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My Vacation with My Beloved People

One day, my sister named Putri said to me that she really wanted to go to the beach. So I promised her
that the next week we would go to Mutun beach in Lampung.

The next week, we prepared everything needed in the morning. We brought some foods and beverages,
such as chocolate wafers, potato chips, water and orange juice. Before going to the beach, I ask our
brother, Bayu, to join us. He agreed to join and we went there together with our parents. We went
there by car. It took 3 hours to arrive there. Then, we bought tickets in the entrance gate. Before
swimming, we changed our clothes first. We swam there for more than one hour. We felt so tired that
we decided to eat the foods that we had brought. Next, three of us created a very big sand castle, while
my parents were enjoying the beautiful scenery there. After that, we decided to go home because it was
getting dark.

On the way home, we still felt hungry. So we stopped at a restaurant to have dinner. I ordered sruit,
Lampungnese traditional food, while my brother, my sister, and my parents ordered fried rice. After
finished eating, we paid our bills. Then, we went home. We arrived at home at 9 o’clock. We were tired
but we were absolutely happy.

1. Berurutan. Alur yang digunakan penulis adalah alur maju, diceritakan dari awal sampai akhir
cerita. Seperti Paragraf pertama peran utama berjanji mengajak berlibur, paragraf kedua
mereka pergi berlibur, paragraf keempat mereka kembali pulang. Alur yang dipakai Alur Maju,

2. Terjawab.
misal : Siapa yang pergi berlibur? Apa yang dilakukan tokoh saya ketika dipantai? Dimana
mereka berlibur? Kapan mereka akan pergi berlibur? Mengapa tokoh saya tidak segera pulang?

3. Chronological order yang terdapat seperti  urutan peristiwa diatur dalam


urutan mereka kejadian dalam waktu, seperti garis waktu. Ini adalah pemilahan tanggal dari
yang terlama ke terbaru, dimana ketika kita melihat atau perlu untuk menempatkan hal-
hal dalam urutan yang tepat. Misalnya pada 3 jam untuk tiba atau pada jam 9 malam. Ataupun
pada minggu berikutnya.  Anda akan mengurutkan apa yang terjadi pada minggu sebelumnya
terlebih dahulu sebelum apa yang terjadi pada minggu berikutnya.

4. Orientation :

One day, my sister named Putri said to me that she really wanted to go to the beach. So I
promised her that the next week we would go to Mutun beach in Lampung.

Events :
The next week, we prepared everything needed in the morning. We brought some foods and
beverages, such as chocolate wafers, potato chips, water and orange juice. Before going to the
beach, I ask our brother, Bayu, to join us. He agreed to join and we went there together with our
parents. We went there by car. It took 3 hours to arrive there. Then, we bought tickets in the
entrance gate. Before swimming, we changed our clothes first. We swam there for more than
one hour. We felt so tired that we decided to eat the foods that we had brought. Next, three of
us created a very big sand castle, while my parents were enjoying the beautiful scenery there.
After that, we decided to go home because it was getting dark.

Conclusion :

On the way home, we still felt hungry. So we stopped at a restaurant to have dinner. I ordered
sruit, Lampungnese traditional food, while my brother, my sister, and my parents ordered fried
rice. After finished eating, we paid our bills. Then, we went home. We arrived at home at 9
o’clock. We were tired but we were absolutely happy.

5. Gtw aku

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