You are on page 1of 119

LINGUISTIC EXPRESSIONS IN COSMOPOLITAN

MAGAZINE’S ADVERTISEMENTS

A Final Project

Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements

for the Degree of Sarjana Pendidikan

in English

by

Medyana Noor

2201411115

ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
FACULTY OF LANGUAGES AND ARTS
SEMARANG STATE UNIVERSITY
2017
ii
iii
Karena sesungguhnya sesudah kesulitan itu ada kemudahan.

Sesungguhnya setelah kesulitan itu ada kemudahan.

-Q.S. Al-Insyirah : 5-6-

iv
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS

First and foremost, I am sincerely grateful to the Lord of the world, Allah the

Almighty, for the blessing, health, unlimited love and gift, patience, strength, and

inspiration which are given to me during the writing of this final project.

I would like to express my deepest gratitude to Dra. Helena I. R. Agustien, M.A.,

Ph. D. and Rohani, S. Pd., M. A.,my advisors in providing the very valuable

guidance, advice, time as well as encouragement from the beginning until this

final project is completed.

I give million thanks to all lecturers of English Department of UNNES for giving

and sharing magnificent knowledge and precious lessons.

Most importantly, none of this would have been possible without the love of my

family. I am grateful to my beloved parents who always dedicate their love,

concerns, and encouragement for me throughout my study. No one is more

genuine than my most beloved family who never stop praying for me, showing me

that unconditional love does exist, supporting me emotionally and financially for

everything I do and always being home for me. I am also thankful to my beloved

brother and my beloved extended family for their huge support and care.

I have been incredibly blessed with humble and cheerful friends who have helped

me stay strong through this difficult year. The deepest thanks are dedicated to my

super best friends ever – Shufi Annisa Rahmah, Awwalia F. Izza and Nuki

Nurazizah for always being there, for the time to share, and for the unquestionable

friendship and love. I also wish my thanks to my one and only sister Anggraeni

v
Nur Kusumasari for always giving me strength and supporting me until the end. I

greatly value their friendship and deeply appreciate their supports to me.

I am also thankful to my very special partnerRifanov Ardiansyah for the love and

support, comforting advice, exciting moments, jokes, and stories. I would like to

thanks people whose names cannot be mentioned one by one here for the help and

support given to me.

Finally, I hope that this research will be useful for the readers and encourages the

other researchers to conduct extensive research on text analysis.

Medyana Noor

vi
ABSTRACT

Noor, Medyana. 2017. Linguistic Expressions in Cosmopolitan Magazine’s


Advertisements. Final Project. English Department, Faculty of Languages
and Arts, Semarang State University. First Advisor: Dra. Helena I. R.
Agustien, M. A., Ph. D., Second Advisor: Rohani, S. Pd., M. A.
Keywords; Advertisement, Stylistics, Context of Situation, Figures of Speech,
Positive Negative Adjectives
This final project is a report on the stylistics analysis of printed advertisement.
This study aimed to describe the way the advertiser used the distinctive linguistic
expressions in the Cosmopolitan Magazine’s Advertisement. Since the
advertisement should attract the consumer as many as possible, the advertiser
needed to have a plan to find a solution of this problem in conveying the messages
through the advertisement.
In this study, the discussion was limited by finding out distinctive linguistic
expressions of the advertisement which can be used to convey meanings through
text and image. This research was a descriptive qualitative study. The object of
this study was printed advertisement collected from Cosmopolitan Magazine
United States Edition January to December 2014 Issue.
Before further analysing, the advertisements were sampled bylooking at the three
important composition of printed advertisement.After identifying the elements of
the printed advertisement, the stylistic analysis involved context of situation
analysis, lexicogrammar analysis, and semantic analysis to know the linguistic
expressions of the advertiser toward the advertised product in the Cosmopolitan
Magazine. The analysis revealed that in terms of context of situation, he advertiser
delivered persuasive text. The advertisement texts talked about the benefit and
usage of the product, the relation was temporary and used written mode.
Therefore, the advertiser was obliged to say persuasive statements to persuade the
reader as the consumer. The advertiser delivered the message of the product in
order to achieve the economic goal of the advertised product. The advertiser was
confident to give information to the reader about the benefit of the product.
Meanwhile, lexicogrammar analysis showed that the large parts of the clauses of
the text were positive adjectives which showed the good quality of the advertised
product. The semantic analysis showed that personification was the most frequent
figure of speech used in the advertisement text. In that sense, the advertiser
wanted to give the inanimate object the quality of living thing in order to make the
product had more value.

vii
TABLE OF CONTENTS

Page

COVER .................................................................................................... i

DECLARATION OF ORIGINALITY ................................................. ii

APPROVAL ............................................................................................ iii

MOTTO AND DEDICATION .............................................................. iv

ACKNOWLEDGEMENT ..................................................................... v

ABSTRACT ............................................................................................ vii

TABLE OF CONTENTS ....................................................................... viii

LIST OF FIGURES ................................................................................ xii

LIST OF APPENDICES ........................................................................ xiii

I. INTRODUCTION ........................................................................... 1

I.1 Background of the Study ................................................................... 1

I.2 Reasons for Choosing the Topic ........................................................ 5

I.3 Research Question ............................................................................. 6

I.4 Purpose of the Study .......................................................................... 6

I.5 Significance of the Study ................................................................... 7

I.6 Outline of the Research Report ......................................................... 7

II. REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE .................................... 9

II.1 Previous Studies ................................................................................ 9

II.2 Theoretical Background of the Study ................................................ 10

II.2.1 Stylistics......................................................................................... 10

II.2.1.1Language Style.............................................................................. 13

viii
II.2.1.2Types of Language Style............................................................... 15

II.2.2 Text and Context............................................................................ 17

II.2.2.1Context of Situation (Register)...................................................... 20

II.2.2.2Context of Culture(Genre)............................................................. 22

II.2.3 Style Marker.................................................................................. 24

II.2.3.1Visualisation.................................................................................. 24

II.2.3.2Lexicogrammar Level.................................................................... 26

II.2.3.3Semantic Level.............................................................................. 28

II.2.4 Advertisement ............................................................................... 29

II.2.4.1Cohesion of Advertising Text........................................................ 30

II.2.4.2Marketing Mix............................................................................... 31

II.2.4.2.1 Product...................................................................................... 31

II.2.4.2.2 Place.......................................................................................... 32

II.2.4.2.3 Price........................................................................................... 32

II.2.4.2.4 Promotion.................................................................................. 32

II.2.4.3Elements of Print Advertisement................................................... 33

II.2.4.3.1 Headline.................................................................................... 33

II.2.4.3.2 Body Copy................................................................................ 34

II.2.4.3.3 Slogan........................................................................................ 34

II.3 Framework of the Present Study........................................................ 36

III. METHOD OF INVESTIGATION ................................................. 37

III.1Qualitative Approach ......................................................................... 37

III.2Data of the Study ............................................................................... 40

ix
III.3Role of the Researcher........................................................................ 40

III.4Data Collection................................................................................... 40

III.5Unit of Analysis.................................................................................. 41

III.6Techniques of Analysis ..................................................................... 41

III.6.1 Multimodal Discourse Analysis..................................................... 42

III.6.2 Context of Situation Analysis........................................................ 43

III.6.3 Lexicogrammar Analysis .............................................................. 44

III.6.4 Semantic Analysis ......................................................................... 45

IV. FINDINGS AND DISCUSSIONS .................................................. 46

IV.1.....................................................................................................Findings

..........................................................................................................46

IV.1.1 Analysis Result of Each Advertisements....................................... 47

IV.1.1.1 Advertisement 1........................................................................... 47

IV.1.1.2 Advertisement 2........................................................................... 49

IV.1.1.3 Advertisement 3........................................................................... 52

IV.1.1.4 Advertisement 4........................................................................... 54

IV.1.1.5 Advertisement 5........................................................................... 56

IV.1.1.6 Advertisement 6........................................................................... 58

IV.1.1.7 Advertisement 7........................................................................... 60

IV.1.1.8 Advertisement 8........................................................................... 62

IV.1.1.9 Advertisement 9........................................................................... 64

IV.1.1.10......................................................................................Advertisement 10

...................................................................................................66

x
IV.1.1.11......................................................................................Advertisement 11

...................................................................................................68

IV.1.1.12......................................................................................Advertisement 12

...................................................................................................70

IV.2........................................................................................Discussions of Findings

............................................................................................................ 71

IV.2.1 Context of Situation Analysis ....................................................... 72

IV.2.2 Lexicogrammar analysis ............................................................... 73

IV.2.3 Semantic analysis .......................................................................... 73

V. CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS ...................................... 75

V.1 Conclusions ....................................................................................... 75

V.2 Suggestions ........................................................................................ 78

APPENDICES ......................................................................................... 79

BIBLIOGRAPHY ................................................................................... 102

xi
LIST OF FIGURES
Figure Page

2.1 Framework of the Study...................................................................... 36

4.1 Advertisement of Olay Total Effect CC Cream.................................. 47

4.2 Advertisement of Garnier Oil Beauty................................................. 49

4.3 Advertisement of Simple Illuminating Cream.................................... 52

4.4 Advertisement of Garnier Ultimate Blends........................................ 54

4.5 Advertisement of L’oreal Elvive Fibrology....................................... 56

4.6 Advertisement of Herbal Essences..................................................... 58

4.7 Advertisement of Biore Deep Cleansing Pore Strip and

Pore Unclogging Scrub....................................................................... 60

4.8 Advertisement of L’oreal Sleek It Iron Heatspray............................. 62

4.9 Advertisement of Olay Regenerist Luminous.................................... 64

4.10Advertisement of Neutrogena Pore Refining Exfoliating Cleanser... 66

4.11Advertisement of Olay Regenerist Micro-Sculpting Cream.............. 68

4.12Advertisement of Maybelline Dream Wonder Fluid-Touch

Foundation.......................................................................................... 70

xii
LIST OF APPENDICES

Appendix Page

1. List of Product Advertisement............................................................ 80

2. Lexicogrammar Analysis: Finite........................................................ 86

3. Lexicogrammar Analysis: Adjective.................................................. 91

4. Semantic Analysis: Figure of Speech................................................. 95

CHAPTER I

xiii
INTRODUCTION

This chapter is divided into six parts: background of the study, reasons for

choosing the topic, research questions, purposes of the study, significance of the

study, and outline of the report.

1.1. Background of the Study

Language is one of the valuable products of culture created by human beings.

Human beings created a means by which they can exchange information as well

as feelings. The needs to exchange information and feelings make people

interact. This process of human interaction is called communication.

Communication can be seen as information transmission process. The simple

process of communication consists of the source or the sender, the message, the

channel, and the receiver (Berlo 1960). The level of communication process is

divided into six parts, they are intrapersonal, interpersonal, intragroup,

intergroup or association, institutional or organization and society-wide

networks or mass communication (McQuail 1987).

Language communication can be done in two different modes: spoken

mode and written mode. These two different modes are the media of

communication. They are different communication systems which are used to

convey different

xiv
2

form of language. Spoken mode is coded in sound, while written modes is coded

in symbols. The success of communication in speaking is determined toward the

second person. Its information is conveyed directly to the second person. While

the way printed information is conveyed by printed media, so it is possible that

communication happen indirectly between the first person and the second

person. In terms of style, spoken and written language carry different aspects.

On the one hand, spoken language tends to be dynamic and context dependent,

use complex sentence structure with low lexical density, and use non-standard

grammar. On the other hand, written language tends to be synoptic and context

independent, use simple sentence structure with high lexical density, and use

standard grammar.

The language of advertising is used to convey information from producer to

consumer including advertisements. Advertisement is one example of mass

communication that is a process in which a person or a group of people sends a

message through a communication channel including television, radio,

magazine, newspaper or social media to large group of people. The aim of

advertisements is to enhance the visibility of the products and services among

the consumer, to attract reader’s attention or to increase consumer’s awareness,

affect the reader and persuade them to use and buy the product. Advertisement

runs three functions. First, as the information that is to inform the product,

characteristics, and selling location. Second, as the persuasion that is to persuade

the consumer to buy certain brand. Third, as the reminder that is to remind the
3

consumer about the product so that they keep buying the product being

advertised (Lee and Johnson 2007). So the advertisement needs to be made as

interesting as possible. The purpose of making advertisements is to introduce a

new product to the consumer, to boost sales, to expand brand, product, or

services awareness for the producer in gaining profit. The characteristics of

advertisements are interesting and unique. The uniqueness of advertisement

language becomes the characteristics to make the reader to do as it said on the

advertisements. The characteristic of advertisement language is shown through

its language style that is used in printed advertisements and also the appropriate

diction to convey meaning, so that the advertisements could reach the target.

Nowadays, people use multimedia. Multimedia is the combined use of several

media including video, images, audio, text that can be accessed interactively. In

short, it can be described as multiple forms of media and content.

Advertisements are presented through two media, printed media, and electronic

media. Press advertisements (printed media) involve newspaper, magazine,

tabloid, and so on. A magazine that is published internationally is Cosmopolitan

Magazine. Cosmopolitan magazine is an international fashion magazine for

women. It was first published in 1886 in the United States as a family magazine.

It is published by Hearst Magazines, Cosmopolitan has 64 international editions,

and printed in 35 languages and distributed in more than 100 countries. Its

slogan is “Fun, Fearless, Female”. Its content include articles on women’s

issues, relationship, careers, celebrities, fashion, beauty, and advertisements. It

has a variety of advertisement such, fashion, make-up, perfume, and others. In


4

advertisement, combination of words and visualization are important in order to

attract the reader with the display of the advertisement. Language being used is

simple, understandable, and interesting. It is used as attraction for the reader to

buy or utilize a product or service that is offered.

The society could accept and respond the information or messages well if the

advertisement is presented communicatively and persuasively. In essence,

advertisements should be understandable and interesting, because it appeals to

some aspect of reader’s personality to make them believe its product will make

them healthier, prettier, more comfortable, etc. It uses carefully chosen and

positive language. The choice of language conveys certain meaning that is

vitally important because the intention of it is to influence people. It has a

powerful influence over people and their behavior. The language use in

advertisements should be adjusted with the consumer’s needs and taste, because

it will affect consumer’s interest toward the product that is advertised instead of

the product’s quality. In this case, linguistics and non-linguistics features

determine the success of the advertisements (Wing 2001).

There are several ways of using advertising language in order to make good

advertising. Because the aim of advertising is to persuade, so that advertising use

the language of persuasion. The language of advertising commonly use

adjectives, compound words, unique sentence structure, and figure of speech.

