Editing writing

Exercise: Decide whether the following paragraphs are well-structured by examining the following:
1. The topic sentence: Does it have a topic and a good controlling idea?
2. The supporting sentences: Are all the sentences in this paragraph related to the topic sentence?
3. Grammar, spelling, choice of words, punctuation.

Paragraph 1:

Firstly,english is the most important language. Because, it's the language of the

world. Also we need it in most important varieties of our life for example
nowadays most jobs require the employee to know and understand the english
language. Similarly english is used when studying business , science ,academia
, which shows how popular and important the languages. On the other hand,
when you travel to froigen country there is a large percent of the people there
that don't understand your language , but there is a high chance they know the
english language. So,the english is so important that it could make your future
with it or ruin it without it.

Paragraph 2:

Today, english is the most widely spoken language in the world, so it is very
important to learn it, there are so many benefits of learning English, firstly with
the most beneficial point,it is an international language so it will helps you
communicate with others, in work ,in meetings, and even when you travel,
especially if it is a foreign country, countries that don’t speak your language, it is
required in most of the jobs, to ensure getting employed in a first class job you
must speak it, plus it is a fun and easy language. 

Paragraph 3:

Learning English has so many benefits nowadays for so many reasons. English
is the world’s most widely spoken language due to colonialism, it is recognized
as an official language in a total of 67 different countries, out of  the world’s
approximately 7.5 billion inhabitants 1.5 billion speak English which makes it
20% of the Earth’s population. Therefore, it is required in so many jobs ,and
used as an International language that connects us all, especially when it
comes to traveling and communicating with other people that don’t speak your
own language, they always know some English . Also, English has no specific
accent and very simple grammar which makes it versatile.