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Blancia STEM 11 Alvior

EAPP (week 2)

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1. D
2. B
3. B
4. B
5. C

Activity 2:

Ways to make Breaking up Easier
~ © Sara Bedwell~

Breaking up with boyfriend or girlfriend can be easier said than done, but here are five steps that may
help the breaking up process. First, try to distance yourself by suddenly becoming busier than usual. The
next step is to calmly tell the other person how you are feeling. Then gently let him or her know that you
do not want to be together anymore. Then. Make sure to be sensitive of his or her feelings and answer
any questions that he or she may have. For example, if the person starts to cry , use kind words to help
him or her. After everything is said and done, take some alone time fir yourself because everyone has
feelings to sort out after a break up. , go out with friends and meet new people. With these five steps it
will make the breaking up process smooth for both parties.

Information:

Breaking up with boyfriend or girlfriend can be easier said than done, but here are five steps that may
help the breaking up process.

First, try to distance yourself by suddenly becoming busier than usual. The next step is to calmly tell the
other person how you are feeling.
Then gently let him or her know that you do not want to be together anymore.
Then. Make sure to be sensitive of his or her feelings and answer any questions that he or she may have.
For example, if the person starts to cry , use kind words to help him or her.
After everything is said and done, take some alone time fir yourself because everyone has feelings to
sort out after a break up.
Finally, go out with friends and meet new people. With these five steps it will make the breaking up
process smooth for both parties.


Traffic Accident
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Traffic accident occurs because of several reasons, three of them are the most significant causes of it.
One of the main reasons of traffic accident is careless drivers. Some drivers ignore the traffic rules such
as traffic lights and other warning signals. Moreover, they resist wearing seatbelts. In addition, some
drivers drink alcohol while or before driving. Another cause that results in traffic accidents is weather
conditions. Drivers tend to lose the control of the car on icy, wet, or slippery roads and this gives rise to
traffic accidents. Too many cars also lead to traffic accidents. When there is traffic , some drivers tend to
become nervous, and they become more error-prone. As a result of their mistakes, traffic accident
happens.
To sum up, careless drivers, weather condition, and too many cars cause traffic accidents. Drivers should
take all these into consideration, if they do not want to have an accident.

Information:

Causes: One of the main reasons of traffic accident is careless drivers
In addition, some drivers drink alcohol while or before driving.
Another cause that results in traffic accidents is weather conditions.
Effect: As a result of their mistakes, traffic accident happens.

Activity 3:

There is nothing I do not understand.

Activity 4:

Partner’s Name:

Specialization:

Title of the Activity:

Title and author of the Text structure, Ideas that needs Recommendation:
chosen academic text: transition words, used improvement
and information
gathered.

Additional remarks:


Activity 5:

Text B is in chronological order. It conveys the timeline of the Pennsylvania’s interesting events

Text B
Through the years, Pennsylvania has seen many interesting events. The state was found in 1681 by
William Penn. Later, Pennsylvania was the site of important revolutionary war battles. After that,
Pennsylvania was home to new factories during the industrial revolution. Today, Pennsylvania
continues to make history.









































Activity 7:

Partner’s Name: Earl Noah Paniagua
Specialization:
Title of the Activity: Clique, Critique, Share

Sample of Sentence Idea Needs to be Improved Recommendations
Tentative statement 1. The idea is good, and I 1. Though the idea is good, as I
1. Recent trade war think it contains have read the text, I noticed
between America and accurate information. that he did not use tentative
China has led statements like appears to,
immediately to low would seem to. So I recommend
sales of Apple products using a tentative statement. Be
in 2019. Gradually cautious in your claim unless
Huawei smartphone has proven or established beyond
become popular in doubt or debate.
China close to 2 billion
people market, leaving
iPhone and other Apple
products doing catch-up
in that part of Asia.

2. Deam took a deep 2. Regarding item number 2. The same mistake was made
breath and crept a few 2, I don't think I can in number 2. He still did not use
tentative steps into the comprehend what the tentative statements. I also
darkness. He couldn’t main point is, hence the recommend stopping the same
go home and let Sarah entire text needs to be words in every sentence
and Connar see how improved.
tentative his composure
was. Cynthia Bryce
answer in a tentative
voice on the first thing.
Full forms of words 1. The idea is good. 1. Only full forms of words
1. Unemployment figure are used, not
wasn’t improve until contractions. It should
the economy is stronger be was not instead of
wasn’t.
2. In the end, we all felt 2. I think he needs to 2. Although he did not use
like we ate too much. make his idea more contraction words, I still
precise and detailed. suggest the same with
number 1.
Normalized Phrasing 1. The idea is good. 1. His example is good, so
1. Crime was increasing I do not have anything
rapidly and the police to recommend.
 were becoming
concerned.

2. Germany invaded 2. The idea is good. 2. He did not use
Poland in 1939. This normalization in his
was immediate cause of text. I suggest making it
the second world war one sentence instead.
breaking out.
Passive voice
1. At dinner, six shrimp 1. In my opinion, the 1. I recommend to use the
were eaten by Harry. entire sentence has to passive voice more.
be changed and made
more precise.

2. The book has already 2. I too have the same 2. I too have the same
been discussed. response for number 2. response for number 2.
Third person pronoun

1. They looked happy 1. 1. I believe the concept 1. I do not have any
while playing outside. to be sound. recommendations
2. I too have the same 2. I too have the same
2. He is not feeling well. response for number 2. response fir number 2.
No cliches, redundant words, or
colloquialism

1. She was running around 1. I think the idea is okay. 1. I recommend to avoid
like a chicken with her using cliches.
head cut off.

2. It was a major 2. I too have the same 2. Avoid using redundant
breakthrough new response for number 2. words.
invention and it is an
unexpected surprise to
the word.