One of the ways to make good advertisement is by combining the figure of

speech into the message of the advertisement. The more creative the message is

the more the advertisement could gain the consumer’s attention. It can create
5

more imaginative aspects in advertising and it is able to gain reader’s attention

and build product interest. For example, “Play with your beauty” from make-up

advertisement, the advertiser used personification to show imaginative feature of

the beauty as human ability. The phrase implies as if beauty is personified. It

uses beauty as substitution of human being who you can play with. Creating the

message in the advertisements using this techniques could make the

advertisements more interesting and attractive than using simple sentence with

ordinary words and literal meaning (Bernstein 1974).

This study analyses the distinctive expression in language, how the style

expresses the distinctive linguistics expression in advertisements of

Cosmopolitan Magazine considering that the advertisements are more interesting

to be seen because of the visualizations and words.

1.2. Reasons for Choosing Topic

In this study, I’m interested in analyzing the distinctive linguistic expressions in

Cosmopolitan Magazine’s advertisements. Here are several reasons why I am

interested in investigating these advertisements. First, language has a powerful

influence over people. The choice of language to convey specific messages with

the intention of influencing people is vitally important. The language of

advertising is normally very positive. It emphasizes why one’s product stands

out in comparison with another. So that, the language of advertising has its own

style.

Second, advertisement is a form of communication that is used to persuade the


6

audience (viewers, readers, or listener) to take actions with the products, ideas,

or services. It uses chosen, positive language. It appeals to some aspect of the

reader’s personality. Moreover, it tries to make the readers believe that its

product will do them good.

Third, these advertisements are published in Cosmopolitan Magazine.

Cosmopolitan Magazine is one of monthly media that has big circulation. It is an

international monthly media with high quality product. Furthermore, it takes

huge advertisements fund.

I want to find out about distinctive linguistic expressions that are employed by

the advertiser in Cosmopolitan Magazine’s advertisement because it is a

sophisticated and popular magazine. Since the linguistics expressions vary, I

want to know what kind of distinctive linguistic expressions that are used in the

advertisement.

1.3. Research Questions

In order not to discuss something irrelevant, this study has been limited by

presenting and focusing the attention to the following problem:

1. What kinds of distinctive linguistic expressions are employed by the

advertisers?

1.4. Purposes of the Study

Based on the formulated problem above the objectives of this final project is to

find out the distinctive linguistic expressions are used by the advertisers’ in the
7

Cosmopolitan Magazine.

1.5. Significance of the Study

The writer will divide the significance of the study into three parts, they are

theoretically, practically, and pedagogically. Here are the significance of this

study:

(1) Theoretically, the study may be contribute to the area of stylistic or

linguistic expressions in advertising.

(2) Practically, the study can provide some guidance for advertisements maker

how to make a good advertisement applying various linguistic expressions

or different stylistic strategies in order to make the advertisement more

interesting and attractive. Moreover, it will also benefit those who are

interested in the use of stylistic in advertisements and extend their idea of

using different types of figures of speech for different types of products.

(3) Pedagogically, the results may raise awareness regarding the linguistic

expressions in the same area of stylistic in the teaching of writing.

1.6. Outline of the Report

The researcher divided this study into five chapters:

1. Chapter I is the introduction, which contains the background of the study,

reasons for choosing the topic, research questions, objectives of the study,

significance of the study, and outline of the report.


8

2. Chapter II is the review of the related literature which contains the previous

study, review of the theoretical study, and the theoretical framework.

3. Chapter III is the method of investigating, which consists of qualitative

approach, data of the study, role of the researcher, data collection, units of

analysis, and techniques of analysis.

4. Chapter IV is the findings and discussion, which consists of the description

and analysis of the research data.

5. Chapter V presents the conclusion and suggestion.


CHAPTER II

REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE

This chapter covers review of previous studies and the relevant literature related

to the study which consist of stylistic, language styles, text and context, linguistic

description and advertisement in general . The last, the chapter is closed with

theoretical framework of the present study.

2.1. Review of the Previous Study

Analysis of language styles is not a new thing for analyst in literary field. There

are several analysts who already have done several studies on language style in

advertisements. There is a previous study similar with this final project. It is

entitled “The Stylistics Analysis of the Magazine Advertisement----Atkins

Chocolate Chip Granola Bar” by Min Li (2009). In this study, the writer

attempted to investigate the advertisemnet from the aspects of linguistics

description, textual analysis and contextual analysis by the application of modern

linguistics theory and stylistics analysis pattern in order to find out the general

stylistics characteristics of the advertisement.

There are similarity and difference between both studies. First, the similarity is

both of studies analyze advertisements. It analyses a form of communication that

is used to persuade the consumer to take action of the product Second, it is also

analysing the language styles or stylistic devices that are found in the

9
10

advertisements. Third, it is advertised using multimedia which combines several

media including video, audio, images or text that can be accessed interactively.

The choice of language that is used in advertisement may vary. Fourth, in terms of

linguistics features, the advertisement use simple present tense, so the reader

could understand its content easily. The difference is on the quantity of the object

of the study and the aspect that are investigated. The previous study analysed the

aspect of linguistic description, textual and contextual analyses of one

advertisement thoroughly, while this study analyses the aspect of linguistic

description and contextual factors of several advertisements in Cosmopolitan

Magazine. Even though both studies analyse printed advertisement on the

magazine, but the advertisement being analysed is a different type. The current

study analyse about the women things. Since it is a woman fashion magazines, the

advertisement are about fashion, cosmetics and accecories, while the old study

typed in food advertisement.

2.2. Review of the Theoretical Study

2.2.1. Stylistics

Stylistics analysis deals with stylistically certain features occuring in a text.

Stylistics is concerned with the study of style in language. Peter Verdonk (2002)

concludes that “So stylistics, the study of style, can be defined as the analysis of

distinctive linguistic expression in language and the description of its purpose and

effect.” A linguistic expression can be referred to any physical form like sound,

visual image or sequence thereof that is used to represent linguistics unit. A


11

linguistic expression may be spoken or written. It is distinct from the actual

process of speaking or writing that produce the expressions. Abrahams (2000)

claims that “Style has traditionally been defined as the manner of linguistic

expression in prose or verse – as to how speakers or writer say whatever it is that

they say.”

Meanings are objects. Linguistic expressions are objects. Linguistic


expressions have meanings (in them). In communication, a speaker sends a
fixed meaning to a hearer via the linguistic expression associated with that
meaning. On this account it is possible to objectively say what you mean, and
communication failures are matters of subjective errors: since the meanings
are objectively right there in the words, either you didn't use the right words
to say what you meant or you were misunderstood." (Lakoff & Johnson
1980:206)

In other word, stylistic is the study of varieties of language which positioning its

language in context, for example the language of advertising, politics, religion

and so on. Style can also be defined as the use of language in certain context and

certain situation by certain people. Style does not always follow the stuctural

grammar because sometime it differes from the standard form. Because of the

difference on its structural grammar, style has no rules. Nevertheless, it affects

the writing and it can make the relation between the writer and reader stronger

and make their awareness higher. Therefore, in certain situation, style could be

associated with relationship between the participants. In making stylistics

analysis, it should focus on feature which grasp reader’s interest and which differ

from the standard forms. Leech and Short (1981:48) define that “ the features are

regarded as forgrounded elements and are caused by parallelism and deviation;

deviation may be either qualitative, it judges an anomaly in language principle, or

quantitative in which deviance of expected frequency is analysed.”


12

Stylistics can be applied to an understanding of literature as well as linguistics.

Therefore, stylistics looks at what occurs in language: what the linguistics

associations are that the language style shows. Leech (1981:13) explained that

”stylistics, simply defines as the (linguistic) study of style, is rarely undertaken

for its own sake, simply as an exercise in describing what use in made of

language.” While Simpson (2004:2) states that “the definition of stylistics is a

method of textual interpretation in which primacy of place is assigned to

language.” In short, stylistics is a study learning about style of a language.

The language style use can be defined as making up something with the use of

beautiful, playful and artistic words, so the readers may feel the creativity in

language usage. “The aim of studying language is to explain something, and in

general, literary stylistics has, implicitly, the goal of explaining the relation

between language and artistic function” (Leech 1981:13). Still in the same term,

Simpson (2004:3) states that “doing stylistics is to explore language, and more

specifically, to explore creativity in language use. ”Doing stylistics thereby

enriches our ways of thinking about language, and as observed, exploring

language offers a great contribution on our understanding of (literary) texts.

Language style is the way to express the writer's feeling and thought through

beautiful, playful and artistic choice of words that will show the writer’s

personality. So that the advertiser frequently uses various types of language style

to make the advertisement lively and to catch attention from the reader.
13

Style in general is a subjective quality that represents a person or it may be a kind

of expression that identifies a person with a cerain group. Stylistics could be said

as typical language features use in written or spoken language which is

appropriate in certain situation. Nevertheless, the study of stylistics appreciate

substandard distinctive features.

2.2.1.1. Language Style

Language style in rhetorical is known as styles. Language styles or styles become

a part of diction or choice of words discussing whether or not the use of word,

phrase or clause is suitable deal with certain situation. Therefore, the issue of

language styles cover all linguistics features: choice of words, phrase, clause,

sentences, even a whole discourse. “Styles or language styles are limited as the

way to express thought through language characteristically that reveal the soul and

the writer’s personality” (Keraf 2009:113).

Nowadays, advertising is full of the way to present the product and what medium

that is used to promote the product. Therefore, it needs creative strategy in case of

competing in the market; one of each is using language styles in the text of

advertisements to give interesting impression on the presented advertisements.

According to Sudjiman (1990:33), “language styles is the way to express thought

and feeling with words in the form of written or spoken.”Kridalaksana (2001:25)

adds that “The explanations of language styles widely are first, people exploit the

property of language in speaking and writing. Second, the use of certain style or

type to obtain certain effects. Third, overall of writer’s language characteristics.”


14

Based on those opinion, it can be concluded that language styles is the way to

express thought and feeling through typical language to obtain certain effects. So

that, what is being expressed becomes clear and has appropriate meaning.

A good language style should contain three elements: honesty, manners


and interesting. Honesty in language is to follow the rules, or the
principles well and correctly. Words usage that is unclear and unfocused,
and sentence usage that is complicated lead to dishonesty. Speakers or
writers do not state their thought straightforwardly; they seem hiding
their thought behind the unclear word chain and complicated sentence.
Language is a communication tool. Therefore, language should be used
by considering the principle of honesty (Keraf 2009:113)

What is meant by manner is to appreciate and respect the people whom we talk to,

especially listener or reader. In language style, respect is manifested through

briefness and clarity. Briefness is measured within word and sentence

grammatical structure, the use of figurative language and comparison, sequence of

ideas logically. Clarity uses words efficiently, exclude two or more words that are

synonym loosely and exclude no necessary word repetition. Both clarity and

briefness is important as manner measurement.

Briefness and clarity should become a basic and early step. But, language style

should be interesting. An interesting language style can be measured through

these several components: variation, good humor, good understanding, vitality,

and imaginative.

Language style can be reviewed from various points of view. So far, the idea of

language style is differentiated into two aspects: non-linguistics aspect and

linguistics aspect.

In non-linguistics aspect, style is divided into seven points: based on


the writer, mass, medium, subject, place, attendant and goal. While in
linguistics aspect, language styles is divided into four points: language
15

style based on the choice of words, language style based on the tone
which is implied on the text, language style based on the sentence
structure and language style based on the direct or indirect meaning
(trope or figures of speech) (Keraf 2009:115-116)

Keraf (2009:117-145) also divides language style into several aspects and

points.

Language style based on the choice of words covers formal, informal,


conversation. Language style based on the tone covers simple language
style, glorious and vigorous language style¸ intermediate language style.
Language style based on the sentence structure have several points, there
are climax, anti-climax, parallelism, antithesis and repetition. While
language style based on the direct and non-direct meaning (figures of
speech) are divided into two main groups: rhetorical style and figurative
language. Rhetorical style covers alliteration, assonance, apostrophe,
ellipsis, euphemism, hyperbole. While figurative language covers simile,
metaphor, personification, metonymy, pun, etc

2.2.1.2 Types of Language Style

Language style in rhetorical is known as styles. Language styles or styles become

a part of diction or choice of words discussing whether or not the use of word,

phrase or clause is suitable deal with certain situation. Therefore, the issue of

language styles cover All linguistics features: choice of words, phrase, clause,

sentences, even a whole discourse. “Styles or language styles is limited as the way

to express thought through language characteristically that reveal the soul and the

writer’s personality (Keraf 2009:113).”

Nowadays, advertising is full of the way to present the product and what medium

that is used to promote the product. Therefore, it needs creative strategy in case of

competing in the market, one of each is using language styles in the copy of the

advertisements to give interesting impression on the presented advertisements.


16

According to Sudjiman (1990:33), “language styles is the way to express thought

and feeling wih words in the form of writen or spoken.” While Kridalaksana

(2001:25) describes that “The explanation of language styles widely are first,

people exploit the property of language in speaking and writing. Second, the use

of certain style or type to obtain certain effects. Third, overall of writer’s langauge

characteristics.”

Based on those opinion, it can be concluded that language styles is the way to

express thought and feeling through typical language to obtain certain effects. So

that, what is being expressed becomes clear and has appropriate meaning.

Keraf (2009:113-115) mentions that “A good language style contains three

elements: honesty, manners and interesting.” “Honesty in language is to follow

the rules, or the principles well and correctly” (Keraf 2009:114). Words usage that

is unclear and unfocused, and sentence usage that is complicated lead to

dishonesty. Speakers or writers do not state their thought straightforwardly; they

seem hiding their thought behind the unclear word chain and complicated

sentence. Language is a communication tool. Therefore, language should be used

by considering the principle of honesty.

“What is meant by manner is to appreciate and respect the people whom we talk

to, especially listener or reader” (Keraf 2009:114). In language style, respect is

manifested through briefness and clarity.Briefness is measured within word and

sentence gramatical structure, the use of figurative language and comparison,

sequence of ideas logically. Clarity uses words efficiently, exclude two or more

words that is synonym loosely and exclude no necessary word repetition.


17

Language style can be reviewed from various point of view. So far, the idea of

language style is differentiated into two aspects: non-linguistics aspect and

linguistics aspect. In non-linguistics aspect, style is divided into seven point:

based on the writer, mass, medium, subject, place, attendant and goal. While in

linguistics aspect, language styles is divided into four points: language style based

on the choice of words, language style based on the tone which is implied on the

text, language style based on the sentece structure and language style based on the

direct or indiret meaning (trope or figures of speech).

