal uses emotional message and is
designed around the imagae that is expected to create response based on sense and
attitude” (Lee and Johnson 2007:179). Advertisers could use emotional appeal in
their advertisement strategic. Humour appeal or other appeal that are entertaining,
to attract attention or interest from consumers and affect their emotion on the
use the visualitation in the analysis to see how it affects the advertisements itself.
The image election such as symbol, icon, index and etc on the advertisement
should be calculated carefullly since it is something that will make the reader
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impresses about the idea of the advertisment itself. To see how effective the image
analysis. The present tense is commonly used in the advertisements. Using present
tense in the advertisements tends to signify the quality of the promoted products.
At the same time, it is easier for the reader to understand the purpose of the
product.
which centered on how people use language with each other in accomplishing
everyday social life”. In this case, how the advertiser views language to make
meaning and how the advertiser express their purpose in the advertisement in
order to get the reader could give feedback on what they expression are very
important. The analysis also deals with the grammatical analysis of the printed
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advertisement. Why it tends to use present tense rather than past tense or future
tense. From that features of the grammatical level, how effective are that on
Creating language needs formation of words. A word carries its own meaning.
Some single word that are combined may deliver different meaning than an
compounding (combining two or more words based as a unit to form a new single
word), blending (combining parts of two or more words to create a new word),
and clipping (reducing or shortning a word without changing its meaning). Leech
meaning” (Delin 2000:133). Its function is to describe specific quality and feature
of the product.Adjectives is word class typical, in contrast often omitting the verb,
This part of work will be concerned with typical characteristics of the vocabulary
of advertising and most commonly used figures of speech. The advertiser should
sort these parts carefully such as verb phrase, noun phrase, adjectives, formation
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good as possible with careful decision to grasp the attention and interest from the
Semantics is a study of the linguistics meaning of a text over and above the
meaning of lexical items taken individually” (Crystal and Davy 1969:19). Similar
to that, Leech (1966:156) states that “Semantics as the art of conveying meanings
words with double meaning (connotation and denotation). Sometimes the text on
make the reader imagines how good the promoted product is through the artistic
however, may have its figurative meaning. It connotes additional meaning and
“advertising language, the most frequent word for ‘acquisition of product’ is ‘get’,
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and not ‘buy’, because ‘buy’ has some unpleasant connotation, like ‘money’ and
2.2.4. Advertisement
Advertising has become the part of today’s life. From everywhere around us,
advertisements from many kinds of types overflow our life. Advertisement has an
attractive charm that is able to intoxicate the consumer with its unique marketing.
means, to find out the principles to improve the techniques with the purpose to be
unique and attractive.English enables the advertisement maker to use many kinds
of linguistics aspects such as, word puns, figurative language, type of texts, styles,
etc.
direct mail, or public transportation” (Lee and Johnson 2007:3). Cook (1996:182)
adds that “Advertising is not some external curiousity which we examine, from
which we are separate and superior, but something of which we are part, and part
which is part of us”. Advertising is an inevitable part of our modern society which
its feature is its competitive fight against other products. It is everywhere around
on the internet and any place to distribute or promote its product. The effects of
organization promotion on the market with the purpose is to give information and
to persuade people of the benefit of the products and persuade them to take action
To achieve the unity and continuity of the text, Halliday and Hasan (1976) state
that “English sentences can be linked in various ways, among which repetition of
an element and back reference by means of pronouns are among the more
parallelism, conjuction and other figurative languages are used to form or join
form text.” He adds, “the repeated pattern provides a kind of texture to the text,
Wee see that the main subject that everything derives from Tampax. In the second
sentence by the pronoun ‘it’ and in the last sentence by the possesive pronoun
‘its’. Those are cohesion devices that are used to prevent unnecessary repetition in
text. The advetiser wants to gather attention in the first sentence, and then
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enlighten product’s superiority in order to induce the impression that the product
modes’ to make meaning, for example image, gesture, music, spoken language or
written language. Kress (2010:79) defines that “Mode is a socially shaped and
culturally given semiotic resource for making meaning. Image, writing, layout,
music, gesture, speech, moving image, soundtrack and 3D objects are examples of
modes: image and writting. Moreover, Its purpose is to deliver its means to the
reader.
“Marketing mix consist of four main components; product, place, price and
oftenly overthink and worry about the price whether it is too expensive or too
cheap, where they buy the product whether buying in “A” shop is different in “B”
shop or not, how the quality of the product is, how it is promoted, etc. These
2.2.4.2.1. Product
A product is “ a bundle of price” that fulfills consumer’s hope (Lee and Johnson
2007:14) . Advertising the characteristics and the exelence of the product will help
the consumer easy to choose a product or service that is suitable for their needs.
The brand determination and packaging are a product’s two important characters.
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To express the product’s characteristics into something concrete, that can be used
companies advertise only one brand, name or word or phrase and its own symbol
or logo. For example parfum companies invest a large number of money in their
2.2.4.2.2. Place
group of person and organization that directs the product from the producer to the
registration.
2.2.4.2.3. Price
production, distribution, and promotion and so the profit estimation. A price can
support an image of the product, take the sale from other competitor, affect people
to buy the product. For example, a marketer give discount to consumer who buy
its product. Also a high costing on iPhone, apple’s product, helps raising an
2.2.4.2.4. Promotion
potential consumer, it includes direct sale, selling promotion, and publicity” (Lee
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that tries to inform and persuade a consumer to buy a product. Generally, direct
sale is the most expensive element in the marketing mix, because direct contact is
important to build a good relation with consumer. In doing direct sale, a company
usually gives free coupont or discount when it introduces a new brand to capture
organization should try to set aside a product which satisfies consumer’s need
through certain activity that enables the organization to reach its purpose. The
product. It is aimed to spread to the world about the product, its function, or its
advertisement using stylistic strategies in order to make the product stands out
from others, grasps consumer’s interest, and makes sales. If the advetiser develops
advertisements, the consumer would chain to the product and would buy the
advertisements which are headline, copy or body copy and slogan. In print
advertisements, each of the elements has its own characteristics and its
importance.
