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BW English Prewritinganddrafting 102322 PDF
BW English Prewritinganddrafting 102322 PDF
Ben Wildermuth
Mrs. Ochs
Kolbe English 8
23 October 2022
I have recently tried some of your company’s products. I am writing to you regarding
your company’s claim that their drinks hydrate people better than water. This does not
seem to be the case, based on my experience. While Gatorade supports energy and
hydration, it can be overly sweet for some people, unlike water. I do think your product
has benefits. I have a solution I would like to recommend. I believe your company would
benefit from creating a Gatorade water drink with extra vitamins, minerals, and
electrolytes. This would greatly help athletes who like the benefits of long-term
I do know that Gatorade offers other low sugar products, however they seem to still have
a strong sweetness to them, along with artificial colors. A solution could be making a
new product called G-Water which has all the same ingredients as normal Gatorade, just
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no sugar or coloring and less flavor. I think that G-Water would be a great product
because it will not make people sick and would provide vitamins, water, and electrolytes
I believe my recommendations and ideas could open a new market for your company and
increase sales. By reducing the sweetness and color, which many associate with
unhealthiness, you would be able to get more people to try your products. Flavored
waters have become very popular recently, such as Hint water, and yours would have the
added benefits of vitamins, minerals, and electrolytes, making it a great choice. I hope
you take some of my ideas for G-Water into consideration. I would gladly meet with you
Sincerely,
Ben Wildermuth
Ben Wildermuth