2.2.2 Text and Context

In everyday social life, people chat to their family members, organize children for

school, read the paper, speak at meetings, serve customers, follow instructions in a

booklet, make appointments, surf the internet, call in a plumber, unburden

themselves to therapists, record their day's thoughts and activities in a journal. All

of these are activities which involve language, (Eggins, 2004:1). Based on the

examples that are given by Eggins, we can deduce that by doing communication,

it helps us to share our ideas, interact with others, convey meanings, establish a

good relationship, and show the stance or our point of view about something.

Every time we speak or write, we exchange meaning and we are also constructing

a text. The meaning of a text can be defined as a piece of language in use;

“language that is functional” (Halliday and Hasan, 1985:10). Language carries

function to find out the meaning within those certain choice of words in a text. A

text represents the idea of the writer or speaker that can be either written or
18

spoken. Crystal (1992:72) as cited by Nunan (1993:6) offers the definition on the

term ‘text’, “a piece of naturally occurring spoken, written, or signed discourse

identified for purposes of analysis. It is often a language unit with a definable

communicative function, such as a conversation, a poster”. Gerrot and Wignell

(1994:158) also explain that “speaking and writing are manifestations of the same

linguistic system but in general they encode meaning in different ways because

they have evolved to serve different purposes”. It means that spoken language has

its own rules and regularities that do not always conform to written language.

Written text deals with the language text. A written text is identified as a text

which is constructed when a person is conveying his idea through written form,

for instances newsletter, short story, novel, etc. Meanwhile, spoken text is

identified as a text which is constructed when a person conveys his idea through

verbal communication and refers to language exchanges in which language

strongly accompanies action. For example, a conversation between a boss and his

staff in the office, dialog among a servant and a customer, chat between a buyer

and a seller, etc. The greater distance may emerge between participants. The

participants do not communicate directly but rather indirectly. Furthermore, the

inspection of written language is easier to carry out than the study of oral text.

Halliday and Hasan (1985:6) have a notion that text is meant “any connected

stretch of language that is doing job in some context”. The length of the text is not

important, as long as the text collects meanings that are appropriate to its context.

What is important is that a text is harmonious collection of meaning appropriate to


19

its context. This unity of purpose gives a text both texture and structure. Texture

comes from the way the meanings in the text fit coherently with each other. While

structures refer to the way that pieces of language in use will contain certain

obligatory structural elements appropriate to their purpose and context. As a

result, different context has different meaning.

Certain texts always connect to certain contexts. “The context is in the text”,

(Eggins, 1997:7). Eggins (1994: 7) also states that “our ability to deduce context

from text is one way in which language and context are interrelated”. From those

statements, as a means to convey meanings, language has double functions. Those

are to deduce context from the text and to produce text based on the given context

accordingly.

Language and context give contribution to each other to be identified. On the one

hand, we are able to identify the context of a text by paying attention to the

language applied. On the other hand, by knowing the context of a text we are able

to predict the language that might be used. Thus, the use of language is never

inseparable with the context surrounds it and the meanings it conveys. For

example, in a situation as formal as a governmental official meeting, such

informal language is less likely to be uttered. The grammatical slang like “ain’t” is

rarely found since it reflects the informality which does not match with the

context of formality in a governmental official meeting. Additionally, the

vocabulary employed is predictably dealing with the government whereas the

vocabulary of machinery and mechanical stuffs is unlikely found.


20

The ability to predict context from text and vice versa is essential for the skill of

producing an effective and appropriate text. It is very helpful in deciding which

language is effective and appropriate to be used based on the context given.

Moreover, it also contributes to the ability in understanding a text. As Gerot and

Wignell (1994:16) confirm:

The ability to predict from context to text is critically important for text
production (speaking or writing) and the ability to predict from text to
context is essential for text comprehension (listening or reading). To
understand something of the text-context relationship is to understand
something of how literacy is possible.

According to Eggins (1994:9), “systemicists divide context into a number of

levels, with the most frequently discussed being those of register (context of

situation) and genre (context of culture)”. Based on this statement, it is clearly

obvious that all meanings in a text are situated in a context of situation and a

context of culture. These contexts play a big role in the text construction. Both of

them are considered necessary for the adequate understanding of the text.

2.2.2.1 Context of Situation (Register)

Halliday and Hasan (1985:46) define “context of situation is the immediate

environment in which a text is actually functioning”. Context of situation is a

useful term to cover the things going on in the world outside the text which make

the text what it is. There are three variables within any context of situation which

largely determine the language choices that are made in the construction of any

language text. These variables function together and are responsible for the

configuration of language features found in any text.


21

According to Gerot and Wignell (1994:11), context of situation can be specified

through use of register variables:

1) Field refers to what is going on, including activity focus (nature of social

activity) and object focus (subject matter).

2) Tenor refers to the social relationships between those taking parts. These are

specifiable in terms of status or power (agent roles, peer or hierarchic

relations), affect (degree of like, dislike or neutrality), contact (frequency,

duration and intimacy of social contact).

3) Mode refers to how language is being used, whether the channel of

communication is spoken or written and language is being used as a mode of

action or reflection.

From the statements above, it can be said that in reconstructing the context of the

text we can use at least these three basic questions: (1) what is the topic of the

text, (2) who are involved, (3) and how the language is being used, written or

spoken and formal or informal. In addition, Halliday and Hassan offer a concept

on how to analyse field, tenor and mode using Contextual Configuration. A

contextual configuration is a specific set of values that realizes field, tenor or

mode (Halliday and Hasan, 1985:55).

(1) Field

It can be divided into three areas:

(1) Experiential Domain, or what the text is about;

(2) Goal Orientation, or what the text is for;

(3) Social Activity, or what the text is doing.


22

(2) Tenor

There are three basic factors within tenor, they are;

(1) Agentive Role, or the institutional (or not) roles of the participants, such as

doctor/patient, teacher/student, etc.;

(2) Social Role or the power relationship between them which may be

hierarchic or non-hierarchic and includes expert/novice and also conferred

social status and gender, etc.;

(3) Social Distance, or the amount or nature of contact the participants may

have, which ranges from minimal (close friends) to maximal (formal

settings).

(3) Mode

The mode is generally divided into three main areas, they are;

(1) Language Role, or how important is the language in this context, is it

ancillary (not important) or is it constitutive(the central element in the

context);

(2) Channel, which may be either phonic or graphic;

(3) Medium, which may be either written or spoken.

2.2.2.2 Context of Culture (Genre)

A text also provides information not only about what was happening at the time in

any kind of linguistics interactions but also about the total cultural background of

the participants. All of these play a part in the interpretation of the meaning.

Halliday and Hasan (1985:46) explains “any actual context of situation, the
23

particular configuration of field, tenor, and mode that has brought a text into

being, is not just a random jumble of features but a totally – a package, so to

speak, of things that typically go together in the culture”.

Context of culture is in which language interaction takes place. The context of

culture incorporates the attitudes, values and shared experiences of any group of

people living in one culture. It influences the purpose of constructing the text.

Gerot and Wignell (1994:10) state “context of culture determines what we can

mean through, such as being (who we are), doing (what we do), and saying (what

we say)”. Halliday and Hasan (1985:49) also define “context of culture as the

institutional and ideological background that give value to the text and constrain

its interpretation”.

The language one uses is different when the cultural background is not the same

accordingly. It affects what is appropriate from one people to others, also in terms

of language applied. For example, Javanese people never call those with higher

hierarchy by mentioning merely the first name. Javanese people use the title of

addressee or the hierarchy status. The omitting of them leads to considerably

inappropriate language use. Thus, we can conclude that the concept of context of

culture leads to the culturally acceptable use of language.

To be able to use culturally acceptable language, the concept of genre is

employed. The genre arises in social interaction to fulfill humans’ social purposes

(Gerrot and Wignell, 1994:190). The concept of genre defines the way and

structure of the meaning should be conveyed. In Eggins (1994:26), Martin

proposes explanation of genre; “a genre is a staged, goal-oriented, purposeful


24

activity in which speakers engage as members of our culture”. An easily example

of linguistics genre that shows obvious stages is recount text. Recount text has its

own particular order that consists of Orientation, Event(s) and Reorientation

(Gerrot and Wignell, 1994:194). The authors cannot reverse this scaffold

arbitrarily, because it will not be called a recount text if not in accordance with the

particular order.

There are many other such processes defined by a culture. For example we might

identify the seminar as a genre in our own culture, with identifiable stages in a

particular order. For example we can determine the stages by identify it as an

occasion to discuss something and therefore understand it as a purposive behavior,

such as introductions of the expert who become the speaker, explanation of the

materials, and questions addressed to the expert at the conclusion.

2.2.3. Style Marker

2.2.3.1. Visualisation

The visual effect of printed advertisement plays an important role, since it enable

to show image or visual to reader from the page. It helps to set story or introduce

an appearance of the product, in order to be fast recognized among other

competitive products. Arens and Bové (1989:292) stated, “ The visual carries such

a grate deal of responsibility for the success of an advertisemnet, it should always

try to offer story appeal.” Vestergaard and Shroder (1985:39) state that “Images

such as an icon, an index and a symbolused in advertising are considered as a

division of signs in term of decreasing degrees of naturalness.”An image or


25

illustration is used as attention-seeking devices, because an image or picture may

be explored at once than the verbal text on the advertisement. “Icon represents

similarity between symbol and object and between form an meaning. Icon reflects

similarity of physical properties or similarity in use” (Hermerén 1999:72).

Hermerén (1999:72) points out that “Symbol is a sign, which represents somehing

else.” According to Lee and Johnson (2007:70),“there is a creative consept behind

every good advertisement, a big notion that makes the message different, captures

attention, and easy to remember. ”To make an advertisement becomes affective, it

should contain of a big notion that catch consumer’s attention, get the reaction,

and separate promoted product or service from other competitor. Even a great

notion is hard to present, but some of the notion produces advertisement that are

easy to remember and effective. “An appeal uses emotional message and is

designed around the imagae that is expected to create response based on sense and

attitude” (Lee and Johnson 2007:179). Advertisers could use emotional appeal in

their advertisement strategic. Humour appeal or other appeal that are entertaining,

exciting, affect consumer’s emotion and make them in beneficial frame of

thought. “Advertisement appeal refers to an approach that is used in advertisement

to attract attention or interest from consumers and affect their emotion on the

promoted product or service” (Lee and Johnson 2007:179).

Since visualisation plays important role in printed advertisement, it is needed to

use the visualitation in the analysis to see how it affects the advertisements itself.

The image election such as symbol, icon, index and etc on the advertisement

should be calculated carefullly since it is something that will make the reader
26

impresses about the idea of the advertisment itself. To see how effective the image

shown in the advertisement, it is considered to know the reader’s attention. How

they react to the advertisement or does it increase the sale.

2.2.3.2. Lexicogrammatical level

This will focus to certain features which is important characteristics of the

analysis. The present tense is commonly used in the advertisements. Using present

tense in the advertisements tends to signify the quality of the promoted products.

At the same time, it is easier for the reader to understand the purpose of the

product.

The analysis will draw attention to certain features.

Starting with investigating the intersentence relationships, where the


sentence is linking features recognized are ellipsis, presence or
absence of anaphora and repetition or words, through sentence
typology, where complete and incomplete sentences and their
components are discussed. Then, clause typology is inquired where
elements of structure are realised, the proportion of nouns to verbs,
frequency pronouns. After that, a group of typology that considers
complexity of phrases, occurence of pre- or post- modification and
adverbial intensifiers,examination or finite or non-finite verbs, their
passive form or contraction follows. To the last investigating area of
word typography-morphology where word formation, origin of lexis
and collocations is the subject matter of morphology study (-
editedCrystal and Davy 1969:43-56)

According to Eggins (1994:2) “functional grammar is an approach to language

which centered on how people use language with each other in accomplishing

everyday social life”. In this case, how the advertiser views language to make

meaning and how the advertiser express their purpose in the advertisement in

order to get the reader could give feedback on what they expression are very

important. The analysis also deals with the grammatical analysis of the printed
27

advertisement. Why it tends to use present tense rather than past tense or future

tense. From that features of the grammatical level, how effective are that on

reader’s interest to make a move or purchase on the promoted product or not.

Creating language needs formation of words. A word carries its own meaning.

Some single word that are combined may deliver different meaning than an

intepreted word.There are several common processes of word-formation, such as

affixation or derivation (adding a prefix or suffix to an existing word to create),

compounding (combining two or more words based as a unit to form a new single

word), blending (combining parts of two or more words to create a new word),

and clipping (reducing or shortning a word without changing its meaning). Leech

(1969:44) points out:

The purpose of neologism does not just contribute to compression and


economy, which is very important in advertising, but it implies the
wish to recognize a concept or property which language can express
only by phrases or clauses.

While Goddard (2002:74) states that”Vocabulary is carefully chosen to promote

positive associations.” In the fields of advertising, adjectives are considerably

represented word class as they convey a positive or negative meaning. “Adjectives

are pertinent in advertising as they convey a positive or negative affective

meaning” (Delin 2000:133). Its function is to describe specific quality and feature

of the product.Adjectives is word class typical, in contrast often omitting the verb,

while monosyllabic words are used frequently.

This part of work will be concerned with typical characteristics of the vocabulary

of advertising and most commonly used figures of speech. The advertiser should

sort these parts carefully such as verb phrase, noun phrase, adjectives, formation
28

of new words or phrases, collocation in order to make a great advertisement. The

election of lexical feature on the advertisment is important. It needs to be made as

good as possible with careful decision to grasp the attention and interest from the

reader and also to increase sales.

2.2.3.3. Semantic Level

Semantics is a study of the linguistics meaning of a text over and above the

meaning of lexical items taken individually” (Crystal and Davy 1969:19). Similar

to that, Leech (1966:156) states that “Semantics as the art of conveying meanings

which contributes to the selling effectiveness of an advertisement." Semantic also

knowns as the study of meaning of linguistic expressions. The language used as in

advertisement to achieved an effect on an audience especially through the use of

words with double meaning (connotation and denotation). Sometimes the text on

the advertisement use either connotation or denotation. The advetiser wants to

make the reader imagines how good the promoted product is through the artistic

words.Linguistics expressions has its literal meaning. It denotes what it means

according to common or dictionary use. The same linguistics expression,

however, may have its figurative meaning. It connotes additional meaning and

evokes associations. Connotative meanings depend on individual’s previous

experience. Therefore, the same expression connotations will differ from

individual to individual. Furthermore, the same denotations can have different

connotations in different context. Vestergaard and Schroder (1985:68) believe that

“advertising language, the most frequent word for ‘acquisition of product’ is ‘get’,
29

and not ‘buy’, because ‘buy’ has some unpleasant connotation, like ‘money’ and

the parting with it.”

2.2.4. Advertisement

Advertising has become the part of today’s life. From everywhere around us,

advertisements from many kinds of types overflow our life. Advertisement has an

attractive charm that is able to intoxicate the consumer with its unique marketing.

