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N I Dung Excersise
N I Dung Excersise
1. In the Executive Summary section, the author has provided an overview of the
company and outlined the upcoming business strategies, but in this part, it lacks an
overview of the report's structure. Errors here are called structural errors, making
the report not clear or fluent in terms of purpose and content.
This can be corrected by adding a brief overview of the report's structure such
as:
- This business report is divided into six major parts. To summarize this
report, they are mostly the ….
2. We can see in a sentence or in the "Vision Statement" section that the style of the
text is different from the others, or we can say this is a font error in which the font
is not consistent in the report. People should remember to carefully check and
correct when writing business reports because this problem is usually not difficult
to identify when thoroughly reviewed.
3. We can see that the Ideas in the "Key to Success" section are presented in an
incoherent, long manner, while the "Executive Summary" section needs to follow
to the requirement for being brief but comprehensive. In sentence A, the style
shown is not in accordance with the format of the report (ASAP), and you can see
a spelling error in the word "powerful". The majority of these mistakes are
grammatical, typographical, and formatting errors, so we need to make sure that
the report is professional and true to the purpose of each section.
In this part, we can correct it by:
A -> Every consumer will suggest us to their friends and family, which will be a
powerful ally for our firm in terms of word of mouth marketing.
B -> Knowledgeable, friendly to each customer
C -> Cash on delivery service in UPM.
D -> Deliver high-quality sandwiches for a reasonable price.
2. Company Summary
Company’s Logo
After some discussion, we did some minor alterations to our company’s logo.
The font type and colour of our company’s logo was altered because
customers could not see the clearly since the font colour was yellow which is a
bit bright. The font types we used previously was in calligraphy form.
Therefore, to make the logo clearer to our customers and more attractive, we
decided to change the font type and colour.
Wanpaku Sandwich in the middle represent our company’s name while the
two sandwiches represent clearly the product we sell. For the stall icon, it
means our company is ready to serve and provide good quality products to
our customers.
2.1 Company Background
Our company was established on 28 February 2020 which is our first class of basic
of entrepreneurship (MGM 3180). Our lecturer asking us to form 3 group which
consist 10 to 11 students per group. We were forming group that consist 10
students that are very talented to run the business. After that, we are given 1 week
to decide the type of product that we want to sell. We decided to sell one type of
sandwich. We have decided and came out with a unique company name Wanpaku
Sandwich.
2.2 Company Overview
Company name: Wanpaku Sandwich
Date of establishment: 28 February 2020
Location/ selling area: UPM Area
Type of business: Partnership
Start-up capital: RM 220.00
Product:
Main activities: Manufacturing product, selling product and provide delivery
services
Number of staff:
2.3 Introduction of Product
It has an attractive appearance and is prepared upon orders so it is in a fresh
condition. Moreover, Wanpaku Sandwich is a food with an affordable price for
students.
2.4 Service
We will be taking orders before preparing it and delivering it to our customer
doorsteps so our
customers can enjoy the fresh and best quality sandwich.
- In section ‘’ company logo’’, the font was error, inconsistent with the entire
report. Đây chỉ ví dụ thêm về lỗi font chữ mà chúng ta cần phải cân nhắc kỹ
càng khi viết business report
- In section 2.2 ‘’company overview’’ they didn’t specify the part ‘’Number
of staff’’ and ‘’product‘’ which makes the report incomplete and unclear. In
this case, we need to make sure the components are fully informed, or we
can leave out the parts of which we are not sure or do not have enough
evidence, so that the business report will become professional and
effective..
Công ty chúng tôi được thành lập vào ngày 28 tháng 2 năm 2020, đây là lớp
học cơ bản đầu tiên của chúng tôi về tinh thần kinh doanh.
… là một loại thực phẩm lành mạnh với đầy đủ các chất dinh dưỡng. Nó có
một vẻ ngoài hấp dẫn và được chuẩn bị theo đơn đặt hàng nên nó ở trong
tình trạng mới.
3. We will be taking orders before preparing them and delivering them to our
customers doorsteps so our customers can enjoy the fresh and best quality
sandwich.
Chúng tôi sẽ nhận đơn đặt hàng trước khi chuẩn bị và giao đến tận nhà cho
khách hàng để khách hàng có thể thưởng thức những chiếc bánh mì tươi
ngon và chất lượng nhất.
Tại đây, chúng tôi hứa hẹn sẽ có nhiều lựa chọn sản phẩm với giá cả rất
phải chăng, đáp ứng nhu cầu của khách hàng.
5. We will be doing preorders and providing a delivery service that is available at…
Chúng tôi sẽ tiến hành đặt hàng trước và cung cấp dịch vụ giao hàng có sẵn
tại…
The price of the products must be able to give profits to the company. It is
based on the cost of production with an addition of 15 to 30% of the profit
margin.
2. Để đảm bảo sự hài lòng của khách hàng, chúng tôi đã thảo luận với nhau về việc
nhà cung cấp nào là tốt nhất trong việc cung cấp cho chúng tôi nguồn nguyên liệu
chất lượng cao với giá cả phải chăng.
3. Một nhóm vận hành đảm nhận một số hoạt động liên tục cần thiết cho việc cung
cấp hàng hóa hoặc dịch vụ.
4. Các khiếu nại liên quan đến dịch vụ không đủ năng lực và vấn đề chưa được giải
quyết.
5. Để báo cáo các khiếu nại nhận được liên quan đến dịch vụ sau bán hàng kém
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