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2.2.4.3.1. Headline
attracts the reader’s attention. It communicates a selling point and encourages the
nutshell the main point of the news story they relate to and at the same time
advertisement if the headline is simple and less attractive. There are several styles
that frequently found in creating the headline, such as, curiosity, question,
“Body copy or copy is the text of the advertising” (Blakeman 2005:40). “The
content develops the sale message and provides support, states the proof and gives
product and service that need explanation of the service, such as in business-to
2.2.4.3.3. Slogan
Slogan is a simple and catchy phrase coming with a logo or brand that wraps a
benefit and quality of the product” (Jefkin 1976:83). The benefit, quality and
Headline, sub-headline and slogan are mostly taking the role in advertising. There
are several charms that are shown in the body copy, such as information, benefit
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or characteristics. Even so, the advertising always carries with five main senses of
human body; vision, hearing, taste, touch and smell that tend to hold the readers’
feeling.
The three important composition of print advertisement above are the marker on
how the advertisement will be analyzed. Those will be the criteria on the
whether the reader’s interested about the product or not. The body copy works as
characteristic and the speciality and the details of the product. The slogan works
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RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
parts: qualitative approach; data of the study; role of the researcher; data
This study uncovers how the advertiser employs the distinctive linguistic
occur in the data analysis to figure out the realization of the meanings by the
choice of linguistic means used in the text.. Thus, the qualitative approach is used.
Suharso (2006:1) describes that “Qualitative research means any kind of research
relationships between information about people’s actions and phenomena, and the
settings in which they do these things”. Based on the definitions, the qualitative
research requires the investigation of the data which is in the form of words or
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picture and it presents the data and research in the form of description. The
words employed. The report is needed to make the researcher be able to clearly
The qualitative method is applied in this study because all of the data in this study
are in the form of words. Qualitative research does not focus on numerals or
statistics but give most attention to how deep the researcher’s knowledge toward
the interaction among concepts which is being learnt. However, when used along
with quantitative methods, qualitative research can help us to interpret and better
mean to enhance the qualitative analysis in the study. Interpretation is mainly used
to analyse the quantitative data and also needed to describe the qualitative
framework of analysis in the study. The researcher needs to demonstrate that the
research uses clear logic and provides strong evidence to substantiate the claims
The writer attempts to use qualitative approach to analyse the data and the
The data of the study is several print advertisementswhich are formed of texts.
and Lomax (in Davis and Elder 2004:149) explain that “Meaning is the output of
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the activity of the participants and the input to the process of analysis”. So that,
this study would concern with analysing and interpreting the data that are
(in Davis and Elder 2004:149) also add that “text is both something produced by
natural language use in a particular setting.” The hidden motivations behind a text
or behind the choice of a particular method of research to interpret that text will
object in this study in the next chapter. To reach this understanding by analysing
In this research, the descriptions about how the advertiser employs the distinctive
the data. The research report is written descriptively in accordance with the
Magazine as the data of the study to be analyzed. The magazine was published in
January 2014 to December 2014. It is a year period collection. The writer chose
“In qualitative research, the researcher is the primary instrument. This has two
aspects. First, the researcher himself collects the data. Second, the researcher has
to interpret the data” (Heigham and Croker 2009:11). In this research, my role is a
data collector that gathers the necessary data as the object of the study.
Additionally, my role is also an analyst and interpreter that analyses and interprets
the distinctive linguistic expression that are employed within text of advertisement
by the advertiser that are realized with the stylistic devices to answer the research
problem. Finally, I work as a writer for conveying the research findings and
arranging the conclusion and then completing the report in accordance with the
findings.
The data of the study is the text of printed advertisements which are collected
from Cosmopolitan Magazine United States edition that are a year collection from
This study will analyse the text of advertisement through stylistic analysis and
expressions that are employed by the advertiser. The analysis would be divided
into 3 units of analysis; there are discourse analysis, lexicogrammar analysis and
semantic analysis.
Discourse analysis will cover about the element of context of situation of the
advertisement. It covers the whole text and the image of the advertisement.
Lexicogrammar Analysis includes the finite analysis and the adjective analysis,
After collecting the data, the data is analyzed based on the related theoretical
research study. The data is analyzed in order to solve the problem of the study. In
this study, the writer takes several steps to describe the distinctive linguistics
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expressions or the stylistics strategies which are employed by the advertiser. The
(2) Examining the advertisement that is matched with one condition. The
In the process of analyzing the text, the writer has divided the text of
printed advertisements into three parts, which are into headline, body copy
elements has its own table of data. On this part, the writer uses quantitative
After analyzing the text, the result will be presented in the table. Based on
this identification, later on the writer will interpret the result of each unit of
analysis into words in the discussion part. The writer discusses the result
to just language. “Multimodality can tell us what modes are used” (Kress 2010).
‘multimodality’ refers to the multiple modes, for example spoken, written, printed
and digital media through which social semiotics takes place. Printed
is a socially shaped and culturally given semiotic resource for making meaning”
such as text, image, music, gesture, videos, etc. Its primary function is that of
(Halliday and Hasan 1985). It is a term to cover what is going on outside the text
which makes the text what it is. There are three variables within any context of
situation that broadly determine the language choices that are made in the
language features found in any text. Those are field which refers to the subject
situation and the social relation existing between the addresser and the addressee,
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and mode which refers to the channel of communication whether the text is
The writer is going to find out the field, tenor, and mode by descriptively
elaborated through the main areas of the each elements of context of situation.
