Instructions:

Read and understand each and every words, phrases, and sentence construction.,
Correct or edit the spelling, grammar, alignments, spacings, and the punctuations that
were mistakenly written. In this paper, you have to find 50 mistakes in the Unedited
Document. Make sure that you will use MS Word where you will copy, paste, and edit
this. Include the whole document in your file and put a number to indicate the edited
part. Each of the paragraphs has its mistakes. (40 x 2 + 10 points)
Type of Report/Paper: Academic Paper (Formal)

Example:
Unedited

rapid technologecal advancemment encreases it’s uses. Technically, the development of ideas for
product was easier to operating. The company will be using social media to Effectively promute the
busines Edited

(1)Rapid (2)technological (3)advancement (4)increases (5)its uses. Technically, the development of ideas
for product was easier to (6)operate. The company will be using social media to (7)effectively
(8)promote the (9)business (10).

UNEDITED DOCUMENT

Introduction

Problem & Uses

Pots are dated to have existed as far back as the egyptians in ancient egypt, as they were
the first civillization to make use of containers for their plants. Today, their are various
interrpritations of how pots are made, and now, this business proposeal is introducing a
different variation – a pot for plants made from used face masks, known as the pot o’
mask?

As grade 12 humanities and social sciences students have collectively decided to

produce a business plan that is line with the strand and the main focus- socially driven
issues.
One of the most highlighted issues today is the covid-19 pandemic, and how people
have adjusted in living with it. This includes the using of face masks in daily lives, as it
lessens the chance of infection using the filterred varrier of the product. Thus, this is
the issue that was chose to find a solution to combat the mass & improper disposal of
singular use face masks.

pot o’ mask, as the product is titled, is a combination of two words: Pot, which is the
vessel for plants, and Mask, which is what the product will be completely made of. The
target market of this business are plantitas, plantitos, simply plant-loving customers,
and ennvironmentally conscious people.

Business Concept and Business Model

Business Concept

The Pot O’ Mask’s objective is to provide eco-friendlier pots for plant owners
toughhrough the process of repurposing used face masks, which are discarded in great
amnouts every day, into simple yet effective vessels for everyone to place their beloved
greenery. The customer will be supporting the business of recycling and reuse, which
are vital actions to take for a long-term solution on the growing piles of waste found in
communities!

SWOT Analysis

The SWOT analysis provides the Pot O’ Mask’s Strengths, Weakneses, Opportunities,
and Threats. Each aspect is the percieved factors the company has come up with after
much considerator and research. The SWOT analysis focuses on the micro aspects of
the business, which is the inside job of the business plan.

STRENGths
The strength is Pot O’ Mask is a modern, hip take on putting beloved plants in
alternative pots and being environmentally aware during the pandemic. It is a youthful
creation that stands out from the rest of the market. It is environmentally friendly, and
is a specific pandemic-based solution, making it very timely and relevant. Alternative
products made for Eco friendliness is always good.

WEAKNESES

The weaknes lies with the effort of gathering the used face masks outside of residences,
time consuming productioning, and competitioning within the existing pots market
where their are tough players and may not garner consumerism from plant lovers. It is
also new therefore nonestablished and used face masks may be of issue to many.

OPPORTUNETIES

There is opportunety in the novelty of the product, and a different variation of a

practical item in life is bound to catch attention. There is a rising trend of green
products, and it is an advantage. The world are still focused on pandemic effects and
solutions, so the product fits very well.

THRETS

The threts lie within the main material used – the facemasks. The facemasks well be
thoroughly sterillized, and all the materials involved, but there’s still skepticcism in the
minds of the customer if it’s saniteary to use facemasks at all. The market are already
filled with stable competitors and will be tough to stand against. It is also a wanted item
for consumers, but it is not a necessary need for daily life.
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Introduction

Problem & Uses

Pots are dated to have existed as far back as the (1) Egyptians in ancient (2) Egypt, as
they were the first civilization to make use of containers for their plants. Today, (3)
there are various (4) interpretation of how pots are made, and now, this business (5)
proposals (6) are introducing a different variation – a pot for plants made from used
face masks, known as the pot o’ mask (7).
(8) The (9) Grade 12 (10) Humanities and (11) Social (12) Sciences students have
collectively decided to produce a business plan that is line with the strand and the main
focus- socially driven issues.
One of the most highlighted issues today is the covid-19 pandemic, and how people
have adjusted in living with it. This includes the (13) used of face masks in daily lives,
as it lessens the chance of infection using the (14) filtered (15) barrier of the product.
Thus, this is the issue that was (16) chosen to find a solution to combat the mass &
improper disposal of singular (17) used face masks.

(18) Pot (19) O’ (20) Mask, as the product is titled, is a combination of two words: Pot,
which is the

vessel for plants, and Mask, which is what the product will be completely made of. The
target market of this business are plantitas, plantitos, simply plant-loving customers,
and (21) environmentally conscious people.
 Business Concept and Business Model

Business Concept

The Pot O’ Mask’s objective is to provide (22) eco-friendly pots for plant owners (23)
throughout the process of repurposing used face masks, which are discarded in great
(24) amounts every day (25), into simple yet effective vessels for everyone to place
their beloved greenery. The customer will be supporting the business of recycling and
(26) reusing, which are vital actions to take for a long-term solution on the growing
piles of waste found in communities (27).

SWOT Analysis
The SWOT analysis provides the Pot O’ Mask’s Strengths, (28) Weaknesses,
Opportunities, and Threats. Each aspect is the (29) perceived factors the company has
come up with after much (30) consideration and research. The SWOT analysis focuses
on the micro aspects of the business, which is the inside job of the business plan.

(31) STRENGTHS
The strength is Pot O’ Mask is a modern, hip take on putting beloved plants in
alternative pots and being environmentally aware during the pandemic. It is a youthful
creation that stands out from the rest of the market. It is environmentally friendly and is
a specific pandemic-based solution, making it very timely and relevant. Alternative
products made for (32) eco-friendliness is always good.

(33) WEAKNESSES

The (34) weaknesses (35) lie with the effort of gathering the used face masks outside of
residences, time-consuming (36) production, and (37) competitions within the existing
pots market where (38) there are tough players and may not garner consumerism from
plant lovers. It is also new therefore (39) non (40) established and used face masks may
be of issue to many.
(41) OPPORTUNITIES

There is (42) opportunity in the novelty of the product, and a different variation of a
practical item in life is bound to catch attention. There is a rising trend of green
products, and it is an advantage. The world (43) is still focused on pandemic effects
and solutions, so the product fits very well.

(44) THREATS

The (45) threats lie within the main material used–the facemasks. The facemasks (46)
will be thoroughly sterilized, and all the materials involved, but there’s still (47)
skepticism in the minds of the customer if it’s (48) sanitary to use facemasks at all.
The market (49) is already filled with stable competitors and will be tough to stand
against. It is also a wanted item for consumers, but it is not a necessary need for daily
life.