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Primera Lengua Extranjera II

2º Bachillerato de Humanidades y Ciencias Sociales

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 Can our habits have an effect on the environment?

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In this day and age, our world and all of us we have a big problem with the environment,
climate change, global warming and in general with the care protection of our world.

To start with, I think obviously our habits can have a big effect impact on the environment and
we need to change this. First of all, we can do something basic like recycling or take the bus to
school, and on top of that, we can help explaining this to other people. All of us know
(understand/are aware) this problem, nevertheless the majority don’t do anything, and as a
result, if we don’t do something (if we don’t act on it or if we don’t stop this) to change this
situation, our world and future generations will have problems.

In conclusion, our habits can affect very much on the environment, but also if everyone does
their part, our will destiny can change it together and future generations will thank us.

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What kind of job would you like to have in the future?
(At first sight) At first glance, the majority of teenagers today know for sure the job they would
like to have in the future. Instead of this, young people don't really know what they like.

In fact, as far as I am concerned, I don't know what career or job I would like to study or have
in the future, and in less than two weeks I will have to choose a career that I don't know if I will
like. I think that the principal reason is our educational system.

I would like this to change and future generations know in advance what they would like to
study and have no doubts when choosing what they want to be in the future.

Is it important to have a healthy lifestyle?

Many people argue that to have a healthy lifestyle isn’t important and they don’t know the
really importance of that, all the same some persons (other people) are very concerned about
that.

From my point of view, all of us should do basic things like sleeping eight hours in the night
more or less, eat a Mediterranean diet, do exercise at least two days a week or don’t drink
excessive alcohol (alcohol excessively), instead of this, people prefer to do the opposite. To be
honest, as far as I am concerned, I don’t follow all these rules, but I have to learn that this is
the right way to have a good lifestyle.

In other words, we should take care of our health and ourselves, because our body could have
problems in future.

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 Are you a devoted admirer of something or someone? / Who do you admire?
In this day and age, many people express their devoted admiration of someone who have a lot
of money and is very rich or is very famous in social media.
As far as I am concerned, I have social networks like Instagram or Twitter, and I follow a lot of
famous celebrities and influencers. However, I’m not a devoted fan of someone famous, I have
admiration to people like my grandmother, who is 89 years old and is still the same wonderful

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woman she was when she was young. I really like her stories about her life as a child, because
she lived in times of Franco and she has suffered a lot.
In conclusion, from my point of view, we should have admiration for our family, and see them
as our favorites influencers.

Do you like popular traditions?

In this day and age (Nowadays), all towns and cities have their own popular traditions and all
of us should try to maintain them so we can share them with our future generations.

As far as I am concerned, in my little town called “La Viña” in Granada, there are some very

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famous festivals like Carnival in February or La Romería in May. When this time comes, all the
habitants of here celebrates it with their families it and have a great time eating and enjoying
together.

From my point of view, all people should maintain the popular traditions of their town or city,
and enjoy them a lot, because they are a very important sign or essence of the place where
you live.

Do you like cartoon movies?

Initially, watching cartoon movies might seem things (about) of children, but many people
argue that they enjoy a lot watching them with their kids or even sometimes alone.

As far as I am concerned, I love and enjoy a lot watching films or series about different genders
and obviously watching cartoon movies with my friends or my family because we have a great
time laughing together. Watching these movies, it is like going to the past and being a kid
again.

From my point of view, with cartoon movies all of us can learn many things like in “The Beauty
and the beast” that reflect the importance of not judging others, and furthermore in others
you can laugh a lot with many scenes like in Shrek.

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 Why is Andalucía so attractive for tourists?
Nowadays, most people share the view that Andalucía is the place that tourists consider the
best in our country.

This is undeniable, Andalucía has eight very different communities each. For instance, Granada
is very famous for La Alhambra, an amazing monument or Almeria that has incredibles
beaches.

It is believed that the habitants of Andalucía aren’t actives or good person because of our way

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to talk, but this is not true, instead of that, we are the opposite.

Last but not least, Spain is in general very attractive for tourists, our gastronomy, our places
and even our way of live.

Takin everything into account, I strongly believe that tourists are very important to the
economy of Spain and we should thank them.

Do you like music? What type of music do you like best?

Most people fail to realise that music is very important in our diary life, but nevertheless there
are others who listen to music all days.

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Firstly, it is widely known that music calms to fairs, instead of this, some people don’t listen
music in any situation.

In spite of this, there are many types of music, such as reggaeton, classic music, rock, pop, jazz,
gospel and even music for all ages.

Last but not least, there is a type of music for each specific situation, for instance, if someone
is tired or stressed, they will prefer calm music to relax, or if they are very happy will prefer
reggaeton to enjoy it even more.

Taking everything into account, I strongly believe that listen to music is essential for all and as
far as I am concerned, I enjoy a lot doing that, no matter the situation.

Advantages and disadvantages of living in a rural area.

Would you like to be a celebrity?

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