Field can be analysed in terms of experiential domain or what the text is about,
goal orientation or what the text is for, and social activity, or what the text is
doing. Tenor can be analysed in terms of status relations or the hierarchical status
the emotional closeness between the interactants, frequency of contact or the level
derives from our inclination or disinclination to bundle with various formal and
informal social groups. Mode is generally divided into three main areas; language
role, channel and medium. Language role tells the important of language in the
the context), channel tells whether it is graphic or phonic, and medium tells
At this level of analysis the lexical and grammar related such as vocabulary,
most visual aspect of the illustration. Rather than abstract, concrete or everyday
the means for advertisers to express their opinion about the product. In the fields
to describe specific quality and feature of the product. What tense is used in the
what tense that is frequently used in the print advertisement and why it tends to
use that tense. The present tense is commonly used in the advertisements. The use
of present tense might indicate how good the quality of a product is, whether or
not it has long lasting effect. At the same time, it makes the advertisement easy to
understand.
advertisement, because they play major role in the advertising since it makes
many kinds of figure of speech and rhetorical device, but only several that will be
and other rhetorical device like repetition, alliteration, assonance, question and
also general technique. Keraf (2009), Leech (1972), Leech (1981) and Myers
(1997) point out a number of language and rhetorical devices typical for
advertising, one of each is the semantic level that includes figures of speech,
This chapter deals with the research findings and discussions.In this chapter, the
will uncover the statements of the problem on how the advertiser employs
4.1 Findings
This analysis deals with the strategies of the advertiser in employing distinctive
States. It is one of monthly media that has big circulation and an international
monthly media with high quality product. Since language of advertising has its
own style, it emphasizes why one’s product stands out in comparison with
another. The language of advertising is normally very positive, that is why the
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This sub chapter presents the results of problems found in each advertisement.
1) Context of Situation
Anti-Ageing and Beauty Balm that creates new cream called Color and
product in America. It gives detailed information about the way the CC Cream
work and the benefit of it that is to fight 7 signs of aging over time while
providing instant coverage for flawlessly beautiful skin. It is also said “love the
skin you’re in” that means if the consumer wants to love their skin, they should
use Olay Total Effect CC Cream. The participants here are the advertiser and
range) with the consumer. It does not require direct feedback. The mode being
used is written mode and it uses casual statement. It portrays a face of a woman
with flawless skin. It used written text to provide information and an image that
also provide visual information of the target reader. The choice of the font,
enlarged, colored letter is to form attractive and vivid image of the product.
Considering the addition of multiplication “+” and “=”, the advertiser is also
trying to give more simple explanation about what element that are being
2) Lexicogrammar
All of the text in the advertisement used present tense. It indicates the good
quality of the product. We can see the verbs founds in the advertisement text
that indicate present tense such as fight, providing and love. The text is also
some adjective in the text, there are “anti-ageing”, “instant” and “beautiful”.
Those words indicate the positive adjective of the quality of the mentioned
3) Semantic
Figures of speech are part of semantic analysis. The advertisement text of Olay
Total Effect CC Cream commonly used personification. There are verb that is
being personified like fight and love. They are indicated as the quality of living
“A”, “B” and “C” in the words of Anti-ageing, Beauty Balm and Color and
Correction.
1) Context of Situation
The combination of both oil and lotion have an additional benefit of the
product. It can beautify like oil and also can moisturize like a lotion. It gives
detailed information about the way the Oil Beauty work and the benefit of it
that the skin is visibly transformed from first application for softer, smoother
and more radiant looking skin with non-greasy touch and first inventor of oil-
infused lotion. They also emphasize the proof that they conducted a study that
the result is 80% agreed their skin has never looked so beautiful. First
sure the consumer realizes that Garnier is the inventor of first oil-infused
lotion, no one else. The slogan of Garnier is “take care” means that the
consumer need to take care of their body, in this case is the skin. The
participants here are the product of Garnier, the Oil-Infused Lotion as the
advertiser and the target reader or the consumer. The advertiser is the dominant
direct feedback. The mode being used is obviously written mode because it is a
image that is also provide visual information of the target reader. It portrays a
body of a woman from head to waist and the combination of oil and lotion. She
is topless and her body is facing backward. She wants to show you that her skin
product. The enlarge words emphasize what the product is and differ the
2) Lexicogrammar
Several tense are used in this text of advertisement. It contains of present tense
as you can see the verb “beautifies”, “moisturizes”, “take”, “introducing”, and
“is transformed” that is the passive verb. It contains of present perfect tense
too from the verb “has been looked”. “Enriched” is presented a past tense
“beautiful”. Those words indicate the positive adjective of the quality of the
3) Semantic
The advertisement text of Oil Beauty of Garnier dominates with the general
technique. It did not use word play to make sound catchier. Besides, there is
looking skin with non-greasy touch”. It describes how the skin will look after
usingthe product. It also contains of metonymy from the clause “80% agreed
their skin has never looked so beautiful”. The 80% here refers to the woman
following the study of Garnier. While the clause “beautifies like an oil,
1) Context of Situation
reveal your skin radiance, instantly and naturally. The combinations of both
vitamin and mineral have an additional benefit of the product. The body of the
cream has no artificial perfume or color and no harsh chemical that can upset
your skin. It claims to be perfect for sensitive skin. It also emphasize with their
slogan “sensitive skin experts” and the clause “it’s brilliant even for sensitive
advertisement, the Simple Illuminating Cream act as the advertiser and the
gives more information of the product. Written mode is used in the printed
simple illuminating cream, sticky note presenting an offering and the benefit of
the product and enlarge phrase of “No artificial perfume or color” which
emphasize it is safe to use for the people who has sensitive skin.
2) Lexicogrammar
The adjectives found in this advertisement vary. There are both positive and
3) Semantic
clause “it’s brilliant even for sensitive skin”, “just a brilliant combination of
experts”. It gives pressure on how good the product works for sensitive skin
by saying “brilliant” and “perfect even for sensitive skin”. The personification
can be seen from the words “brighten” and “upset your skin” which has the
1) Context of Situation
is a shampoo which can transform your dull, lifeless hair into glowing silky
locks with an opulent blend enriched with exquisite argan oil and indulgent
camellia oils. Its body copy of the advertisement tells about what the
shampoo can do to your hair. The argan oil and camellia oils are the
additional points which have good advantages in its usage. It claims 48 hours
of shining hair, and still going even after a night of fun. The ultimate blend
provides information about what product is which acts as the advertiser and
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the producer while the target reader is the consumer. It uses written mode and
also presents image. The image portrays a bottle of the Ultimate Blends in
orange with camellia flowers an oil at the back of the bottle, a stamp of
blended for Britain for gorgeous hair that’s full of life, and the background is
in front of a building.
2) Lexicogrammar
Finite which are found in this advertisement are present and past. The words
words of past marker are “enriched” and “blended”. It means that it has
already done in the past time. While for the adjectives found in the
“exquisite”, and “indulgent” which are included into positive adjective. Other
adjectives found are “dull” and “lifeless” which are included into negative
adjective.
