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Overconsumption of energy drinks is an omnipresent phenomenon
among adolescents, they consume energy drinks mainly for two
reasons. to provide them with energy for having the lesson and help
adolescents to reduce stress. With most of the students revising for
their exam until a late hour, they have no choice but to consume energy
drinks or coffee. By consuming these kinds of drinks, it can provide
them extra energy for them to continue to work, but this only last for a
short period of time, they’ll have to consume more and more, and this
makes them addicted to energy drinks, and it also causes very severe
damage to their body as well. The second reason is thatE

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drinks, they can buy them from any convenience store, which let them
buy them easily, and in long term, make this phenomenon become
more severe.

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