The market of advertising caused intention and interest in linguistic aspect of

advertising. People begin to describe the advertisement, to analyze the linguistics

means, to find out the principles to improve the techniques with the purpose to be

unique and attractive.English enables the advertisement maker to use many kinds

of linguistics aspects such as, word puns, figurative language, type of texts, styles,

etc.

Advertisement is a form of marketing communication that is used to promote or

sell products or services. “Advertisement is a commercial and nonpersonal

communication about an organization and its product that is transmitted to the

public through mass media including television, radio, newspaper, magazine,

direct mail, or public transportation” (Lee and Johnson 2007:3). Cook (1996:182)

adds that “Advertising is not some external curiousity which we examine, from

which we are separate and superior, but something of which we are part, and part

which is part of us”. Advertising is an inevitable part of our modern society which

its feature is its competitive fight against other products. It is everywhere around

us, we can found it in newspapers, magazines, billboards, television, radio, even


30

on the internet and any place to distribute or promote its product. The effects of

the advertising affect us whether we like it or not.

Generally speaking, advertising is a means of product, idea, service or

organization promotion on the market with the purpose is to give information and

to persuade people of the benefit of the products and persuade them to take action

by purchase the product or service.

2.2.4.1. Cohesion of Advertising Text

To achieve the unity and continuity of the text, Halliday and Hasan (1976) state

that “English sentences can be linked in various ways, among which repetition of

an element and back reference by means of pronouns are among the more

important.”other techniques, for example, synonymy, alliteration, repetition,

parallelism, conjuction and other figurative languages are used to form or join

sentences together. These ‘sentence signals’ is called cohesion. Widdowson

(2000;125) defines cohesion as “The ties that connect up units of language to

form text.” He adds, “the repeated pattern provides a kind of texture to the text,

sets up a kind of connection or cohesion across the sentences” (Widdowson

2000:38). Here is a given example of cohesion in advertising text:

“Stay active: Tampax protects so well. It even prevents odours. Mother


Nature won’t stop your fun, thanks to its Double Protection System with
absorbent core and protective skirt.”

Wee see that the main subject that everything derives from Tampax. In the second

sentence by the pronoun ‘it’ and in the last sentence by the possesive pronoun

‘its’. Those are cohesion devices that are used to prevent unnecessary repetition in

text. The advetiser wants to gather attention in the first sentence, and then
31

enlighten product’s superiority in order to induce the impression that the product

is the good solution for given situation.

Multimodality can be defined as the strategic use of ‘two or more communication

modes’ to make meaning, for example image, gesture, music, spoken language or

written language. Kress (2010:79) defines that “Mode is a socially shaped and

culturally given semiotic resource for making meaning. Image, writing, layout,

music, gesture, speech, moving image, soundtrack and 3D objects are examples of

modes used in representation and communication.” Print advertisement can be

classified into multimodality, since it combinesat least two communication

modes: image and writting. Moreover, Its purpose is to deliver its means to the

reader.

2.2.4.2. Marketing Mix

“Marketing mix consist of four main components; product, place, price and

promotion” (Lee and Johnson 2007:14).In choosing a product, the consumers

oftenly overthink and worry about the price whether it is too expensive or too

cheap, where they buy the product whether buying in “A” shop is different in “B”

shop or not, how the quality of the product is, how it is promoted, etc. These

variables mostly irritate the consumers and put the in confused.

2.2.4.2.1. Product

A product is “ a bundle of price” that fulfills consumer’s hope (Lee and Johnson

2007:14) . Advertising the characteristics and the exelence of the product will help

the consumer easy to choose a product or service that is suitable for their needs.

The brand determination and packaging are a product’s two important characters.
32

To express the product’s characteristics into something concrete, that can be used

to distinguish one product with another, there are many organizations or

companies advertise only one brand, name or word or phrase and its own symbol

or logo. For example parfum companies invest a large number of money in their

parfume packaging to differentiate their product from other competitor’s product.

2.2.4.2.2. Place

Place can be defined as distribution channel. “A distribution channel refers to a

group of person and organization that directs the product from the producer to the

consumer” (Lee and Johnson 2007:15). Distribution activity includes

transportation management and product storage, reservation process, and stock

registration.

2.2.4.2.3. Price

“Price is an exchange of value with a product in a marketing transaction” (Lee and

Johnson 2007:15). A price of a product should covers entire charge involving in

production, distribution, and promotion and so the profit estimation. A price can

support an image of the product, take the sale from other competitor, affect people

to buy the product. For example, a marketer give discount to consumer who buy

its product. Also a high costing on iPhone, apple’s product, helps raising an

exclusive image from the product.

2.2.4.2.4. Promotion

Promotion or advertisement is one of four elements in marketing mix. “Promotion

covers various technique that is used to communicate with consumer and

potential consumer, it includes direct sale, selling promotion, and publicity” (Lee
33

and Johnson 2007:15). Direct sale is a personal and commercial communication

that tries to inform and persuade a consumer to buy a product. Generally, direct

sale is the most expensive element in the marketing mix, because direct contact is

important to build a good relation with consumer. In doing direct sale, a company

usually gives free coupont or discount when it introduces a new brand to capture

consumer’s interest. Publicity is a communication activity that is used to maintain

a good relation between the organization and public or consumer. An

organization should try to set aside a product which satisfies consumer’s need

through certain activity that enables the organization to reach its purpose. The

principal purpose of bussiness may be directed to increasing profit or making

sales. Because of that, an organization needs to make advertisement about its

product. It is aimed to spread to the world about the product, its function, or its

benefit of using the product. The advertiser is expected to create a good

advertisement using stylistic strategies in order to make the product stands out

from others, grasps consumer’s interest, and makes sales. If the advetiser develops

an unique characteristic in creating advertisement which differs from other

advertisements, the consumer would chain to the product and would buy the

product continually. That makes the purposes of an organization are reached.

2.2.4.3. Elements of Print Advertisements

According to Jefkin (1976:23), he suggested three important compositions of print

advertisements which are headline, copy or body copy and slogan. In print

advertisements, each of the elements has its own characteristics and its

importance.
34

2.2.4.3.1. Headline

Headlines can be defined as to provide a title, or to be the lead performer, which

attracts the reader’s attention. It communicates a selling point and encourages the

desire to decode the story in advertisements. Their one-liners must put in a

nutshell the main point of the news story they relate to and at the same time

capture the reader’s attention. “Therefore, an essential feature of headlines is their

typographical make-up” (Verdonk 2002:4). The reader cannot be interested in the

advertisement if the headline is simple and less attractive. There are several styles

that frequently found in creating the headline, such as, curiosity, question,

declarative, and commanding.

2.2.4.3.2. Body Copy

“Body copy or copy is the text of the advertising” (Blakeman 2005:40). “The

content develops the sale message and provides support, states the proof and gives

explanation” (Burnett, Wells, and Moriarty 1998:421). “It can be found in a

product and service that need explanation of the service, such as in business-to

business services” (O’Guinn, Allen, and Semenik 2009:386).

2.2.4.3.3. Slogan

Slogan is a simple and catchy phrase coming with a logo or brand that wraps a

product’s charm to make it more memorable. “Most of the slogans present a

benefit and quality of the product” (Jefkin 1976:83). The benefit, quality and

characteristic are mostly presented in the slogan.

Headline, sub-headline and slogan are mostly taking the role in advertising. There

are several charms that are shown in the body copy, such as information, benefit
35

or characteristics. Even so, the advertising always carries with five main senses of

human body; vision, hearing, taste, touch and smell that tend to hold the readers’

feeling.

The three important composition of print advertisement above are the marker on

how the advertisement will be analyzed. Those will be the criteria on the

importance and the characteristic on each advertisement fulfill the requirement of

good advertisement. The headline works as a bait to gain reader’s attention

whether the reader’s interested about the product or not. The body copy works as

a description of what the product is about. Commonly, it contains the

characteristic and the speciality and the details of the product. The slogan works

as an identification or a charm of the product. It usualy uses short and catchy-

phrase, so it is easy to remember.


36

2.3. Framework of the Present Study

Cosmopolitan Magazine’s
Advertisements

Elements of Print
Advertisement

Advertisements
Text

Stylistics Multimodal Discourse


(Style Marker) Analysis

Analysis use Descriptive


Qualitative Research Design

The Linguistic Expressions in


Cosmopolitan Magazine’s
Advertisemens

Figure 2.1 Framework of the Study


CHAPTER III

RESEARCH METHODOLOGY

This chapter presents a description of research methodology. It contains several

parts: qualitative approach; data of the study; role of the researcher; data

collection; units of analysis and techniques of analysis.

3.1. Qualitative Approach

This study uncovers how the advertiser employs the distinctive linguistic

expressions in the printed advertisements by knowing how linguistics means

implied in the text of advertisement. Thereby, the investigation is to reveal the

realization of the linguistics means by descriptively elaborating the realization that

occur in the data analysis to figure out the realization of the meanings by the

choice of linguistic means used in the text.. Thus, the qualitative approach is used.

Suharso (2006:1) describes that “Qualitative research means any kind of research

that produces findings not arrived at by means of statistical procedures or other

means of quantification”. Cresswell (1994:145) states that “Qualitative research is

descriptive in that the researcher is interested in process, meaning, and

understanding gained through word or picture”. Heigham and Croker (2009:39)

claims that “Qualitative research approach is not defined by a particular set of

research methods or techniques. It focuses on questions that examine the

relationships between information about people’s actions and phenomena, and the

settings in which they do these things”. Based on the definitions, the qualitative

research requires the investigation of the data which is in the form of words or

37
38

picture and it presents the data and research in the form of description. The

researcher presents the report of the investigation descriptively throughout the

words employed. The report is needed to make the researcher be able to clearly

convey the findings of the research.

The qualitative method is applied in this study because all of the data in this study

are in the form of words. Qualitative research does not focus on numerals or

statistics but give most attention to how deep the researcher’s knowledge toward

the interaction among concepts which is being learnt. However, when used along

with quantitative methods, qualitative research can help us to interpret and better

understand the implications of quantitative data. The quantity of the data is a

mean to enhance the qualitative analysis in the study. Interpretation is mainly used

to analyse the quantitative data and also needed to describe the qualitative

framework of analysis in the study. The researcher needs to demonstrate that the

research uses clear logic and provides strong evidence to substantiate the claims

that have been made to analyse and interpret the data.

The writer attempts to use qualitative approach to analyse the data and the

quantitative approach is also used to produce quantitative data to strengthen the

qualitative analysis. By using this method, the researcher is expected to be able to

describe and to explain the phenomena under the study.

The data of the study is several print advertisementswhich are formed of texts.

According to Halliday (2004:580) that “Text is a unit of meaning”. While Trappes

and Lomax (in Davis and Elder 2004:149) explain that “Meaning is the output of
39

the activity of the participants and the input to the process of analysis”. So that,

this study would concern with analysing and interpreting the data that are

characterized by the search of meaning and understanding. Trappes and Lomax

(in Davis and Elder 2004:149) also add that “text is both something produced by

interactants in the process of making discourse and something consumed by

linguists in the process of making analyses.” Therefore, discourse analysis is used

as a tool for understanding authentic spoken and written interaction.

It is essential that discourse anaylisis deals with meanings. How participants in

communication achieve meaning relate to. According to Heigham and Croker

(2009:254), “Discourse analysis generates a rich contextualized description of

natural language use in a particular setting.” The hidden motivations behind a text

or behind the choice of a particular method of research to interpret that text will

able to be revealed by discourse analysis. To bring the concept of discourse

analysis as one of qualitative data collection methods is important to analyse the

object in this study in the next chapter. To reach this understanding by analysing

the process through qualitative approach to understand how discourse is structured

and how it can be analysed.

In this research, the descriptions about how the advertiser employs the distinctive

linguistics expressions are elaborated through the choice of linguistics means in

the data. The research report is written descriptively in accordance with the

research findings of the linguistics expression of the text on the advertisement.


40

3.2. Data of the Study

In this study, the writer use advertisements collected from Cosmopolitan

Magazine as the data of the study to be analyzed. The magazine was published in

January 2014 to December 2014. It is a year period collection. The writer chose

Cosmopolitan Magazine because it is a well-known sophisticated fashion

magazine in United States and it contains several advertisements of fashion,

perfume, make-up product, accessories, etc.

3.3. Role of the Researcher

“In qualitative research, the researcher is the primary instrument. This has two

aspects. First, the researcher himself collects the data. Second, the researcher has

to interpret the data” (Heigham and Croker 2009:11). In this research, my role is a

data collector that gathers the necessary data as the object of the study.

Additionally, my role is also an analyst and interpreter that analyses and interprets

the distinctive linguistic expression that are employed within text of advertisement

by the advertiser that are realized with the stylistic devices to answer the research

problem. Finally, I work as a writer for conveying the research findings and

arranging the conclusion and then completing the report in accordance with the

findings.

3.4. Data collection


41

The data of the study is the text of printed advertisements which are collected

from Cosmopolitan Magazine United States edition that are a year collection from

January to December 2014.

3.5. Units of Analysis

This study will analyse the text of advertisement through stylistic analysis and

multimodal discourse analysis in order to know what distinctive linguistic

expressions that are employed by the advertiser. The analysis would be divided

into 3 units of analysis; there are discourse analysis, lexicogrammar analysis and

semantic analysis.

(a) Multimodal Discourse Analysis

(b) Elements of Context of Situation

(c) Lexicogrammar Analysis

(d) Semantic Analysis

Discourse analysis will cover about the element of context of situation of the

advertisement. It covers the whole text and the image of the advertisement.

Lexicogrammar Analysis includes the finite analysis and the adjective analysis,

why it tends to use either positive or negative adjectives. While Semantic

Analysis includes figure of speech and other rhetorical device.

3.6. Techniques of Analysis

After collecting the data, the data is analyzed based on the related theoretical

research study. The data is analyzed in order to solve the problem of the study. In

this study, the writer takes several steps to describe the distinctive linguistics
42

expressions or the stylistics strategies which are employed by the advertiser. The

steps are shown as follow:

(1) Collecting the printed advertisement from Cosmopolitan Magazine United

States edition from January to December 2014.

(2) Examining the advertisement that is matched with one condition. The

advertisement must contain of elements of advertisement, which are

headline, body copy and slogan.

(3) Reading the text of printed advertisements

(4) Analyzing the text of printed advertisements

In the process of analyzing the text, the writer has divided the text of

printed advertisements into three parts, which are into headline, body copy

and slogan. The linguistic expression or stylistic strategy includes the

process of analyzing context of situation, style markers: lexicogrammar,

and semantic aspects. In order to make it easy to understand, each

elements has its own table of data. On this part, the writer uses quantitative

approach to support the qualitative analysis data.