3) Semantic
1) Context of Situation
that has filloxane for thicker hair. The body copy of the advertisement
the hair fiber and helps increase hair’s diameter from within. It also gives
cumulative effect, if used continually. Your hair will looks and feels thicker
with luxurious body and bounce. The slogan is “because you’re worth it”,
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means that you’re worth of having the benefit of the product. The participants
are the product of L’oreal, the Elvive Fibrology as the advertiser and also the
producer and the target reader or the consumer. The advertiser is the
to the reader and an image that is also provide visual information. It portrays
blond hair to show the product works on her hair makes it look thicker and
luxurious looking.
2) Lexicogrammar
can be seen from the verbs such as “looks”, “helps”, “penetrates”, gives”
“feels” and auxiliary “are”. The adjectives found are only positive adjectives;
there are “thicker”, “cumulative”, luxurious”, and “worth”. They are indicated
3) Semantic
thicker wash after wash”, “the science behind thicker hair”, “hair looks and
feels thicker with luxurious body and bounce” are the examples of the clause
containing the figures of speech. We can see from how the words “wash” and
“thicker” are emphasized and used several times. Even though the repetition
of the word “thicker” is not in the same clause, it is still in the same text.
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1) Context of Situation
advertisement tells about what the Herbal essences and conditioner are. Those
contains of natural argan oil which makes your hair looks seriously seductive
shine. It will make your dull hair into beam gleam hair. It emphasized the use
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of natural argan oil since the clause repeat twice in the text. The use of both
shampoo and conditioner of Herbal Essences will take a shine to your hair
like you would not believe. You can say no the naturally attractive hair.The
participants are the Herbal Essences as the advertiser/producer and the target
reader or the consumer. The text gives more information to the reader, so it is
more dominant than the consumer. The mode being used is written mode
also provide visual information. In the image, there are a pair of Herbal
Nicole Scherzinger who modeled the advertised product. She posed with a
2) Lexicogrammar
This advertisement text of Herbal Essences used present tense, the verbs
which included in the present marker are “go”, “shine”, and “say”. While
oil will take a shine to your hair like you wouldn’t believe” analyzed as
adjective, and “dull” classified into negative adjective. The negative adjective
3) Semantic
The figures of speech in this text are classified into personification. Because
there are several verbs which have the quality of living things on inanimate
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“seductive shine”, “My Shine shampoo and conditioner with argan oil will
take a shine to your hair”, “Say yes to naturally irresistible hair”. Other
clauses are used general technique that has no attractive or catchy line.
4.1.1.7 Advertisement No.7, Bioré Deep Cleansing Pore Strips and Pore
Unclogging Scrub
1) Context of Situation
Bioré has introduced their product called, Deep Cleansing Pore Strips and
your face. The product is focused on the pores since it is the smallest part of
your face which breakout starts spreading. By using this dynamic duo, you
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can have visibly healthier skin, because they purges pores to reduce acne,
blackheads, and breakout. Usually, starts from using the Deep cleansing Pore
Strips which works to lift up blackhead in your nose where the pore is bigger.
The product provides information about the topic of the text which acts as the
advertiser and the producer while the target reader is the consumer. It uses
written mode and also presents image. The image of the advertisement is
simply shows a shape of the product and simple blue colored background
with circles at the corner of the page and enlarged letter of the headline.
2) Lexicogrammar
“healthier”. There are no negative adjective found in the text. While the verbs
“purges”, “reduce”, “starts” and “free” are classified into present marker.
3) Semantic
There are three kinds of figures of speech found in the text. First, repetition
words found in the text are “bye” in “bye,bye, breakouts” and “pore” in
“Bioré deep cleansing pore strips + pore unclogging scrub. Also found
alliteration “B” in the “bye, bye, breakouts” and “...to reduce acne, blackhead,
breakouts”. Then, there are two clauses of Personification; “this dynamic duo
purges pore to reduce acne, blackhead, and breakouts” and “free your pores”.
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1) Context of Situation
used for hair styling. If you want to straighten your hair with hair iron, you
and also heat-styling protection up to 450o. It will protect your hair from
damage comes from the heat. It emphasizes to the consumer to protect, sleek,
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you’re worth it” means that you worth of having an extraordinary hair with
protection and fizz control, and no damaged hair. The participants are the
product of L’oreal Sleek It Iron Heatspray as the advertiser and also the
producer and the target reader or the consumer. The advertiser is the
reader and an image that is also provide visual information. The image
portrays a black and orange colored bottle of the product and a woman with a
black straight, smooth and healthy looking hair that represent the result of the
product.
2) Lexicogrammar
The text ofL’oreal Sleek It Iron Heatspray only contains of positive adjectives
“extraordinary” and “worth” they are indicate the positive quality and benefit
of the product. There is also one tense used in this advertisement which is
present tense. It shows from the verbs “protect”, and auxiliary verb “are” and
“be”. The detailed information of the text mostly used complex phrases not a
clause.
3) Semantic
There are 2 kinds of figures of speech, and a rhetorical question found in this
you?. It asks about how smooth your hair is. It does not necessary need an
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“Protect it. Sleek it. Own it”. Metonymy is also found in the text of “iron
straight heatspray”. “Iron” here refers to a tool used for hair styling, not the
1) Context of Situation
collection with Skin Energizing Complex. It claims that it renews surface cell
to even skin tone and reduce the appearance of dark spots. It means, getting
too much sun screen of Ultraviolet A and Ultraviolet B is not good for the
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skin. It causes the dark spots to appear. Using the product may make your
skin back to normal skin tone without the appearance of the dark spots. You
will see your skin looks bright, pearlescent and healthy in just 2 weeks. The
slogan of Olay is “your best beautiful” which implied it will shows your
beauty at its best. Those are the information and the benefit of the product as
well. The participants are the product of Olay Regenerist Collection with Skin
Energizing Complex as the advertiser and the target reader or the consumer.
