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by Dale Quadros
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My Mindset
From a very young age, I’ve always been determined and motivated to be the
best at everything I do but this only applies to things I’m passionate about. I’ve
acquired many skills over the years and I’ve mastered them well which I’m
certainly proud of. I feel the key to success in life is always being confident and
taking every opportunity that comes your way. One may have potential, but it’s
useless unless they take action and do everything they can to enhance it. The
real reason why people cannot achieve their dreams is because they lack
discipline and always want to take the easier path but sadly don’t realize that it
will not benefit them in the future.
College Life
My favorite subject in grades 11th and 12th is accounts because I found it easy
to study which helped me to score marks easily. After completing my education
in one of the best schools in UAE, For further education, I would love to go to my
dream university in the USA which is Stanford as I would like to major in
finance. My only worry is I do not know how to cook so settling in a foreign
country is going to be hard as I might often struggle to satisfy my hunger. I can’t
wait to make a bunch of friends but I will make sure to be with the right
company of people because I do not want to follow the wrong path in life after
everything my parents have done for me.
My family expects a lot from me and I don’t mind it at all because I love to keep
pushing myself to be the best and to make my parents proud. Once I’ve
graduated from my dream college I will work as an intern in multiple companies
as knowledge gained from books isn’t enough to apply in the workforce. After
gaining experience which will help me a long way, I will return to my parents
and join my Dad’s company. Carrying my Dad’s legacy and expanding his
business is my goal and I am ready to make sacrifices and do whatever it takes.
I’m not in it for the money but instead, I want to build an exceptional reputation
for myself in the company so that when I look back at everything I’ve done I
want to feel proud of myself for the things I’ve accomplished.
Family Life
People may call me a workaholic but I would like to call myself ambitious. One
might think my end goal is something out of this world and spectacular but it is
as simple as to have a lovely family. Once I start working I would even like to
find the right life partner for myself to have two beautiful children with. I feel
having a family of my own will make my life complete and even better. I’ve
always loved children because of their innocence and cuteness, so to have my
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own children in the future would bring me immense happiness as I would love
to teach them all I’ve learned and see them grow into wonderful people.