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Elisa Ngo
19 March 2023
Lopatko
WRIT 2
Depression and anxiety are the most common mental illnesses in the world with
approximately 280 million people suffering from depression and 301 million people suffering
from an anxiety disorder. It came to a surprise to me when I found out that there are some other
ways to treat some mental illnesses like anxiety and depression besides psychotherapy and
prescribed medication. That is, the possible treatment of anxiety through vitamin D supplements
if a person has vitamin D deficiency and anxiety disorder symptoms. I translated the research
article, “Vitamin D supplementation improves anxiety but not depression symptoms in patients
with vitamin D deficiency,” into an infographic that is intended to be found online on medical
and health-related websites or web-pages about vitamin D deficiency for individuals who have or
thinking they have vitamin D deficiency with an anxiety disorder, or even people who just have
anxiety. Online accessibility allows anyone to be able to view the infographic, and even printing
the infographic will be useful for doctors’ offices. An infographic format will focus on the key
information from the scholarly article by presenting the content in an organized and simple
manner, in which any person could be able to understand. I created an infographic to be able to
convey the relationship between vitamin D and mental illnesses in order for others, especially
patients with vitamin D deficiency, to become aware of the benefits of taking vitamin D
Before constructing the genre translation, I had to learn some techniques to strategically
read the scholarly paper. Reading its particular sections, including the abstract, introduction,
methods, and conclusion or discussion, first helped me determine the main argument. Rosenberg
advises, “Once you have the main argument you can make wise decisions about which parts of
the text you need to pore over and which you can blithely skim.” (219). This technique guided
me towards which parts of the article I should read and focus on more when I had to constantly
recall the new audience of average individuals who have vitamin D deficiency and anxiety. I
focused on the details of the introduction, procedure, results, and conclusions of the experiment
because this information provided a sufficient summary of the research that was done. Also, I
decided to read less into the specific details of the data, graphs, and analysis of the experiment
since it will not be useful to the new audience of the general public who will not likely
understand or be interested in the numbers. The information that I decided to leave out were
some of the data results of two of the four scale tests, the Revised Social Anhedonia Scale and
the Revised Physical Anhedonia Scale. These tests were not necessary to add into the
infographic since they did not affect the measurements of depression and anxiety symptoms
before and after the control and experimental groups results, as they measured depression in
social withdrawal and physical symptoms. For this infographic, I included the Hamilton
Depression Scale-17 and Hamilton Anxiety Scale-17 since these tests provided the
measurements of anxiety and depression in the patients. Once I identified the major points I
wanted to include in the infographic, I needed to know how I could reflect that information for
I had to summarize the key points of the experiment that were essential for a new
audience of the general public to understand. At first, it was difficult to read the contents of the
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article since it contained complicated scientific terminology that were originally meant for other
academics in the field. I had to recall that when analyzing the article, “...[I] must understand the
context and then [I] must carefully study the ways that the discourse does and does not respond
appropriately to that context.” (Carroll 56). The authors of the article made written choices to use
this formal language as it was appropriate for their intended audience. In the context of the
infographic, however, the new audience helped me realize that the formality of the subject
should be modified in simple terms, but not completely in an informal manner. The information
that I decided to change and include into the infographic were the complex terms from the
article. For instance, I needed to explain the hormones: norepinephrine and dopamine, since the
average person may or may not understand these scientific terms. Additionally, I had to dig
deeper into research on the role and effects of vitamin D, and vitamin D deficiency on the body.
Giving basic contextual information on mental illnesses and vitamin D will help introduce the
A challenge I had when constructing the infographic was choosing what information I
wanted to include since I had the impulse to be as detailed as possible. Due to translating genres,
“...you will have to consider not only form but also audience, purpose, and genre; you will, in
other words, have to consider the rhetorical effectiveness of your writing.” (Dirk 260). As I was
writing down the potential information I should include in the infographic, I remembered to only
keep the information that is relevant to understand the relief of anxiety symptoms in people who
are vitamin D deficient due to vitamin D supplementation. This allowed me to gather some of the
details of the procedure of the experiment and the results of the experiment on the control group
compared to the intervention, or experimental, group after the six months process. Translating
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and choosing the information from the article to an infographic also influences the design of the
new genre.
The layout and design changed from the article to the infographic. The article contained
large amounts of information in paragraphs with graphical and statistical data while the
infographic was strategically organized with sections of minimal amounts of text and visual
representations that were all designed to be in a pleasing color theme. For the infographic, I
decided to keep the color palette simple with blue, orange, white, and black colors, and a few
simple icons that did not block the areas that contained written text. I chose these colors because
I associated mental illnesses with the color blue, which can symbolize sadness and relate to
depression or anxiety symptoms, and vitamin D with the color orange, since vitamin D can be
obtained by sunlight. In color theory, orange and blue are complementary colors, so I thought
that this palette would be aesthetically pleasing to look at. Keeping the headings in large font will
help the reader identify the topic for that section of the infographic and bolding certain words in
each section will highlight the most important information for the reader to remember. The
format of an infographic helps attract the new audience to easily read and comprehend the
information about the possible treatment of vitamin D deficiency as opposed to reading the
The beginning process of designing the infographic was a challenge that I was confronted
with because producing an infographic or visual piece of medium has endless creative
possibilities. I had to research some examples of infographics to be able to know what a good
infographic looks like. This includes looking over medical and health-related infographics, such
as ones for the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, the Anxiety and Depression
Association of America, and on Pinterest. From looking at these references, I learned that
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keeping the format as simple as possible is the best by having a consistent and not overwhelming
color palette, titled sections, simple and straightforward information in each section, and using an
appropriate amount of icons or visual representations in order to not overcrowd the infographic.
This is illustrated in my infographic through the minimal color palette of blue, orange, white and
black, sections divided by clear titles and simple text, and having a few relevant icons that
represent the information being told. These choices keep the whole infographic pleasant to look
Articles and infographics have their own respective rhetorics, language, and design
formats that are appropriate for their intended audiences. Translating between these two genres
has changed my way of thinking and approach a certain format in order to reach a certain group
of people and communicate certain kinds of information that are relevant and appropriate. As for
the infographic, the process of leaving out information, including new information, and defining
difficult terms was necessary to convey the information from the scientific article in order for the
average person to understand. This process of learning how to read a lengthy research article to
find its main points will be a useful tool for future science-related courses. Being able to translate
information from a complex source in a way for anyone to understand will be another useful
tool, not only in the sense of literature or writing courses, but even just explaining information
verbally to an average person. This project made me realize the importance of keeping the
Works Cited
Carroll, Laura Bolin. “Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps towards Rhetorical Analysis.” Writing
Spaces: Readings on Writing, edited by Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky, vol. 1,
Dirk, Kerry. “Navigating Genres.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing, edited by Charles Lowe
Rosenberg, Karen. “Reading Games: Strategies for Reading Scholarly Sources.” Writing Spaces:
Readings on Writing, edited by Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky, vol. 2, Parlor Press,
Zhu, Cuizhen, et al. “Vitamin D supplementation improves anxiety but not depression symptoms
in patients with vitamin D deficiency.” Brain & Behavior, vol. 10, no. 11, 2020.