The advertiser gives detailed information of the product which makes it as the
woman smiling satisfied with her gleaming face with even skin tone and no
appearance of the dark spots. We can see that it focuses on her shining face
in the spotlight. She wants to show you that her skin is bright, pearlescent and
2) Lexicogrammar
The text of Olay Regenerist Luminous advertisement used present tense, the
verbs of present marker includes “renew”, “reduce” and see”. While the
phrase “I will never let a dark spot steals my spotlight” classified as modals.
There are different qualities found in the text, positive and negative adjective.
“beautiful”. On the other hand, the negative adjectives found are only “dark”,
3) Semantic
will never let a dark spot steals my spotlight. The alliteration word “S” found
in that phrase as well, because a dark spot given the quality of living things to
steal. Because there are several verbs which have the qualities of living things
1) Context of Situation
It works not only just as a cleanser, but also as a skin exfoliator, refiner, pore
microheads which polishes and refines the surface of the skin. Alpha and beta
hydroxy could clean deep and thoroughly. In addition, it reduces pores that can
lock up to half their size. The slogan of the product is “#1 Dermatologist
recommends the product because it is no.1 best skin care. The slogan is meant
to be the product attention seeker. The consumer may wonder how good the
participants are the advertiser and the target reader or the consumer. It builds a
casual or informal relation with the consumer. It does not require direct
feedback. The mode being used is written mode, it uses casual statement and
also provides image. The images shown on the advertisement is simply a tube
of the product with water effect at the bottom of the tube which give refreshing
atmosphere.
2) Lexicogrammar
Finite found in this advertisement are present tense and modal. The verbs
identified as present marker are “does”, “polish”, “refine”, and auxiliary “is”.
Modal identified in phrase “for visibly reduced pores than can lock up to half
their size”. Modal identifier here is “can”. For the adjective, the only
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adjective found in this text is “deep”. It explains how good the product can
3) Semantic
Hyperbole and personification found in the text. The phrase which classified
much more than clean”. The words “so much more” here, is trying to
exaggerate the benefit of the product. While the phrase “for visibly reduced
pores that can lock up to half their size” is identified as personification. The
choice of word “lock up” means the pores get smaller and cover half to their
size.
1) Context of Situation
cream which can regenerate your skin. It works to hydrate your skin at the
first touch and provides continued anti-ageing results over time. The
information given from the product is not detailed enough, because the text
only contains of some clauses. The participants are the Olay Regenerist
consumer. Eventhough, the text does not give detailed information to the
reader, it is still more dominant than the consumer. The mode being used is
written mode because it requires a text and an image which provide visual
big smile on her face showing how beautiful her face is. She looks satisfied
with her face because of the anti-ageing formula of the product she used.
2) Lexicogrammar
Positive adjectives found in the text are “dramatic”, “anti-ageing”, “best”, and
The tense used in the text is present tense as seen in the use of verbs
3) Semantic
see ellipsis marker in the headline of the text “get dramatic result...without
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quality of living things. Its slogan “your best beautiful” implies exaggerating
one’s beauty.
Foundation.
1) Context of Situation
The formula can cover and conceal completely and 12x thinner. we can not
tell the coverage build on our face by using this product. The detailed
information here also act as the benefit of the product. the participants are the
product as the advertiser and the producer, since it gives information, while
the target reader here as the consumer. It uses written mode and also presents
image. The image shows a bottle of the product and a body of a woman
which focuses on the face because it is a face makeup product. She shows
how the product completely covers, maybe blemish or dark spot, without
2) Lexicogrammar
marker are “discover”, “covers”, and auxiliary “is”. The advertiser only used
positive adjective to give information about the quality of the product. the
“thinner”
3) Semantic
The advertiser used variation figures of speech in the text such as parallelism,
exaggerate the result of the product with “completely” and “12x thinner”.
Repetition word “maybe” and alliteration “may” also found in the same
4 Discussion Finding
This section presents the interpretation of the findings of the study. Start from the
The context of situation analysis determines how the resources of the language
system will be used by the advertiser to communicate with the target reader or the
consumer. It can be inferred from the Field point of view shows that the advertiser
delivering the message about the advertised product and ideas of the company of
make persuasive statement to the target reader to gain as many as possible buyer.
Moreover, he convinced the target reader that the products that are being
advertised in Cosmopolitan Magazine United States edition are worth buying and
having. The main point of the advertisement text was that he asked as many as
possible buyer would know and purchase their money to buy the advertised
product so that the company of advertised product could reach its economic goals.
The Tenor of Discourse; in terms of agentive role and status reveals that the
advertiser as the producer of the advertisement spoke with the consumer as the
States edition. From the Mode of Discourse, the advertiser used written mode to
deliver his message and intention. Therefore, the writer concludes that the
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From the lexicogrammar analysis that has been done by the writer, it has been
revealed some different results with also some different interpretations. The
1) Finite Analysis
Based on the result of the analysis, it can be seen that the most used finite used
advetiser’s expectation and hopes to make the consumer deserve what they
2) Adjective Analysis
Based on the result of the analysis, it can be seen that most used adjective in
good or positive qualities of the product. Although, that words are often used
The last interpretation in this study is the semantic analysis. Semantic analysis
focuses on analyzing figures of speech and other rhetorical device. The result
parallelism, rhetoric question and also general technique. The advertiser often
Hyperbole is used to exaggerate the benefit of the product or what the product
can do or how it gives a result after using its product. The repetition is used as
used to attract the reader even it does not require a real answer. The figures of
speech is often used to give different vibe in the text. Since it’s playful and
attractive which can gain target reader’s attention to read or to purchase the
advertised product.
