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Report - Erdal
Report - Erdal
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The impact of Technology on our life
Technology is the application of scienti c knowledge for practical purposes,
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especially in industry.The main purpose to improve the machine ,tool’s
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applicability and capability which can help and make easier to humans life.
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At the beginning of the 18th century Technology is not improved and people life
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is much more tough and hard all working capacity depends on manpower and
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animal’s usage before the 18th century. After industrial evolution and
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development in 18th century people started to found an invented many new
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machines which is make our life much more ef cient and easier.
Firstly people invented steam machines and they used this power for train and
fairy to transportation and carrying heavy loads after that they found textiles
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machines to produce much more eaand high quality clothes and they used
machines for agricultural applications and tan home appliances products, cars,
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construction, telephones, plane, computer ect.all new technological machines
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makes our life much more easier and safe.
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On th other hand Technology is not innocent as we assume, it is created
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addiction and people cannot stop to using technology. After machines
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combined arti cial intelligence and connected with internet and the main
problem is starting because the safety protocol and trustable applications are
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much more important in this phase. Because some of dengrous people using
the technology for crimes such a swindle to innocent people who like to use
technology.
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In conclusion technology is improving by people to make our life much more
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easier and safe, technology creates a lot of bene ts and advantages for people
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but it’s depend of our aims. Nowadays people can use the technology bad ways
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to damage people. Technology will continue to improve and people will invent a
lot of new technological things which will make our life much more safe and
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bad but everything is depends on people aiming.