PLYMOUTH MARJON UNIVERSITY/ HANOI UNIVERISTY OF SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY

PLYMOUTH MARJON UNIVERSITY/ HANOI UNIVERISTY OF SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY

BA (Hons) International Professional English (2022/26)

IPEF02 DEALING WITH TEXTS 1

PORTFOLIO FEEDBACK FORM

Student Number (Marjon ID): 20218788 (HUST ID) :20224712

Essay questions:
1. You just moved into a new house and can’t wait to share it with your friend. Write a letter to
your friend.In your letter:
 Describe the house
 Describe the neighborhood
 Invite your friend to come and see the house.

2. Reading 1 ends with, “Today millions of people worldwide ride bicycles for transportation,
enjoyment, sport, and exercise.” Describe examples of each of these uses .

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 PLYMOUTH MARJON UNIVERSITY/ HANOI UNIVERISTY OF SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY
BA (Hons) International Professional English (2022/26)

Module code: IPEF02

Module title: DEALING WITH TEXTS 1

PORTFOLIO TASK
Student ID Number
Marjon ID: 20218788
HUST ID: 20224712
Cohort: 2022-2026 (K67)
 RESPONSE 1
Dear An,
I am great and hope same from you. I am writing this letter to give you the great news that I
have recently moved to my new house.
My new house is a terraced house which located in the heart of the thriving metropolis in HN
City.I have a spacious master bedroom as well as two further bedrooms.I also have a modern
state of the art kitchen and dining room.My room is pretty adorable with huge window showing
the view of a football court so literally everyday.I can easily catch sight of handsome boys
playing football and it helps to release my stress and boost my feeling of excitement.In
addition,my room has a simple design but it looks elegant and every time when I com back
home,I can cultivate my sense of relaxation and immerse myself into my own personal space.
The community where I live now has very convenient public transportation, especially buses,
so it is very convenient to go to school by bus. Also, I love the fact that there is a nearby street
full of delicious street food.Moreover, I have known my interesting neighbor-Mrs.Nga. She is a
retired schoolteacher in her late 60s and has lived in our neighborhood for most of her life. She
is a very warm and caring person who is always willing to go out of her way to help others and
is often involved in various volunteer projects and charitable events. Mrs. Nga has a wealth of
life experience and is always willing to share her insights and perspectives on various issues. I
feel fortunate to have her as a neighbor, and I value our friendship greatly.
I would like to announce that my birthday is next month and it would be great if you could
find time to join me for a small party at my house. It starts at 7pm and probably ends around
11:30pm, so I hope it's a good time for you and everyone. There will be a birthday cake,
delicious treats from dad and lots of sweets at the party. Afterwards we can eat and play lots
of fun games. It is our pleasure to welcome you in our new house. You will love it.
Call me if you cannot make it to my party
Hope you hear from you soon, and don’t forget to give my love to all your family.
Yours sincerely,
Tam
 RESPONSE 2
Cycling has become a popular mode of transportation for millions of people worldwide. In
cities and towns, people use bikes to commute to work, run errands, or just get around.
In Berlin in 1930, bicycles accounted for 60% of all trips; by 1950, more than half of all trips
were made by bicycle (Maddox 2001,44-45). Bicycles are a convenient and efficient means of
transportation that can save people time and money, as well as providing them with exercise.
Bikes are also environmentally friendly and produce no emissions, making them a great choice
for those who are concerned about the environment. A recent study in Europe found that
commuting by bike instead of driving once a day can reduce the carbon footprint of
transportation by 67%, Christian Brand, a transport professor at the University of Oxford, led
the research.
For many people, cycling is a source of enjoyment and leisure. People enjoy riding bikes in
parks, on trails, or just around their neighborhood.Biking can be a fun way to spend time with
family or make new friends, as well as a great way to discover new places.Whether you are an
avid road cyclist or prefer mountain biking, there is something for everyone when it comes to
cycling.

Cycling is also a popular sport, with races, competitions, and events held worldwide.
Professional cyclists compete in events such as the Tour de France (around 100 hours of racing
), the Giro D'Italia, and the Tour of California There are also numerous amateur cycling events,
such as charity rides and gran fondos, that people can participate in. Whether you are a
seasoned pro or just getting started, there are plenty of opportunities to get involved in the sport
of cycling.

Finally, cycling is a great way to get exercise and stay in shape. It is a low-impact activity that
provides a full-body workout, making it a great choice for people of all ages and fitness levels.
Cycling can help improve cardiovascular health, strengthen legs and increase endurance, and
can help prevent diabetes, obesity and many other diseases (Buehler et al.2011; Pucher et
al.2010). Additionally, it is a fun and enjoyable way to stay active, and many people find that
they are more likely to stick to their fitness routine when they are doing something they enjoy.

In conclusion, cycling is a versatile activity that can be used for transportation, enjoyment,
sport, and exercise. Whether you are commuting to work, exploring the countryside, competing
in races, or just staying in shape, cycling is a great choice. So why not grab a bike and start
exploring the world today?
References
1. Pucher, J., & Buehler, R. (Eds.). (2012). City cycling. MIT press.

2. Horton, D., Rosen, P., & Cox, P. (Eds.). (2016). Cycling and society. Routledge..
3. Lucía, A., Hoyos, J., & Chicharro, J. L. (2001). Physiology of professional road cycling.
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4. Brand, C., Dons, E., Anaya-Boig, E., Avila-Palencia, I., Clark, A., de Nazelle, A., ... &
Panis, L. I. (2021). The climate change mitigation effects of daily active travel in
cities. Transportation Research Part D: Transport and Environment, 93, 102764.