CHAPTER V
This is the last chapter presented in this study. It consists of conclusions, and
5.1. Conclusions
This analysis deals with the strategies of the advertiser in employing distinctive
States Edition 2014 Issue. The language of advertising is normally very positive,
that is why the choice of certain language to convey specific messages with the
plan how to make the advertisements look as interesting as possible to attract the
consumer’s attention in order to purchase the product. Based on the data analysis
in the previous chapter, the conclusion about the strategies that the advertiser used
persuasive text because through the text the advertiser tried to persuade as many
Magazine. The information shared is mostly about detailed, benefit of the product,
and the result after using the product. In terms of Experimental Domain, the text is
issue. The writer mostly found the lexical words that the advertiser employed in
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the advertisement text were intended to persuade the reader or the consumer to
spend
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their money to purchase the product since it has its own appeal or usage. In terms
of Goal Orientation, the text was used to persuade reader or consumer to purchase
text that is circulated by the company could persuade the reader or consumer to
purchase the advertised product they need or crave. Therefore, from the Field
point of view, it could be concluded that the text is about the idea and message of
the advertised product to gain interest of the reader to purchase the mention
The tenor concludes that the subject of this Study is the product which is being
December 2014 issue. The agentive role that occurred in terms of Tenor for the
text is the advertiser of the advertised product as the producer and the target
reader of the magazine is the consumer. The status relationship of the interactant
may have is equal. This is proved by the choice of words that the advertiser used
Social Distance or the amount or nature of contact the interactant may have, the
writer concludes that it builds a casual or informal (minimum range) with the
reader or the consumer and the relationship between them were temporary
relationship. While the mode analyzed that, in terms of Language Role or how
important is the language in this context, it is the central element of the context
(constitutive). The medium of the text is written, and also used written mode to
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deliver the content. However, the text is classified as a monologue, the turn taking
From the Lexicogrammar point of view, In conclusion, from Present Tense point
of view, the advertiser tends to convey the goal of the advertised product through
the choice of words. Moreover, by using present tense, it also expresses the
advertiser’s expectation and hope to make the consumer deserve what they want
by providing more benefit and best result of the product. On the other hand, Past
tense in the clause gives those words the ability to sound as if it is done in the
past. The effect of using past tense is to tell the target reader or the consumer that
something is already happened. Besides, using the choice of words indicates that
the advertiser certain about what he was saying and without doubt at all. It makes
the advertisement text sounds more persuasive. While Modal in the clauses give
those words the ability to sound as if it is done in the future. It is a type of verb
that is used to indicate modality- that is ability, permission, and obligation. Thus,
the effect of using modal is to tell the target reader or the consumer that is
something will happen. Beside, by using the choice of words indicates that the
advertiser give possible result of using the advertised product. Reader’s positive
affective meaning. The advertisement in this study contains adjectives with either
device. The advertiser often used general technique to describe the product what
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the product is, what the benefit of the product is. The figure of speech is often
used to give different vibe in the text. Since it’s playful and interesting that can
5.2. Suggestions
Considering the result and significance of the study, there are suggestions that can
be derived from the analysis. The writer suggests that this study will be useful for
readers who are interested in text analysis and English Department Students.
The result of this study reveals kinds of distinctive linguistic expressions which
are employed by the advertiser. The study may be contribute to the area of
Practically, the writer would like to address the suggestion to the readers who are
interested in discourse analysis. The study can provide some guidance for
more interesting and attractive. Moreover, it will also benefit those who are
interested in the use of stylistic in advertisements and extend their idea of using
who will be future teacher, the results of this study may raise awareness regarding
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APPENDIX 1
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Copy You need to try this! It’s brilliant even for
sensitive skin! Brighten up your skin
naturally with new simple iluminating
cream. No artificial perfume or colour. No
harsh chemicals that can upset your skin.
Just a brilliant combination of skin-loving
vitamin and light-reflecting mineral,
formulated to reveal your skin radiance,
instantly and naturally. It’s perfect even for
sensitive skin.
Slogan Sensitive skin experts
4 Apr01 April 2014 Shampoo Garnier Headline 48 hours of shining hair. Glowing even
after a night of fun.
Copy The marvellous transformer. Transform
your dull, lifeless hair into glowing, silky
locks with an opulent blend enriched with
exquisite argan and indulgent camellia
oils.
Slogan Take care
5 May01 May 2014 Shampoo L’oreal Headline Hair looks thicker wash after wash. Helps
Elvive expand the hair fibre
Copy The science behind thicker hair: filloxane.
Penetrates into the fibre. Helps increase
hair’s diameter from within. Fibrology
gives a cumulative effect, wash after wash.
Hair looks & feels thicker with luxurious
body and bounce.
Slogan Because you’re worth it.
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6 Jun01 June 2014 Shampoo Herbal Headline Seriously seductive shine. Afterglow
Essences included. With natural argan oil.
Copy Go for dull-beam gleam. Herbal Essebces
Moroccan My Shine shampoo and
conditioner with argan oil will take a shine
to your hair like you wouln’t believe. Time
to shine/ ye, yes, yes!
Slogan Say yes to naturally irresistible hair
7 Jul01 July 2014 Facial Biore Headline Bye, bye, breakouts. Clearer skin in one
Wash week when used together.
Copy Biore deep cleansing pore strips + pore
unclogging scrub. When used togeter, this
dynamic duo purges pores to reduce acne,
blackheads, and breakouts. Because
cleaner, visibly healthier skin starts with
your pores.
Slogan Free your pores.
Jul02 July 2014 Skincare Olay Headline I will not let age change me. I will change
the way I age.
Copy The Olay Regenerist Collection with
advanced Skin Energizing Complex revs
up surface cell renewal to reveal younger-
looking skin. Now that’s a beautiful
change!
Slogan Your best beautiful
Jul03 July 2014 Lotion Aveeno Headline What goes with everything? Beautiful skin
Copy Aveeno Daily Mosturizing Lotion gives
you 24 hours hydration for soft, beautiful
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skin that lasts. Aveeno Active Naturals Oat
has 5 vital nutrients found in healthy skin –
protein, anti-oxidants, enzymes, vitamin
and lipids. Because beautiful skin goes
with everything.
Slogan Naturally Beautiful Results.
8 Aug01 August Hair spray L’oreal Headline How smooth are you? Protect it. Sleek it.
2014 Own it.
Copy Sleek it. Iron straight heatspray.
Professional-grade formula 3 days of fizz
control and heat-styling protection up to
450o
Slogan Because you’re worth it.
9 Sep01 September Blush on maybelline Headline Jump on the glaze craze.
2014 Make up Copy The how, glazed pearls in shea butter
glide. The wow, cheecks glisten with a
dewy new sheen.
Slogan Maybe she’s born with it. Maybe it’s
maybelline.
Sep02 September skincare Olay Headline I will never let a dark spot steal my
2014 Regenerist spotlight.
Copy Olay Regenerist Luminous Collection with
Skin Energizing Complex. Renew surface
cell to even skin tone and reduce the
appearance of dark spot. See
bright,pearlescent,healthy-looking in just 2
weeks.
