Hướng dẫn làm bar chart: https://www.ieltstutor.

me/blog/bar-chart

Given is the bar chart comparing the percentage of resident’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last four

weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart) in Australia.

Overall, it is clear that going to café for coffee or tea was the most popular habit in most cities, while buying fresh coffee

was the least popular in each city.

In term of Sydney and Melbourne, while the percentage of Sydney’s people drinking coffee or tea at a café was about 61%,

the figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at around 63%. Meanwhile, above 45% of citizens in both Sydney and

Melbourne had a habit of using instant coffee, whereas the proportion of those purchasing fresh coffee in these two cities

were around 44% and 42% respectively.

Looking at the remaining cities, having coffee or tea at a café accounted for the largest percentage of residents in Hobart,

followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, at 51% and 49% respectively. At the same time, the percentage of people buying
instant coffee in both Brisbane and Hobart, at around 53%, compared to nearly 50% of those in Adelaide. Finally, the

percentage of people buying fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide, at nearly 35%, while Hobart’s figure was higher, at

roughly 38%.

=> Bài này gần như là đưa toàn bộ số liệu thô vào rồi. Mình viết vậy bài sẽ không được đánh giá cao nhé, cần chọn

lọc thông tin kĩ càng hơn (tập trung vào số liệu cao nhất/thấp nhất của từng hạng mục hoặc của từng thành phố).

Tham khảo: https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/so-lieu-task-one-writing ⇒ Về bố cục bài khá tốt

● Overall:
● Đi đến coffee shop là nhiều nhất (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: going to a cafe to have coffee or tea was the most common habit, except
in Adelaide)
● Số liệu của Melbourn, Sydney khá tương đồng nhau
● Body 1: Mô tả số liệu Melbourn, Sydney (In terms of Sydney and Melbourne)
● Mô tả số liệu “went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks” của 2 thành phố (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: While the percentage of Sydney’s people
drinking tea or coffee at a cafe was about 61%, the figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at around 63%)
● Mô tả số liệu 2 categories còn lại (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Above 45% of citizens in Sydney and Melbourne had a habit of buying
instant coffee, whereas the proportions of those purchasing fresh coffee in these two cities were around 44% and 43% respectively)
● Body 2: Mô tả số liệu 3 thành phố còn lại (Moving on to the remaining cities)
● Mô tả số liệu “went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks” (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Having coffee or tea at a cafe accounted for
the largest percentage of people in Hobart, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, at approximately 51% and 49% respectively)
● Mô tả số liệu 2 categories còn lại: IELTS TUTOR lưu ý nếu bài quá số chữ viết không kịp giờ có thể chọn 1 trong 2 category để đề cập
● Around 53% of people in Brisbane and Hobart chose to buy instant coffee, compared to nearly 50% of those in Adelaide.
● A close similarity can be seen in the percentage of people buying fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide, at around 34% while Hobart’s
figure was higher, at roughly 38%.