(5) Presenting and discussing the result of the analysis

After analyzing the text, the result will be presented in the table. Based on

this identification, later on the writer will interpret the result of each unit of

analysis into words in the discussion part. The writer discusses the result

of analysis by reviewing all text on each printed advertisements that have

been analyzed. The review is conducted by conveying the distinctive

linguistics expression realized in the printed advertisements.


43

The way in analyzing each category is described as follow:

3.6.1. Multimodal Discourse Analysis

Multimodal discourse analysis is an approach to discourse which focuses on how

meaning is made through the use of multiple modes of communication as opposed

to just language. “Multimodality can tell us what modes are used” (Kress 2010).

The research field has collectively been called ‘multimodality’, because

‘multimodality’ refers to the multiple modes, for example spoken, written, printed

and digital media through which social semiotics takes place. Printed

advertisement is closely related to words, symbol, colors, and photograph. “Mode

is a socially shaped and culturally given semiotic resource for making meaning”

(Kress 2010). The examples of modes used in representation and communication

such as text, image, music, gesture, videos, etc. Its primary function is that of

representation and communication and it is considered as modes which can be

used to make meaning and to communicate.

3.6.2. Context of Situation Analysis

“Context of situation is the environment in which meanings are being exchanged”

(Halliday and Hasan 1985). It is a term to cover what is going on outside the text

which makes the text what it is. There are three variables within any context of

situation that broadly determine the language choices that are made in the

construction of any language text. These variables are in charge of organizingthe

language features found in any text. Those are field which refers to the subject

matter or topic of discourse, tenor which refers to the interactants in a speech

situation and the social relation existing between the addresser and the addressee,
44

and mode which refers to the channel of communication whether the text is

written or spoken and also the purpose of producing the text.

The writer is going to find out the field, tenor, and mode by descriptively

elaborated through the main areas of the each elements of context of situation.

Field can be analysed in terms of experiential domain or what the text is about,

goal orientation or what the text is for, and social activity, or what the text is

doing. Tenor can be analysed in terms of status relations or the hierarchical status

difference between the interactants, degree of affective involvement which defines

the emotional closeness between the interactants, frequency of contact or the level

of familiarity to operate between interactants, and orientation to affiliation that

derives from our inclination or disinclination to bundle with various formal and

informal social groups. Mode is generally divided into three main areas; language

role, channel and medium. Language role tells the important of language in the

context, is it ancillary (not important) or is it constitutive (the central element in

the context), channel tells whether it is graphic or phonic, and medium tells

whether it is written or spoken.

3.6.3. Lexicogrammatical analysis

At this level of analysis the lexical and grammar related such as vocabulary,

adjectives, tenses would be discussed. In the study, printed advertisement is the

most visual aspect of the illustration. Rather than abstract, concrete or everyday

vocabulary represents lexical means used in printed advertisement. Vocabulary is

the means for advertisers to express their opinion about the product. In the fields

of advertising, adjectives are considerably represented word class as they convey


45

a positive or negative meaning. “Adjectives are pertinent in advertising as they

convey a positive or negative affective meaning” (Delin 2000:133). Its function is

to describe specific quality and feature of the product. What tense is used in the

advertisement is discussed in the Finite analysis. It is used in order to find out

what tense that is frequently used in the print advertisement and why it tends to

use that tense. The present tense is commonly used in the advertisements. The use

of present tense might indicate how good the quality of a product is, whether or

not it has long lasting effect. At the same time, it makes the advertisement easy to

understand.

3.6.4. Semantic Analysis

At this level of analysis, Figure of speech or figurative language and other

rhetorical device are discussed. They frequently appear in the text of

advertisement, because they play major role in the advertising since it makes

playful, unique and nicely interconnected text of advertisement. There are so

many kinds of figure of speech and rhetorical device, but only several that will be

classified into this analysis includes personification, simile, hyperbole, metaphor,

and other rhetorical device like repetition, alliteration, assonance, question and

also general technique. Keraf (2009), Leech (1972), Leech (1981) and Myers

(1997) point out a number of language and rhetorical devices typical for

advertising, one of each is the semantic level that includes figures of speech,

rhetorical device, sound technique, etc.


CHAPTER IV

FINDINGS AND DISCUSSIONS

This chapter deals with the research findings and discussions.In this chapter, the

writer presents the results of the analysis of printed advertisement in

Cosmopolitan Magazine to solve the statement of the problem in chapter I. The

problem is about what distinctive linguistic expressions are employed in the

advertisement by the advertiser. The result to solve the problems is presented

from three major points of analysis: Context of Situation Analysis,

Lexicogrammar Analysis, and Semantic Analysis. Based on those points, they

will uncover the statements of the problem on how the advertiser employs

distinctive linguistic expressions on advertisements.

4.1 Findings

This analysis deals with the strategies of the advertiser in employing distinctive

linguistics expression in the advertisement on Cosmopolitan Magazine.

Cosmopolitan Magazine is a popular yet sophisticated mass media in the United

States. It is one of monthly media that has big circulation and an international

monthly media with high quality product. Since language of advertising has its

own style, it emphasizes why one’s product stands out in comparison with

another. The language of advertising is normally very positive, that is why the

46
47

choice of certain language to convey specific messages with the intention of

influencing people is vitally important.

4.1.1. Analysis Result of Each Advertisement

This sub chapter presents the results of problems found in each advertisement.

Each advertisement analysis result were presented descripetively.

4.1.1.1. Advertisement No. 1, Olay Total Effect CC Cream.

Figure 4.1 Advertisement of Olay Total Effect CC Cream

1) Context of Situation

It is an advertisement about CC Cream of Total Effect. The combination of

Anti-Ageing and Beauty Balm that creates new cream called Color and

Correction Cream. Because of the combination of those two, the CC cream is

said to be a good cream that consist of good elements. It also claimed as #1


48

America’s CC Cream. It is intended to convince the reader that it is no.1

product in America. It gives detailed information about the way the CC Cream

work and the benefit of it that is to fight 7 signs of aging over time while

providing instant coverage for flawlessly beautiful skin. It is also said “love the

skin you’re in” that means if the consumer wants to love their skin, they should

use Olay Total Effect CC Cream. The participants here are the advertiser and

the target reader or the consumer. It builds a casual or informal (minimum

range) with the consumer. It does not require direct feedback. The mode being

used is written mode and it uses casual statement. It portrays a face of a woman

with flawless skin. It used written text to provide information and an image that

also provide visual information of the target reader. The choice of the font,

enlarged, colored letter is to form attractive and vivid image of the product.

Considering the addition of multiplication “+” and “=”, the advertiser is also

trying to give more simple explanation about what element that are being

combined to produce the CC Cream.

2) Lexicogrammar

All of the text in the advertisement used present tense. It indicates the good

quality of the product. We can see the verbs founds in the advertisement text

that indicate present tense such as fight, providing and love. The text is also

imperative which functions to give command or suggestion. We also can find

some adjective in the text, there are “anti-ageing”, “instant” and “beautiful”.

Those words indicate the positive adjective of the quality of the mentioned

product and give a specific description. Anti-ageing has meaning as prevention


49

or limitation of the process of becoming old, instant means particular meaning

in time, while beautiful means pretty or attractive.

3) Semantic

Figures of speech are part of semantic analysis. The advertisement text of Olay

Total Effect CC Cream commonly used personification. There are verb that is

being personified like fight and love. They are indicated as the quality of living

thing. Alliteration is also found in the advertisement text. The alliteration is

“A”, “B” and “C” in the words of Anti-ageing, Beauty Balm and Color and

Correction.

4.1.1.2 Advertisement No.2, Garnier Oil Beauty.

Figure 4.2 Advertisement of Garnier Oil Beauty


50

1) Context of Situation

It is an advertisement about Oil Beauty of Garnier. It is oil-infused lotion that

works as an oil and a lotion, because it is the combination of both elements.

The combination of both oil and lotion have an additional benefit of the

product. It can beautify like oil and also can moisturize like a lotion. It gives

detailed information about the way the Oil Beauty work and the benefit of it

that the skin is visibly transformed from first application for softer, smoother

and more radiant looking skin with non-greasy touch and first inventor of oil-

infused lotion. They also emphasize the proof that they conducted a study that

the result is 80% agreed their skin has never looked so beautiful. First

luxurious oil-infused lotion is other emphasizing clause. They want to make

sure the consumer realizes that Garnier is the inventor of first oil-infused

lotion, no one else. The slogan of Garnier is “take care” means that the

consumer need to take care of their body, in this case is the skin. The

participants here are the product of Garnier, the Oil-Infused Lotion as the

advertiser and the target reader or the consumer. The advertiser is the dominant

participants as it gives more information of the product. It does not require

direct feedback. The mode being used is obviously written mode because it is a

printed advertisement that require text to be presented to the reader and an

image that is also provide visual information of the target reader. It portrays a

body of a woman from head to waist and the combination of oil and lotion. She

is topless and her body is facing backward. She wants to show you that her skin

is beautiful, softer, smoother, radiant looking, and hydrated by using the


51

product. The enlarge words emphasize what the product is and differ the

product from the other.

2) Lexicogrammar

Several tense are used in this text of advertisement. It contains of present tense

as you can see the verb “beautifies”, “moisturizes”, “take”, “introducing”, and

“is transformed” that is the passive verb. It contains of present perfect tense

too from the verb “has been looked”. “Enriched” is presented a past tense

marker. Several adjectives are found in this advertisement such as “Luxurious”,

lightweight”, “softer”, “smoother”, “more radiant”, “non-greasy” and

“beautiful”. Those words indicate the positive adjective of the quality of the

mentioned product and give a specific description and benefit of it. .

3) Semantic

The advertisement text of Oil Beauty of Garnier dominates with the general

technique. It did not use word play to make sound catchier. Besides, there is

adjective phrase indicated as personification, “softer, smoother, more radiant

looking skin with non-greasy touch”. It describes how the skin will look after

usingthe product. It also contains of metonymy from the clause “80% agreed

their skin has never looked so beautiful”. The 80% here refers to the woman

following the study of Garnier. While the clause “beautifies like an oil,

moisturizes like a lotion” is indicated as simile which compares things, because

it contains the word “like”


52

4.1.1.3 Advertisement No.3, Simple Illuminating Cream.

Figure 4.3 Advertisement of Simple Illuminating Cream

1) Context of Situation

Simple has introduced their new simple illuminating cream. It is a brilliant

combination of skin-loving vitamin and light reflecting mineral, formulated to

reveal your skin radiance, instantly and naturally. The combinations of both

vitamin and mineral have an additional benefit of the product. The body of the

advertisement gives detailed information about the product. The illuminating

cream has no artificial perfume or color and no harsh chemical that can upset

your skin. It claims to be perfect for sensitive skin. It also emphasize with their

slogan “sensitive skin experts” and the clause “it’s brilliant even for sensitive

skin!”. The advertisements certainly have two participants. In this


53

advertisement, the Simple Illuminating Cream act as the advertiser and the

consumer is the target reader. The advertiser is the dominant participants as it

gives more information of the product. Written mode is used in the printed

advertisement. It is also presented an image which portrays a bottle of new

simple illuminating cream, sticky note presenting an offering and the benefit of

the product and enlarge phrase of “No artificial perfume or color” which

emphasize it is safe to use for the people who has sensitive skin.

2) Lexicogrammar

The adjectives found in this advertisement vary. There are both positive and

negative adjectives. The positive adjectives are “brilliant”, “simple”, “loving”

and “perfect”. While “sensitive”, “artificial”, “harsh”,and”upset” are included

in negative adjective, because it contains negative quality or meaning. In finite

analyzing, “brighten”, “need”, “is” are present marker; “formulated” is past

marker; “can” is modal.

3) Semantic

Figures of speech found in the advertisement are hyperbole and

personification. Hyperbole exaggerates the benefit of the product. It is in the

clause “it’s brilliant even for sensitive skin”, “just a brilliant combination of

skin-loving vitamin and light-reflecting mineral.” and “sensitive skin

experts”. It gives pressure on how good the product works for sensitive skin

by saying “brilliant” and “perfect even for sensitive skin”. The personification

can be seen from the words “brighten” and “upset your skin” which has the

quality of loving things.


54

4.1.1.4 Advertisement No.4, GarnierUltimate Blends.

Figure 4.4 Advertisement of Ganier Ultimate Blends

1) Context of Situation

Introducing the marvelous transformer, New Ultimate Blend from Garnier. It

is a shampoo which can transform your dull, lifeless hair into glowing silky

locks with an opulent blend enriched with exquisite argan oil and indulgent

camellia oils. Its body copy of the advertisement tells about what the

shampoo can do to your hair. The argan oil and camellia oils are the

additional points which have good advantages in its usage. It claims 48 hours

of shining hair, and still going even after a night of fun. The ultimate blend

provides information about what product is which acts as the advertiser and
55

the producer while the target reader is the consumer. It uses written mode and

also presents image. The image portrays a bottle of the Ultimate Blends in

orange with camellia flowers an oil at the back of the bottle, a stamp of

blended for Britain for gorgeous hair that’s full of life, and the background is

in front of a building.

2) Lexicogrammar

Finite which are found in this advertisement are present and past. The words

present marker includes “glowing”, “transform”, and auxiliary “is”. The

words of past marker are “enriched” and “blended”. It means that it has

already done in the past time. While for the adjectives found in the

advertisement are “marvelous”, “gorgeous”, “glowing”, “silky”, “shining”,

“exquisite”, and “indulgent” which are included into positive adjective. Other

adjectives found are “dull” and “lifeless” which are included into negative

adjective.

3) Semantic

The adjective word “marvelous” indicates as hyperbole because it makes a

thing looks bigger that it was. Personification is also presented in this

advertisement. It is recognized from “transform your dull, lifeless hair”. Other

personification found in “gorgeous hair that’s full of life”.


56

4.1.1.5 Advertisement No.5,L’orealElviveFibrology.

Figure 4.5 Advertisement of L’oreal Elvive Fibrology

1) Context of Situation

It is an advertisement about ElviveFibrology from L’oreal. It is a shampoo

that has filloxane for thicker hair. The body copy of the advertisement

describes detailed information and benefit of the product. It penetrates into

the hair fiber and helps increase hair’s diameter from within. It also gives

cumulative effect, if used continually. Your hair will looks and feels thicker

with luxurious body and bounce. The slogan is “because you’re worth it”,
57

means that you’re worth of having the benefit of the product. The participants

are the product of L’oreal, the Elvive Fibrology as the advertiser and also the

producer and the target reader or the consumer. The advertiser is the

dominant participants as it gives more information of the product. The mode

being used is obviously written mode because it provides text to be presented

to the reader and an image that is also provide visual information. It portrays

a bottle of shampoo and a conditioner, there is also a woman with volume

blond hair to show the product works on her hair makes it look thicker and

luxurious looking.