Slogan Your best beautiful
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Sep03 September Shampoo Pantene Headline Fearless. Shampoo without fear of
2014 damaging your hair.
Copy Pantene is clinically proven to give you
healthier hair with every wash. So you can
always shine strong.
Slogan Shine strong
10 Oct01 October Skin care Neutrogena headline This isn’t cleanser. It’s a skin exfoliator,
2014 refiner, pore minimizer and a cleanser.
Copy Neutrogena pore refining exfoliating
cleanser does so much more than clean.
Microheads actually polish and refine
skin’s surface. While clinically proven
alpha + beta hydroxy thoroughly cleans
deep. For visibly reduced pores that can
lock up to half their size.
Slogan #1 Dermatologist Recomended Skincare.
11 Nov01 November Skincare Olay Headline Get dramatic results... without drastic
2014 measures.
Copy Olay regenerist micro-sculpting cream
hydrates to begin working at the first touch
and provide continued anti-aging results
over time.
Slogan Your best beautiful
12 Dec01 December Make-up Maybelline Headline Discover the wonder. Impeccable yet
2014 100% undetectable coverage.
Copy New Dream Wonder fluid-touch
foundation. Our unique a micro-concealing
formula covers completely, yet is 12x
84
thinner.
Slogan Maybe she’s born with it. Maybe it’s
maybelline.
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APPENDIX 2
FINITE
Present
No. Clauses Simple Present Present Perfect Simple
Modal
Present Continuous Perfect Continuou Past
s
1 Fight 7 signs of aging over time while √
providing instant coverage for flawlessly
beautiful skin.
2 Love the skin you’re in. √
3 Beautifies like an oil, moisturises like a lotion. √
4 Introducing Oil Beauty; a lightweight √
moisturising lotion enriched with 4
beautifying oils.
5 Skin is visibly transfromed from the 1st √
application for softer, smoother and more
radiant looking skin with non-greasy touch.
6 In our study, 80% agreed their skin has never √ √
looked so beautiful.
7 Take care √
87
8 Brighten up your skin naturally. √
9 You need to try this! √
10 It’s brilliant even for sensitive skin! √
11 Brighten up your skin naturally with new √
simple iluminating cream.
12 No harsh chemicals that can upset your skin. √
13 Just a brilliant combination of skin-loving √
vitamin and light-reflecting mineral,
formulated to reveal your skin radiance,
instantly and naturally.
14 It’s perfect even for sensitive skin. √
15 Glowing even after a night of fun. √
16 Blended for Britain, for gorgeous hair that’s √ √
full of life
17 Transform your dull, lifeless hair into √ √
glowing, silky locks with an opulent blend
enriched with exquisite argan and indulgent
camellia oils.
18 Take care √
19 Hair looks thicker wash after wash. √
20 Helps expand the hair fibre √
21 Penetrates into the fibre. √
22 Helps increase hair’s diameter from within. √
23 Fibrology gives a cumulative effect, wash √
88
after wash.
24 Hair looks & feels thicker with luxurious √
body and bounce.
25 Because you’re worth it. √
26 Go for dull-beam gleam. √
27 Herbal Essebces Moroccan My Shine √
shampoo and conditioner with argan oil will
take a shine to your hair like you wouln’t
believe.
28 Say yes to naturally irresistible hair √
29 Bye, bye, breakouts. √
30 Clearer skin in one week when used together. √
31 When used togeter, this dynamic duo purges √ √
pores to reduce acne, blackheads, and
breakouts.
32 Because cleaner, visibly healthier skin starts √
with your pores.
33 Free your pores. √
34 How smooth are you? √
35 Protect it. √
36 Sleek it. √
37 Own it. √
38 Sleek it. √
39 Because you’re worth it. √
89
40 I will never let a dark spot steal my spotlight. √
41 Renew surface cell to even skin tone and √
reduce the appearance of dark spot.
42 See bright,pearlescent,healthy-looking in just √
2 weeks.
43 This isn’t cleanser. √
44 It’s a skin exfoliator, refiner, pore minimizer √
and a cleanser.
45 Neutrogena pore refining exfoliating cleanser √
does so much more than clean.
46 Microheads actually polish and refine skin’s √
surface.
47 While clinically proven alpha + beta hydroxy √
thoroughly cleans deep.
48 For visibly reduced pores that can lock up to √ √
half their size.
49 Get dramatic results... without drastic √
measures.
50 Olay regenerist micro-sculpting cream √
hydrates to begin working at the first touch
and provide continued anti-aging results over
time.
51 Discover the wonder. √
52 Our unique a micro-concealing formula √
90
covers completely, yet is 12x thinner.
53 Maybe she’s born with it. √
54 Maybe it’s maybelline. √
FINITE Present
Simple Present Present Perfect Simple
Modal
Present Continuous Perfect Continuou Past
s
Total 46 - 1 - 8 4
Percentage 77.9% - 1.7% - 13.6% 6.8%
91
APPENDIX 3
Adjective Adjective
No. Clauses
Positive Negative
1 Anti Aging + Beauty Balm = Color and Anti-Ageing √
Correction
2 Fight 7 signs of aging over time while Instant √
providing instant coverage for flawlessly Beautiful √
beautiful skin.
3 Our 1st luxurious oil-infused lotion. Luxurious √
4 Introducing Oil Beauty; a lightweight Lightweight √
moisturising lotion enriched with 4
beautifying oils.
5 Skin is visibly transfromed from the 1st Softer √
application for softer, smoother and more Smoother √
radiant looking skin with non-greasy touch. Radiant √
Non-greasy √
6 In our study, 80% agreed their skin has Beautiful √
never looked so beautiful.
7 It’s brilliant even for sensitive skin! Brilliant √
Sensitive √
8 Brighten up your skin naturally with new Simple √
92
simple iluminating cream.
9 No artificial perfume or colour. Artificial √
10 No harsh chemicals that can upset your Harsh √
skin. Upset √
11 Just a brilliant combination of skin-loving Brilliant √
vitamin and light-reflecting mineral, Loving √
formulated to reveal your skin radiance,
instantly and naturally.
