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by EASTON ENG
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My parents are always telling me, school gives you the keys to the door of
success in the real world, and that you'll need these keys to get into your dream
job but it doesn't even open the correct door knob
It teaches us that if you don't get high grades, you won't succeed
That if you don't meet the expected criteria, you’ll be walking straight into a
stampede
This education system doesn't teach us what's really important for the real
world
It doesn't teach us how to live or how to survive and we go around confused in a
swirl
It taught us that if you spend time with friends and didn't do your work, you're
setting yourself up for failure
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Failure to succeed in life, even though it's all a lie, set up and forcing us to
comply.
They pile us with work to the point where we can't even breath
They never once thought of the other assignments whose existence they don't
believe
We have to memorise useless notes which will be irrelevant once we get a job
We're forced to study for hours to pass a test because they think we'll become
slobs.
So my parents say, to be successful in life, you must thrive and achieve great
things in school. But what about my feelings, and all my fuel.