2) Lexicogrammar

Present tense is used in overall all text of advertisement of ElviveFibrology. It

can be seen from the verbs such as “looks”, “helps”, “penetrates”, gives”

“feels” and auxiliary “are”. The adjectives found are only positive adjectives;

there are “thicker”, “cumulative”, luxurious”, and “worth”. They are indicated

as good or positive quality and specific information of the product.

3) Semantic

Repetition dominates the figures of speech in this advertisement. “Hair looks

thicker wash after wash”, “the science behind thicker hair”, “hair looks and

feels thicker with luxurious body and bounce” are the examples of the clause

containing the figures of speech. We can see from how the words “wash” and

“thicker” are emphasized and used several times. Even though the repetition

of the word “thicker” is not in the same clause, it is still in the same text.
58

There are several positive adjective found in the advertisement, such as

“thicker”, “cumulative”, “luxurious” and “worth”.

4.1.1.6 Advertisement No. 6, Herbal Essences

Figure 4.6 Advertisement of Herbal Essences

1) Context of Situation

The advertisement is about Herbal Essences Shampoo and Conditioner. The

advertisement tells about what the Herbal essences and conditioner are. Those

contains of natural argan oil which makes your hair looks seriously seductive

shine. It will make your dull hair into beam gleam hair. It emphasized the use
59

of natural argan oil since the clause repeat twice in the text. The use of both

shampoo and conditioner of Herbal Essences will take a shine to your hair

like you would not believe. You can say no the naturally attractive hair.The

participants are the Herbal Essences as the advertiser/producer and the target

reader or the consumer. The text gives more information to the reader, so it is

more dominant than the consumer. The mode being used is written mode

because it requires a text to be presented to the reader and an image that is

also provide visual information. In the image, there are a pair of Herbal

Essences Shampoo and Conditioner with an illustration of argan oil, and

Nicole Scherzinger who modeled the advertised product. She posed with a

nice smile while showing her seductively shining wavy hair.

2) Lexicogrammar

This advertisement text of Herbal Essences used present tense, the verbs

which included in the present marker are “go”, “shine”, and “say”. While

“Herbal Essences Moroccan My Shine shampoo and conditioner with argan

oil will take a shine to your hair like you wouldn’t believe” analyzed as

modal. There are different qualities of adjectives found in the text.

“seductive”, “natural”, and ”irresistible” which are classified into positive

adjective, and “dull” classified into negative adjective. The negative adjective

here is used to compare before-after using the mentioned product.

3) Semantic

The figures of speech in this text are classified into personification. Because

there are several verbs which have the quality of living things on inanimate
60

object. The personification includes these following phrases or clauses,

“seductive shine”, “My Shine shampoo and conditioner with argan oil will

take a shine to your hair”, “Say yes to naturally irresistible hair”. Other

clauses are used general technique that has no attractive or catchy line.

4.1.1.7 Advertisement No.7, Bioré Deep Cleansing Pore Strips and Pore

Unclogging Scrub

Figure 4.7 Advertisement of Bioré Deep Cleansing Pore Strips


and Pore Unclogging Scrub

1) Context of Situation

Bioré has introduced their product called, Deep Cleansing Pore Strips and

Pore Unclogging Scrub. It is a skincare solution to reduce breakouts from

your face. The product is focused on the pores since it is the smallest part of

your face which breakout starts spreading. By using this dynamic duo, you
61

can have visibly healthier skin, because they purges pores to reduce acne,

blackheads, and breakout. Usually, starts from using the Deep cleansing Pore

Strips which works to lift up blackhead in your nose where the pore is bigger.

The product provides information about the topic of the text which acts as the

advertiser and the producer while the target reader is the consumer. It uses

written mode and also presents image. The image of the advertisement is

simply shows a shape of the product and simple blue colored background

with circles at the corner of the page and enlarged letter of the headline.

2) Lexicogrammar

Positive adjectives found in the text such as “dynamic”, “clearer”, and

“healthier”. There are no negative adjective found in the text. While the verbs

“purges”, “reduce”, “starts” and “free” are classified into present marker.

3) Semantic

There are three kinds of figures of speech found in the text. First, repetition

words found in the text are “bye” in “bye,bye, breakouts” and “pore” in

“Bioré deep cleansing pore strips + pore unclogging scrub. Also found

alliteration “B” in the “bye, bye, breakouts” and “...to reduce acne, blackhead,

breakouts”. Then, there are two clauses of Personification; “this dynamic duo

purges pore to reduce acne, blackhead, and breakouts” and “free your pores”.
62

4.1.1.8 Advertisement No. 8, L’oreal Sleek It Iron Heatspray

Figure 4.8 Advertisement of L’oreal Sleek It Iron Heatspray

1) Context of Situation

L’oreal introduces their hairspray product called, Sleek It Iron Heatspray. It is

used for hair styling. If you want to straighten your hair with hair iron, you

need to use it first. It has professional-grade formula 3 days of fizz control

and also heat-styling protection up to 450o. It will protect your hair from

damage comes from the heat. It emphasizes to the consumer to protect, sleek,
63

and own an extraordinary hair. The famous slogan of L’oreal is “because

you’re worth it” means that you worth of having an extraordinary hair with

protection and fizz control, and no damaged hair. The participants are the

product of L’oreal Sleek It Iron Heatspray as the advertiser and also the

producer and the target reader or the consumer. The advertiser is the

dominant participants as it gives more information of the product. The mode

being used is written mode because it provides text to be presented to the

reader and an image that is also provide visual information. The image

portrays a black and orange colored bottle of the product and a woman with a

black straight, smooth and healthy looking hair that represent the result of the

product.

2) Lexicogrammar

The text ofL’oreal Sleek It Iron Heatspray only contains of positive adjectives

and no negative adjectives found. They are “smooth”, “sleek”, “straight”,

“extraordinary” and “worth” they are indicate the positive quality and benefit

of the product. There is also one tense used in this advertisement which is

present tense. It shows from the verbs “protect”, and auxiliary verb “are” and

“be”. The detailed information of the text mostly used complex phrases not a

clause.

3) Semantic

There are 2 kinds of figures of speech, and a rhetorical question found in this

advertisement. We can see a catchy rhetorical question in “how smooth are

you?. It asks about how smooth your hair is. It does not necessary need an
64

answer since it is rhetoric. There is a repetition of “it” in some clauses

“Protect it. Sleek it. Own it”. Metonymy is also found in the text of “iron

straight heatspray”. “Iron” here refers to a tool used for hair styling, not the

used for clothes.

4.1.1.9 Advertisement No. 9, Olay Regenerist Luminous

Figure 4.9 Advertisement of Olay Regenerist Luminous

1) Context of Situation

It is an advertisement of Olay Regenerist Collection. It is a skin care

collection with Skin Energizing Complex. It claims that it renews surface cell

to even skin tone and reduce the appearance of dark spots. It means, getting

too much sun screen of Ultraviolet A and Ultraviolet B is not good for the
65

skin. It causes the dark spots to appear. Using the product may make your

skin back to normal skin tone without the appearance of the dark spots. You

will see your skin looks bright, pearlescent and healthy in just 2 weeks. The

slogan of Olay is “your best beautiful” which implied it will shows your

beauty at its best. Those are the information and the benefit of the product as

well. The participants are the product of Olay Regenerist Collection with Skin

Energizing Complex as the advertiser and the target reader or the consumer.

The advertiser gives detailed information of the product which makes it as the

dominant participants. The mode being used is written mode because it is a

printed advertisement that require text to be presented to the reader and an

image that is also provide visual information as well. It portrays a face of a

woman smiling satisfied with her gleaming face with even skin tone and no

appearance of the dark spots. We can see that it focuses on her shining face

in the spotlight. She wants to show you that her skin is bright, pearlescent and

healthy looking after using the product.

2) Lexicogrammar

The text of Olay Regenerist Luminous advertisement used present tense, the

verbs of present marker includes “renew”, “reduce” and see”. While the

phrase “I will never let a dark spot steals my spotlight” classified as modals.

There are different qualities found in the text, positive and negative adjective.

The positive adjectives are “bright”, “pearlescent”, “healthy”, “best” and

“beautiful”. On the other hand, the negative adjectives found are only “dark”,

because it makes comparison of the product usage.


66

3) Semantic

The figures of speech found in this text are repetition, alliteration,

personification, and hyperbole. the repetition word is “spot” in the phrase “I

will never let a dark spot steals my spotlight. The alliteration word “S” found

in phrase “I will never let a dark spot steals my spotlight”. Thepersonification

in that phrase as well, because a dark spot given the quality of living things to

steal. Because there are several verbs which have the qualities of living things

on inanimate object. Hyperbole spotted in the slogan “your best beautiful”, it

exaggerate one’s beauty.

4.1.1.10 Advertisement No. 10, Neutrogena Pore Refining Exfoliating Cleanser

Figure 4.10 Advertisement of Neutrogena Refining Exfoliating Cleanser


67

1) Context of Situation

Neutrogena introduces its product named Pore Refining Exfoliating Cleanser.

It works not only just as a cleanser, but also as a skin exfoliator, refiner, pore

minimizer as well. it works so much more than just a clean. It contains of

microheads which polishes and refines the surface of the skin. Alpha and beta

hydroxy could clean deep and thoroughly. In addition, it reduces pores that can

lock up to half their size. The slogan of the product is “#1 Dermatologist

Recommended Skincare”. It convinces its product as the dermatologist

recommends the product because it is no.1 best skin care. The slogan is meant

to be the product attention seeker. The consumer may wonder how good the

product is if the dermatologist recommend it as no.1 best skincare. The

participants are the advertiser and the target reader or the consumer. It builds a

casual or informal relation with the consumer. It does not require direct

feedback. The mode being used is written mode, it uses casual statement and

also provides image. The images shown on the advertisement is simply a tube

of the product with water effect at the bottom of the tube which give refreshing

atmosphere.

2) Lexicogrammar

Finite found in this advertisement are present tense and modal. The verbs

identified as present marker are “does”, “polish”, “refine”, and auxiliary “is”.

Modal identified in phrase “for visibly reduced pores than can lock up to half

their size”. Modal identifier here is “can”. For the adjective, the only
68

adjective found in this text is “deep”. It explains how good the product can

cleans your pores.

3) Semantic

Hyperbole and personification found in the text. The phrase which classified

into hyperbole is “Neutrogena pore refining exfoliating cleanser does so

much more than clean”. The words “so much more” here, is trying to

exaggerate the benefit of the product. While the phrase “for visibly reduced

pores that can lock up to half their size” is identified as personification. The

choice of word “lock up” means the pores get smaller and cover half to their

size.

4.1.1.11 Advertisement No. 11, Olay Regenerist Micro-Sculpting Cream

Figure 4.11 Advertisement of Olay Regenrist Micro-Sculpting Cream


69

1) Context of Situation

The advertisement is about Olay Regenerist Micro-Sculpting Cream. It is a

cream which can regenerate your skin. It works to hydrate your skin at the

first touch and provides continued anti-ageing results over time. The

information given from the product is not detailed enough, because the text

only contains of some clauses. The participants are the Olay Regenerist

Micro-Sculpting Cream as the advertiser/producer and the target reader or the

consumer. Eventhough, the text does not give detailed information to the

reader, it is still more dominant than the consumer. The mode being used is

written mode because it requires a text and an image which provide visual

information to be presented to the reader. In the image, there is a woman with

big smile on her face showing how beautiful her face is. She looks satisfied

with her face because of the anti-ageing formula of the product she used.

2) Lexicogrammar

Positive adjectives found in the text are “dramatic”, “anti-ageing”, “best”, and

“beautiful”. The adjectives “drastic” is classified into negative adjective

because it makes comparison with “dramatic” which has opposite meaning.

The tense used in the text is present tense as seen in the use of verbs

“hydrates”, “provide”, and “get”.

3) Semantic

In this advertisement text of Olay Regenerist Micro Sculpting Cream, we can

see ellipsis marker in the headline of the text “get dramatic result...without
70

drastic measure”. “...” marks as ellipsis marker. Personification also presented

in this advertisement as well in the phrase “begin working” which indicate

quality of living things. Its slogan “your best beautiful” implies exaggerating

one’s beauty.

4.1.1.12 Advertisement No. 12, Maybelline Dream Wonder Fluid-Touch

Foundation.

Figure 4.12 Advertisement of Maybelline Dream Wonder Fluid-Touch


Foundation

1) Context of Situation

Maybelline presents its new product called Dream Wonder Fluid-Touch

Foundation. It is a liquid foundation which has micro concealing formula.


71

The formula can cover and conceal completely and 12x thinner. we can not

tell the coverage build on our face by using this product. The detailed

information here also act as the benefit of the product. the participants are the

product as the advertiser and the producer, since it gives information, while

the target reader here as the consumer. It uses written mode and also presents

image. The image shows a bottle of the product and a body of a woman

which focuses on the face because it is a face makeup product. She shows

how the product completely covers, maybe blemish or dark spot, without

lumpiness and the make up look thinner like it is natural.

2) Lexicogrammar

Present tense is found in the advertisement. The verbs indicating present

marker are “discover”, “covers”, and auxiliary “is”. The advertiser only used

positive adjective to give information about the quality of the product. the

positive adjectives found are “impeccable”, “undetectable”, “unique”, and

“thinner”

3) Semantic

The advertiser used variation figures of speech in the text such as parallelism,

hyperbole, alliteration and also repetition. On its headline “impeccable yet

100% undetectable coverage”, the advertiser use parallelism to emphasize the

benefit of the product. The advertiser also tends to use hyperbole to

exaggerate the result of the product with “completely” and “12x thinner”.

Repetition word “maybe” and alliteration “may” also found in the same

phrase “Maybe she’s born with it. Maybe it’s maybeline”.


72

4 Discussion Finding

This section presents the interpretation of the findings of the study. Start from the

interpretation of the result from context of situation analysis, lexicogrammar

analysis, semantic analysis, and a brief summary about those results.

4.2.1. Context of Situation Analysis

The context of situation analysis determines how the resources of the language

system will be used by the advertiser to communicate with the target reader or the

consumer. It can be inferred from the Field point of view shows that the advertiser

delivering the message about the advertised product and ideas of the company of

the advertised product’s economic goals. Therefore, the advertiser is obliged to

make persuasive statement to the target reader to gain as many as possible buyer.