12 It’s perfect even for sensitive skin. Perfect √
Sensitive √
13 Sensitive skin experts. Sensitive √
14 48 hours of shining hair. Shining √
15 Blended for Britain, for gorgeous hair that’s Gorgeous √
full of life
16 The marvellous transformer. Marvellous √
17 Transform your dull, lifeless hair into Dull √
glowing, silky locks with an opulent blend Lifeless √
enriched with exquisite argan and indulgent Silky √
camellia oils. Opulent √
Exquisite √
Indulgent √
18 Hair looks thicker wash after wash. Thicker √
19 The science behind thicker hair: filloxane. Thicker √
20 Fibrology gives a cumulative effect, wash Cumulative √
93
after wash.
21 Hair looks & feels thicker with luxurious Thicker √
body and bounce. Luxurious
22 Because you’re worth it. Worth √
23 Seriously seductive shine. Seductive √
24 With natural argan oil. Natural √
25 Go for dull-beam gleam. Dull √
26 Say yes to naturally irresistible hair Irresistible √
27 Clearer skin in one week when used Clearer √
together.
28 When used togeter, this dynamic duo purges Dynamic √
pores to reduce acne, blackheads, and
breakouts.
29 Because cleaner, visibly healthier skin starts Healthier √
with your pores.
30 How smooth are you? Smooth √
31 Iron straight heatspray. Straight √
32 Because you’re worth it. Worth √
33 I will never let a dark spot steal my Dark √
spotlight.
34 Renew surface cell to even skin tone and Dark √
reduce the appearance of dark spot.
35 See bright,pearlescent,healthy-looking in Bright √
just 2 weeks. Pearlescent √
94
Healthy √
√
36 Your best beautiful Best √
Beautiful
37 While clinically proven alpha + beta Deep √
hydroxy thoroughly cleans deep.
38 Get dramatic results... without drastic Dramatic √
measures. Drastic √
39 Olay regenerist micro-sculpting cream Anti-Ageing √
hydrates to begin working at the first touch
and provide continued anti-aging results
over time.
40 Your best beautiful Best √
Beautiful √
41 Impeccable yet 100% undetectable Impeccable √
coverage. Undetectable √
42 Our unique a micro-concealing formula Unique √
covers completely, yet is 12x thinner. Thinner √
Adjective Positive Negative
Total 50 12
Percentage 80.6% 19.4%
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APPENDIX 4
96
radiant looking skin with
non-greasy touch.
In our study, 80% agreed √
their skin has never
looked so beautiful.
Take care √
Brighten up your skin √
naturally.
You need to try this! √
It’s brilliant even for √
sensitive skin!
Brighten up your skin √
naturally with new simple
iluminating cream.
No artificial perfume or √
colour. No harsh
chemicals that can upset
your skin.
Just a brilliant √
combination of skin-
loving vitamin and light-
reflecting mineral,
formulated to reveal your
skin radiance, instantly
and naturally.
It’s perfect even for √
sensitive skin.
97
Sensitive skin experts √
48 hours of shining hair. √
Glowing even after a √
night of fun.
Blended for britain, for √
gorgeus hair that’s full of
life
The marvellous √
transformer.
Transform your dull, √
lifeless hair into glowing,
silky locks with an
opulent blend enriched
with exquisite argan and
indulgent camellia oils.
Take care √
Hair looks thicker wash √
after wash.
Helps expand the hair √
fibre.
The science behind √
thicker hair: filloxane.
Penetrates into the fibre. √
Helps increase hair’s √
diameter from within.
Fibrology gives a √ √
cumulative effect, wash
98
after wash.
Hair looks & feels thicker √
with luxurious body and
bounce.
Because you’re worth it. √
Seriously seductive shine. √
Afterglow included. √
With natural argan oil. √
Go for dull-beam gleam. √
Herbal Essebces √
Moroccan My Shine
shampoo and conditioner
with argan oil will take a
shine to your hair like you
wouln’t believe.
Time to shine/ ye, yes, √
yes!
Say yes to naturally √
irresistible hair
Bye, bye, breakouts. √
Clearer skin in one week √
when used together.
Biore deep cleansing pore √
strips + pore unclogging
scrub.
When used togeter, this √
dynamic duo purges pores
99
to reduce acne,
blackheads, and
breakouts.
Because cleaner, visibly √
healthier skin starts with
your pores.
Free your pores. √
Naturally Beautiful √
Results.
How smooth are you? √
Be extraordinary. √
Protect it. Sleek it. Own √
it.
Sleek it. √
Iron straight heatspray. √
Professional-grade √
formula 3 days of fizz
control and heat-styling
protection up to 450o
Because you’re worth it. √
I will never let a dark spot √ √ √
steal my spotlight.
Olay Regenerist √
Luminous Collection with
Skin Energizing Complex.
Renew surface cell to √
even skin tone and reduce
100
the appearance of dark
spot.
See √
bright,pearlescent,healthy-
looking in just 2 weeks.
Your best beautiful √
This isn’t cleanser. √
It’s a skin exfoliator, √
refiner, pore minimizer
and a cleanser.
Neutrogena pore refining √
exfoliating cleanser does
so much more than clean.
Microheads actually √
polish and refine skin’s
surface.
While clinically proven √
alpha + beta hydroxy
thoroughly cleans deep.
For visibly reduced pores √
that can lock up to half
their size.
#1 Dermatologist √
Recomended Skincare.
Get dramatic results... √ √
without drastic measures.
Olay regenerist micro- √
101
sculpting cream hydrates
to begin working at the
first touch and provide
continued anti-aging
results over time.
Your best beautiful √
Discover the wonder. √
Impeccable yet 100% √
undetectable coverage.
New Dream Wonder √
fluid-touch foundation.
Our unique a micro- √
concealing formula covers
completely, yet is 12x
thinner.
Maybe she’s born with it. √ √
Maybe it’s maybelline.
Figure of Speech Personification Hyperbole Alliteration Repetitio Other General
n Rhetorical Technique
Device
Total 21 11 5 7 7 26
Percentage 27.3% 14.3% 6.5% 9.1% 9.1% 33.7%
102
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