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Short Story 1
Short Story 1
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by Aline Rodriguez García
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My first day at wizards school
Many years ago, I began with my wizard classes in the most important school in
Spain, Wizardingland. I was really nervous but terrifically happy with the
situation.
A few days later of start the course, when the students were taking the classes,
I felt very hilarious because a lot of them went to stay with me and the teachers
loved me.
But, one night, when all the people were sleeping, I listened a strong sound and
I decided to investigate it. Fortunately, the sound had been listening by more
people, so I wasn´t aline with the problem.
Surprisingly, another student knew where the sound was been making and he
guided us. The problem was in the bathroom because one student had fainted.
Thanks to God, a teacher knew about first aid and could help him.
Finally, we talked with the family about the fact and the student has been taken
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first care of.Ah, one thing more, Do I say you what was my role in this story?
I was that teacher!