Moreover, he convinced the target reader that the products that are being

advertised in Cosmopolitan Magazine United States edition are worth buying and

having. The main point of the advertisement text was that he asked as many as

possible buyer would know and purchase their money to buy the advertised

product so that the company of advertised product could reach its economic goals.

The Tenor of Discourse; in terms of agentive role and status reveals that the

advertiser as the producer of the advertisement spoke with the consumer as the

target reader through the advertisement in the Cosmopolitan Magazine United

States edition. From the Mode of Discourse, the advertiser used written mode to

deliver his message and intention. Therefore, the writer concludes that the
73

advertisement text is a kind of persuasive text, because through the advertisement

text, the advertiser tried to persuade as many buyer or consumer as possible to

purchase their money on the product.

4.2.2. Lexicogrammar Analysis

From the lexicogrammar analysis that has been done by the writer, it has been

revealed some different results with also some different interpretations. The

following explanations will show the interpretation for the analysis.

1) Finite Analysis

The first analysis of lexicogrammar analysis part is the finite analysis.

Based on the result of the analysis, it can be seen that the most used finite used

in the advertisement text is present tense. By using present, it expresses the

advetiser’s expectation and hopes to make the consumer deserve what they

want by providing more benefit and best result of the product.

2) Adjective Analysis

The second analysis of lexicogrammar analysis part is the adjective analysis.

Based on the result of the analysis, it can be seen that most used adjective in

the advertisement is positive adjective. Using positive adjective expresses the

good or positive qualities of the product. Although, that words are often used

subjectively depends on what is being described.

4.2.3. Semantic Analysis


74

The last interpretation in this study is the semantic analysis. Semantic analysis

focuses on analyzing figures of speech and other rhetorical device. The result

of the analysis shows various figures of speech is employed in the

advertisement text by the advertiser. Figures of speech found in the sample of

advertisement such as personification, hyperbole, alliteration, repetition, simile,

parallelism, rhetoric question and also general technique. The advertiser often

uses personification to describe how the product works and functions.

Hyperbole is used to exaggerate the benefit of the product or what the product

can do or how it gives a result after using its product. The repetition is used as

attention catcher because it is easily remembered. Simile is used to compare

two different things or show similarities between them. Rhetoric question is

used to attract the reader even it does not require a real answer. The figures of

speech is often used to give different vibe in the text. Since it’s playful and

attractive which can gain target reader’s attention to read or to purchase the

advertised product.
CHAPTER V

CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS

This is the last chapter presented in this study. It consists of conclusions, and

suggestions based on the data analysis in the previous chapter.

5.1. Conclusions

This analysis deals with the strategies of the advertiser in employing distinctive

linguistics expression in the advertisement on Cosmopolitan Magazine United

States Edition 2014 Issue. The language of advertising is normally very positive,

that is why the choice of certain language to convey specific messages with the

intention of influencing people is vitally important. The advertiser needed to have

plan how to make the advertisements look as interesting as possible to attract the

consumer’s attention in order to purchase the product. Based on the data analysis

in the previous chapter, the conclusion about the strategies that the advertiser used

in making the advertisements can be drawn as follows;

From Context of Situation point of view, the advertisement text is kind of

persuasive text because through the text the advertiser tried to persuade as many

consumers as possible to buy the product which is advertised in Cosmopolitan

Magazine. The information shared is mostly about detailed, benefit of the product,

and the result after using the product. In terms of Experimental Domain, the text is

about advertising text of Cosmopolitan Magazine from January to December 2014

issue. The writer mostly found the lexical words that the advertiser employed in

75
the advertisement text were intended to persuade the reader or the consumer to

spend

76
76

their money to purchase the product since it has its own appeal or usage. In terms

of Goal Orientation, the text was used to persuade reader or consumer to purchase

the product being advertised in the magazine. Meanwhile, in terms of Social

Activity, Cosmopolitan Magazine is widely known and sophisticated that

promotes advertised product throughout United States region, the advertisement

text that is circulated by the company could persuade the reader or consumer to

purchase the advertised product they need or crave. Therefore, from the Field

point of view, it could be concluded that the text is about the idea and message of

the advertised product to gain interest of the reader to purchase the mention

product in order to reach economic goal of the company of advertised product.

The tenor concludes that the subject of this Study is the product which is being

advertised in United States edition of Cosmopolitan Magazine January to

December 2014 issue. The agentive role that occurred in terms of Tenor for the

text is the advertiser of the advertised product as the producer and the target

reader of the magazine is the consumer. The status relationship of the interactant

may have is equal. This is proved by the choice of words that the advertiser used

in the advertised product mostly by informal or casual statement. In terms of

Social Distance or the amount or nature of contact the interactant may have, the

writer concludes that it builds a casual or informal (minimum range) with the

reader or the consumer and the relationship between them were temporary

relationship. While the mode analyzed that, in terms of Language Role or how

important is the language in this context, it is the central element of the context

(constitutive). The medium of the text is written, and also used written mode to
77

deliver the content. However, the text is classified as a monologue, the turn taking

or feedback is not needed.

From the Lexicogrammar point of view, In conclusion, from Present Tense point

of view, the advertiser tends to convey the goal of the advertised product through

the choice of words. Moreover, by using present tense, it also expresses the

advertiser’s expectation and hope to make the consumer deserve what they want

by providing more benefit and best result of the product. On the other hand, Past

tense in the clause gives those words the ability to sound as if it is done in the

past. The effect of using past tense is to tell the target reader or the consumer that

something is already happened. Besides, using the choice of words indicates that

the advertiser certain about what he was saying and without doubt at all. It makes

the advertisement text sounds more persuasive. While Modal in the clauses give

those words the ability to sound as if it is done in the future. It is a type of verb

that is used to indicate modality- that is ability, permission, and obligation. Thus,

the effect of using modal is to tell the target reader or the consumer that is

something will happen. Beside, by using the choice of words indicates that the

advertiser give possible result of using the advertised product. Reader’s positive

or negative evaluation of an advertised product or service will be displayed by the

affective meaning. The advertisement in this study contains adjectives with either

positive and negative meaning or connotations. The result of adjective analysis

can be seen as follows:

Semantic analysis focused on analyzing figures of speech and other rhetorical

device. The advertiser often used general technique to describe the product what
78

the product is, what the benefit of the product is. The figure of speech is often

used to give different vibe in the text. Since it’s playful and interesting that can

gain target reader’s attention to read or to buy the advertised product.

5.2. Suggestions

Considering the result and significance of the study, there are suggestions that can

be derived from the analysis. The writer suggests that this study will be useful for

readers who are interested in text analysis and English Department Students.

The result of this study reveals kinds of distinctive linguistic expressions which

are employed by the advertiser. The study may be contribute to the area of

stylistic strategies in advertising and become a reference.

Practically, the writer would like to address the suggestion to the readers who are

interested in discourse analysis. The study can provide some guidance for

advertisements maker how to make a good advertisement applying various

language styles or different stylistic strategies in order to make the advertisement

more interesting and attractive. Moreover, it will also benefit those who are

interested in the use of stylistic in advertisements and extend their idea of using

different types of figures of speech for different types of products.

Pedagogically, the last suggestion is addressed to the English Department students

who will be future teacher, the results of this study may raise awareness regarding

the stylistic strategies in the teaching of writing.


APPENDICES

79
APPENDIX 1

LIST OF PRODUCT ADVERTISEMENT

No Code Issue Type of Brand Elements of Text


Product Advertisement
1 Jan01 January Make Up Olay Headline AA + BB = CC
2014 Anti Aging + Beauty Balm = Color and
Correction
Copy Fight 7 signs of aging over time while
providing instant coverage for flawlessly
beautiful skin.
Slogan Love the skin you’re in
2 Feb01 February Skin care Garnier Headline Our 1st luxurious oil-infused lotion.
2014 Beautifies like an oil, moisturises like a
lotion.
Copy Introducing Oil Beauty; a lightweight
moisturising lotion enriched with 4
beautifying oils. Skin is visibly
transfromed from the 1st application for
softer, smoother and more radiant looking
skin with non-greasy touch. In our study,
80% agreed their skin has never looked so
beautiful.
Slogan Take care
3 Mar01 March 2014 Skin care Simple Headline Brighten up your skin naturally.

80
Copy You need to try this! It’s brilliant even for
sensitive skin! Brighten up your skin
naturally with new simple iluminating
cream. No artificial perfume or colour. No
harsh chemicals that can upset your skin.
Just a brilliant combination of skin-loving
vitamin and light-reflecting mineral,
formulated to reveal your skin radiance,
instantly and naturally. It’s perfect even for
sensitive skin.
Slogan Sensitive skin experts
4 Apr01 April 2014 Shampoo Garnier Headline 48 hours of shining hair. Glowing even
after a night of fun.
Copy The marvellous transformer. Transform
your dull, lifeless hair into glowing, silky
locks with an opulent blend enriched with
exquisite argan and indulgent camellia
oils.
Slogan Take care
5 May01 May 2014 Shampoo L’oreal Headline Hair looks thicker wash after wash. Helps
Elvive expand the hair fibre
Copy The science behind thicker hair: filloxane.
Penetrates into the fibre. Helps increase
hair’s diameter from within. Fibrology
gives a cumulative effect, wash after wash.
Hair looks & feels thicker with luxurious
body and bounce.
Slogan Because you’re worth it.

81
6 Jun01 June 2014 Shampoo Herbal Headline Seriously seductive shine. Afterglow
Essences included. With natural argan oil.
Copy Go for dull-beam gleam. Herbal Essebces
Moroccan My Shine shampoo and
conditioner with argan oil will take a shine
to your hair like you wouln’t believe. Time
to shine/ ye, yes, yes!
Slogan Say yes to naturally irresistible hair
7 Jul01 July 2014 Facial Biore Headline Bye, bye, breakouts. Clearer skin in one
Wash week when used together.
Copy Biore deep cleansing pore strips + pore
unclogging scrub. When used togeter, this
dynamic duo purges pores to reduce acne,
blackheads, and breakouts. Because
cleaner, visibly healthier skin starts with
your pores.
Slogan Free your pores.
Jul02 July 2014 Skincare Olay Headline I will not let age change me. I will change
the way I age.
Copy The Olay Regenerist Collection with
advanced Skin Energizing Complex revs
up surface cell renewal to reveal younger-
looking skin. Now that’s a beautiful
change!
Slogan Your best beautiful
Jul03 July 2014 Lotion Aveeno Headline What goes with everything? Beautiful skin
Copy Aveeno Daily Mosturizing Lotion gives
you 24 hours hydration for soft, beautiful

82
skin that lasts. Aveeno Active Naturals Oat
has 5 vital nutrients found in healthy skin –
protein, anti-oxidants, enzymes, vitamin
and lipids. Because beautiful skin goes
with everything.
Slogan Naturally Beautiful Results.
8 Aug01 August Hair spray L’oreal Headline How smooth are you? Protect it. Sleek it.
2014 Own it.
Copy Sleek it. Iron straight heatspray.
Professional-grade formula 3 days of fizz
control and heat-styling protection up to
450o
Slogan Because you’re worth it.
9 Sep01 September Blush on maybelline Headline Jump on the glaze craze.
2014 Make up Copy The how, glazed pearls in shea butter
glide. The wow, cheecks glisten with a
dewy new sheen.
Slogan Maybe she’s born with it. Maybe it’s
maybelline.
Sep02 September skincare Olay Headline I will never let a dark spot steal my
2014 Regenerist spotlight.
Copy Olay Regenerist Luminous Collection with
Skin Energizing Complex. Renew surface
cell to even skin tone and reduce the
appearance of dark spot. See
bright,pearlescent,healthy-looking in just 2
weeks.
Slogan Your best beautiful

83
Sep03 September Shampoo Pantene Headline Fearless. Shampoo without fear of
2014 damaging your hair.
Copy Pantene is clinically proven to give you
healthier hair with every wash. So you can
always shine strong.
Slogan Shine strong
10 Oct01 October Skin care Neutrogena headline This isn’t cleanser. It’s a skin exfoliator,
2014 refiner, pore minimizer and a cleanser.
Copy Neutrogena pore refining exfoliating
cleanser does so much more than clean.
Microheads actually polish and refine
skin’s surface. While clinically proven
alpha + beta hydroxy thoroughly cleans
deep. For visibly reduced pores that can
lock up to half their size.
Slogan #1 Dermatologist Recomended Skincare.
11 Nov01 November Skincare Olay Headline Get dramatic results... without drastic
2014 measures.
Copy Olay regenerist micro-sculpting cream
hydrates to begin working at the first touch
and provide continued anti-aging results
over time.
Slogan Your best beautiful
12 Dec01 December Make-up Maybelline Headline Discover the wonder. Impeccable yet
2014 100% undetectable coverage.
Copy New Dream Wonder fluid-touch
foundation. Our unique a micro-concealing
formula covers completely, yet is 12x

84
thinner.
Slogan Maybe she’s born with it. Maybe it’s
maybelline.

