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William Gomez - Writing exercise (24/01/2023)

William Gomez - Writing exercise

(24/01/2023)
by Cristian Castiblanco

General metrics
1,131 185 10 44 sec 1 min 25 sec
characters words sentences reading
speaking

time time

Score Writing Issues

43 27 20 7
Issues left Critical Advanced

This text scores better than 43%

of all texts checked by Grammarly

Plagiarism
This text seems 100% original. Grammarly found no matching text on

the Internet or in ProQuest’s databases.

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Writing Issues
22 Correctness
5 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
6 Misspelled words
1 Incorrect noun number
2 Punctuation in compound/complex
sentences
3 Incorrect verb forms
2 Comma misuse within clauses
3 Wrong or missing prepositions

3 Delivery
3 Inappropriate colloquialisms

2 Clarity
2 Unclear sentences

Unique Words 39%

Measures vocabulary diversity by calculating
the unique words
percentage of words used only once in your
document

Rare Words 19%

Measures depth of vocabulary by identifying words rare words
that are
not among the 5,000 most common English
words.

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Word Length 4.9

Measures average word length characters per word

Sentence Length 18.5

Measures average sentence length words per sentence

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William Gomez - Writing exercise

(24/01/2023)
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The bar graph shows information about passtimes of people by ages. There are
4
three passtimes activities; the first is Reading, the second is using a computer
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and the third is doing sports and exercise.
6 9 7 8
One conclusión of the graph information is: people between 13-19 prefer spend
more time on the computer, maybe playing games or looking for information on
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the internet. In total they spend 75 minutes per weekend day. Another activity
that these people like to do is practice sports and exercise, they dedícate 60
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minutes per day weekend. In contrast to the previous information, young
12
people between these ages only dedícate 5 minutes Reading every weekend
day.
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Second conclusión of the graph is people between 20-65 age , prefer to do
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sports and exercise (120 minutes per weekend day approximately). Additionaly,
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they only dedícate 25 minutes every weekend day to read a book or spend time
22
on computer.
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Third conclusión shows that people between 65-90 spend more time Reading a
25
book than doing another activities like exercise or typing on a computer. For
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these activities they dedícate only 22 minutes average per weekend day.

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1. the passtimes Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

2. passtimes → pastimes Misspelled words Correctness

3. ages → age Incorrect noun number Correctness

4. passtimes → pastimes Misspelled words Correctness

5. , and Punctuation in Correctness

compound/complex
sentences

6. conclusión → conclusion Misspelled words Correctness

7. that people Inappropriate colloquialisms Delivery

8. prefer to Incorrect verb forms Correctness

9. One conclusión of the graph information Unclear sentences Clarity

is: people between 13-19 prefer spend
more time on the computer, maybe
playing games or looking for information
on the internet.

10. total, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

11. at weekend Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

12. to Reading Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

13. The second Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

14. conclusión → conclusion Misspelled words Correctness

15. that people Inappropriate colloquialisms Delivery

16. that people Inappropriate colloquialisms Delivery

17. age, Punctuation in Correctness

compound/complex

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sentences

18. Second conclusión of the graph is people Unclear sentences Clarity

between 20-65 age, prefer to do sports
and exercise (120 minutes per weekend
day approximately).

19. Additionaly → Additionally, Additional Misspelled words Correctness

20. read → reading Incorrect verb forms Correctness

21. spend → spending Incorrect verb forms Correctness

22. the computer Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

23. The third Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

24. conclusión → conclusion Misspelled words Correctness

25. another activity, other activities Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

26. activities, Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

27. on average Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

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