85
APPENDIX 2

86
APPENDIX 2

LEXICOGRAMMAR ANALYSIS: FINITE

FINITE
Present
No. Clauses Simple Present Present Perfect Simple
Modal
Present Continuous Perfect Continuou Past
s
1 Fight 7 signs of aging over time while √
providing instant coverage for flawlessly
beautiful skin.
2 Love the skin you’re in. √
3 Beautifies like an oil, moisturises like a lotion. √
4 Introducing Oil Beauty; a lightweight √
moisturising lotion enriched with 4
beautifying oils.
5 Skin is visibly transfromed from the 1st √
application for softer, smoother and more
radiant looking skin with non-greasy touch.
6 In our study, 80% agreed their skin has never √ √
looked so beautiful.
7 Take care √

87
8 Brighten up your skin naturally. √
9 You need to try this! √
10 It’s brilliant even for sensitive skin! √
11 Brighten up your skin naturally with new √
simple iluminating cream.
12 No harsh chemicals that can upset your skin. √
13 Just a brilliant combination of skin-loving √
vitamin and light-reflecting mineral,
formulated to reveal your skin radiance,
instantly and naturally.
14 It’s perfect even for sensitive skin. √
15 Glowing even after a night of fun. √
16 Blended for Britain, for gorgeous hair that’s √ √
full of life
17 Transform your dull, lifeless hair into √ √
glowing, silky locks with an opulent blend
enriched with exquisite argan and indulgent
camellia oils.
18 Take care √
19 Hair looks thicker wash after wash. √
20 Helps expand the hair fibre √
21 Penetrates into the fibre. √
22 Helps increase hair’s diameter from within. √
23 Fibrology gives a cumulative effect, wash √

88
after wash.
24 Hair looks & feels thicker with luxurious √
body and bounce.
25 Because you’re worth it. √
26 Go for dull-beam gleam. √
27 Herbal Essebces Moroccan My Shine √
shampoo and conditioner with argan oil will
take a shine to your hair like you wouln’t
believe.
28 Say yes to naturally irresistible hair √
29 Bye, bye, breakouts. √
30 Clearer skin in one week when used together. √
31 When used togeter, this dynamic duo purges √ √
pores to reduce acne, blackheads, and
breakouts.
32 Because cleaner, visibly healthier skin starts √
with your pores.
33 Free your pores. √
34 How smooth are you? √
35 Protect it. √
36 Sleek it. √
37 Own it. √
38 Sleek it. √
39 Because you’re worth it. √

89
40 I will never let a dark spot steal my spotlight. √
41 Renew surface cell to even skin tone and √
reduce the appearance of dark spot.
42 See bright,pearlescent,healthy-looking in just √
2 weeks.
43 This isn’t cleanser. √
44 It’s a skin exfoliator, refiner, pore minimizer √
and a cleanser.
45 Neutrogena pore refining exfoliating cleanser √
does so much more than clean.
46 Microheads actually polish and refine skin’s √
surface.
47 While clinically proven alpha + beta hydroxy √
thoroughly cleans deep.
48 For visibly reduced pores that can lock up to √ √
half their size.
49 Get dramatic results... without drastic √
measures.
50 Olay regenerist micro-sculpting cream √
hydrates to begin working at the first touch
and provide continued anti-aging results over
time.
51 Discover the wonder. √
52 Our unique a micro-concealing formula √

90
covers completely, yet is 12x thinner.
53 Maybe she’s born with it. √
54 Maybe it’s maybelline. √
FINITE Present
Simple Present Present Perfect Simple
Modal
Present Continuous Perfect Continuou Past
s
Total 46 - 1 - 8 4
Percentage 77.9% - 1.7% - 13.6% 6.8%

91
APPENDIX 3

LEXICOGRAMMAR ANALYSIS: ADJECTIVE

Adjective Adjective
No. Clauses
Positive Negative
1 Anti Aging + Beauty Balm = Color and Anti-Ageing √
Correction
2 Fight 7 signs of aging over time while Instant √
providing instant coverage for flawlessly Beautiful √
beautiful skin.
3 Our 1st luxurious oil-infused lotion. Luxurious √
4 Introducing Oil Beauty; a lightweight Lightweight √
moisturising lotion enriched with 4
beautifying oils.
5 Skin is visibly transfromed from the 1st Softer √
application for softer, smoother and more Smoother √
radiant looking skin with non-greasy touch. Radiant √
Non-greasy √
6 In our study, 80% agreed their skin has Beautiful √
never looked so beautiful.
7 It’s brilliant even for sensitive skin! Brilliant √
Sensitive √
8 Brighten up your skin naturally with new Simple √

92
simple iluminating cream.
9 No artificial perfume or colour. Artificial √
10 No harsh chemicals that can upset your Harsh √
skin. Upset √
11 Just a brilliant combination of skin-loving Brilliant √
vitamin and light-reflecting mineral, Loving √
formulated to reveal your skin radiance,
instantly and naturally.
12 It’s perfect even for sensitive skin. Perfect √
Sensitive √
13 Sensitive skin experts. Sensitive √
14 48 hours of shining hair. Shining √
15 Blended for Britain, for gorgeous hair that’s Gorgeous √
full of life
16 The marvellous transformer. Marvellous √
17 Transform your dull, lifeless hair into Dull √
glowing, silky locks with an opulent blend Lifeless √
enriched with exquisite argan and indulgent Silky √
camellia oils. Opulent √
Exquisite √
Indulgent √
18 Hair looks thicker wash after wash. Thicker √
19 The science behind thicker hair: filloxane. Thicker √
20 Fibrology gives a cumulative effect, wash Cumulative √

93
after wash.
21 Hair looks & feels thicker with luxurious Thicker √
body and bounce. Luxurious
22 Because you’re worth it. Worth √
23 Seriously seductive shine. Seductive √
24 With natural argan oil. Natural √
25 Go for dull-beam gleam. Dull √
26 Say yes to naturally irresistible hair Irresistible √
27 Clearer skin in one week when used Clearer √
together.
28 When used togeter, this dynamic duo purges Dynamic √
pores to reduce acne, blackheads, and
breakouts.
29 Because cleaner, visibly healthier skin starts Healthier √
with your pores.
30 How smooth are you? Smooth √
31 Iron straight heatspray. Straight √
32 Because you’re worth it. Worth √
33 I will never let a dark spot steal my Dark √
spotlight.
34 Renew surface cell to even skin tone and Dark √
reduce the appearance of dark spot.
35 See bright,pearlescent,healthy-looking in Bright √
just 2 weeks. Pearlescent √

94
Healthy √

36 Your best beautiful Best √
Beautiful
37 While clinically proven alpha + beta Deep √
hydroxy thoroughly cleans deep.
38 Get dramatic results... without drastic Dramatic √
measures. Drastic √
39 Olay regenerist micro-sculpting cream Anti-Ageing √
hydrates to begin working at the first touch
and provide continued anti-aging results
over time.
40 Your best beautiful Best √
Beautiful √
41 Impeccable yet 100% undetectable Impeccable √
coverage. Undetectable √
42 Our unique a micro-concealing formula Unique √
covers completely, yet is 12x thinner. Thinner √
Adjective Positive Negative
Total 50 12
Percentage 80.6% 19.4%

95
APPENDIX 4

SEMANTIC ANALYSIS: FIGURES OF SPEECH

No Figure of Speech Other General


Clauses Personification Hyperbole Alliteration Repetitio Rhetorical Technique
n Device
AA + BB = CC √
Anti Aging + Beauty Balm
= Color and Correction
Fight 7 signs of aging √
over time while providing
instant coverage for
flawlessly beautiful skin.
Love the skin you’re in √
Our 1st luxurious oil- √
infused lotion.
Beautifies like an oil, √
moisturises like a lotion.
Introducing Oil Beauty; a √
lightweight moisturising
lotion enriched with 4
beautifying oils.
Skin is visibly √
transfromed from the 1st
application for softer,
smoother and more

96
radiant looking skin with
non-greasy touch.
In our study, 80% agreed √
their skin has never
looked so beautiful.
Take care √
Brighten up your skin √
naturally.
You need to try this! √
It’s brilliant even for √
sensitive skin!
Brighten up your skin √
naturally with new simple
iluminating cream.
No artificial perfume or √
colour. No harsh
chemicals that can upset
your skin.
Just a brilliant √
combination of skin-
loving vitamin and light-
reflecting mineral,
formulated to reveal your
skin radiance, instantly
and naturally.
It’s perfect even for √
sensitive skin.

97
Sensitive skin experts √
48 hours of shining hair. √
Glowing even after a √
night of fun.
Blended for britain, for √
gorgeus hair that’s full of
life
The marvellous √
transformer.
Transform your dull, √
lifeless hair into glowing,
silky locks with an
opulent blend enriched
with exquisite argan and
indulgent camellia oils.
Take care √
Hair looks thicker wash √
after wash.
Helps expand the hair √
fibre.
The science behind √
thicker hair: filloxane.
Penetrates into the fibre. √
Helps increase hair’s √
diameter from within.
Fibrology gives a √ √
cumulative effect, wash

98
after wash.
Hair looks & feels thicker √
with luxurious body and
bounce.
Because you’re worth it. √
Seriously seductive shine. √
Afterglow included. √
With natural argan oil. √
Go for dull-beam gleam. √
Herbal Essebces √
Moroccan My Shine
shampoo and conditioner
with argan oil will take a
shine to your hair like you
wouln’t believe.
Time to shine/ ye, yes, √
yes!
Say yes to naturally √
irresistible hair
Bye, bye, breakouts. √
Clearer skin in one week √
when used together.
Biore deep cleansing pore √
strips + pore unclogging
scrub.
When used togeter, this √
dynamic duo purges pores

99
to reduce acne,
blackheads, and
breakouts.
Because cleaner, visibly √
healthier skin starts with
your pores.
Free your pores. √
Naturally Beautiful √
Results.
How smooth are you? √
Be extraordinary. √
Protect it. Sleek it. Own √
it.
Sleek it. √
Iron straight heatspray. √
Professional-grade √
formula 3 days of fizz
control and heat-styling
protection up to 450o
Because you’re worth it. √
I will never let a dark spot √ √ √
steal my spotlight.
Olay Regenerist √
Luminous Collection with
Skin Energizing Complex.
Renew surface cell to √
even skin tone and reduce

100
the appearance of dark
spot.
See √
bright,pearlescent,healthy-
looking in just 2 weeks.
Your best beautiful √
This isn’t cleanser. √
It’s a skin exfoliator, √
refiner, pore minimizer
and a cleanser.
Neutrogena pore refining √
exfoliating cleanser does
so much more than clean.
Microheads actually √
polish and refine skin’s
surface.
While clinically proven √
alpha + beta hydroxy
thoroughly cleans deep.
For visibly reduced pores √
that can lock up to half
their size.
#1 Dermatologist √
Recomended Skincare.
Get dramatic results... √ √
without drastic measures.
Olay regenerist micro- √

101
sculpting cream hydrates
to begin working at the
first touch and provide
continued anti-aging
results over time.
Your best beautiful √
Discover the wonder. √
Impeccable yet 100% √
undetectable coverage.
New Dream Wonder √
fluid-touch foundation.
Our unique a micro- √
concealing formula covers
completely, yet is 12x
thinner.
Maybe she’s born with it. √ √
Maybe it’s maybelline.
Figure of Speech Personification Hyperbole Alliteration Repetitio Other General
n Rhetorical Technique
Device
Total 21 11 5 7 7 26
Percentage 27.3% 14.3% 6.5% 9.1% 9.1% 33.7%

102
BIBLIOGRAPHY

Abraham, M. H. 1998. A Glossary of Literary Terms. Seventh Edition. ---:


Cengage Learning

Arens, William F., and Bovée, Courland L. 1989. Contemporary Advertising.


Homewood: Irwin

Berlo,D. K. 1960. The Process of Communication: An Introduction to Theory and


Practice. New York: Holt, Rineheart & Winston

Bernstein, David. 1974. Creative Advertising. London: Longman

Blakeman. 2005. The Bare Bones of Advertising Print Design. Maryland:


Rowman & Littlefield

Burnett, J., Well, W., and Moriarty, S. 1998. Advertsing Principles & Practice.
Fourth Edition. New York: Prentice_Hall International

Cook, Guy.1996.The Discourse of Advertising.London:Routledge

Creswell, J.W. 1994. EducationalResearch: Planning, Conducting, and


Evaluating Quantitative and Qualitative Research. Boston: Pearson
Education, Inc.

Crystal, D. and Davy, D. 1969. Investigating English Style. London: Longman.

Davis, Alan andElder, Catherine. 2004. The Handbook of Applied Linguistics.


United Kingdom: Blackwell Publishing Ltd

Delin, A. 2000. The Language of Everyday Life. London: Sage

Eggins, S. 1994. An Introduction to Systemic Functional Linguistics. London:


Pinter Publisher Ltd.

Eggins, S. and D. Slade. 1997. Analysing Casual Conversation. London: Cassell.

Gerot, L. and Wignell, P. 1994. Making Sense of Functional Grammar. Sydney:


GerdStabler.

Goddard, Angela.2002.The Language of Advertsing: Written


Texts.London:Routledge

Halliday, M.A.K. 2004.An Introduction to Functional Grammar.3rd Ed, revised


by C. M.I.M. Matthiessen. London: Arnold.

102
103

Halliday, M. A. K. and Hasan, R.1976.Cohesion in English (English Language


Series).London: Longman

Halliday, M.A.K. and Hasan, R. 1985. Language, Context, and Text: Aspects of
Language in a Social-Semiotic Perspective. Victoria: Deakin University.

Heigham, J. And Croker, R.A. 2009. Qualitative Research in Applied Linguistics:


A Practical Introduction. Hampshire: Palgrave Macmillan.

Hermerén, Lars. 1999. English for Sale: A Study of the Language of Advertising.
Lund: Lund University Press

Jefkin, F. 1976. Adevrtisement Writing. Suffolk: Macdonal & Evans Ltd

Keraf, Gorys. 2009. Diksi dan Gaya Bahasa. Jakarta: PT Gramedia Pustaka
Utama.

Kress, G. 2010. Multimodality: A Social Semiotic Approach to Contemporary


Communication. New York: Routledge

Kridalaksana, Harimurti. 2001. Kamus Linguistik. Jakarta: Gramedia Pustaka


Utama

Lakoff, G and Johnson, M. 1980. Methapors We Live By. Chicago: The


University of Chicago Press

Lee, Monlee and Johnson, Carla. 2007. Prinsip-Prinsip Pokok Periklanan dalam
Perspektif Global. Jakarta: Kencana

Leech, Geoffrey.1969.A linguistic Guide to English Poetry.London:Longman

Leech, Geoffrey.1972 [1966]. English in Advertising: A Linguistic Study of


Advertising in Great Britain (English Language Series).London:Longman

Leech, Geoffrey. and Short, M.H.1981.Style in Fiction: A Linguistic Introduction


to English Fictional Purpose.London:Longman

Li, Min. 2009. The Stylistics Analysis of the Magazine Advertisement ---Atkins
Chocolate Chip Granola Bar. Asian Social Science. 5/9: 63-69

Nunan, D. 1993. Introducing Discourse Analysis. California; Penguin English.

McQuail, Dennis. 1987. Teori Komunikasi Massa. Second Edition. Jakarta:


Erlangga

Mujiyanto, Y. 2011. Petunjuk Penulisan Skripsi. Semarang: UNNES Press.


104

Myers, Greg.1997.Words in Ads.London:Hodder Arnold

O’Guinn, T., Allen C., and Semenik R. J. 2009. Advertising and Integrate Brand
Promotion. Fifth Edition. Ohio: South-Western, Cengage Learning

Simpson, P.2004.Stylistics: A Resource Book for Students.London:Routledge

Sudjiman, Panuti. 1990. Kamus Istilah Sastra. Jakarta: Universitas Indonesia

Suharso. 2006. Qualitative Research: A Compilation of Materials. Yogyakarta:


Universitas Negeri Yogyakarta.

Verdonk, Peter. 2002. Stylistics. Oxford: OUP

Vestergaard, Torben. and Shroder, Kim. 1985. The Language of Advertising. New
York: Basil Blackwell Inc

Widdowson, H. G. 2000. Linguistics. Oxford: Oxford University

Wing Jan, L.2001.Write Ways: Modelling Writing Forms.Melbourne:Oxford


University Press

---. 2014. ---. Cosmopolitan Magazine

You might also like